Your writing has most likely become more Powerful too. When real emotions are engaged, it shows.

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Totally agree with this.... I think as any kind of creative person at some point you will eventually draw on personal experiance and emotion for your work and then it becomes a lot more powerful for others to experiance because you are sharing something with them.. Also the reason why artists can become somewhat "precious" about their work, because they are laying something quite personal out there..

Ohhh dear god... I went into that link and my eyes are burning..... have never read a worse line in all my years of reading and I have read a lot!!!

Absolutely agree with you Morgan, no idea what their editors were thinking!! And by the way I can understand why you would be ashamed but having read some of what you have written there is no need for you to be ashamed... You are fantastic at what you do!!!! And I think someone who really loves books, which were my first love and still my greatest passion!!

Gia, that scene with the photoshoot.... (or anything really with Angelina naked)

Bound, when they first meet on the sofa in the apartment and the bedroom scene later on

Wonderful to find someone telling like it is....

I worked in theatre for many years and it broke my heart and gave me joy in equal pleasures. My work there was not as actor but producer / production manager and after my first year in a semi-pro capacity I learned the harsh truth that if what we put on did'nt please the audience, then no matter how wonderful it makes us feel, it will close after a week... So we worked around this and after some obstacles we produced what I think was far better shows.

That was not me or anyone else compromising our artistic ability, it was simply us realising what people want and if you want to make a commercial success out of any type of art then you need to be aware of what your audience wants.. That is assuming you are doing it for an audience, if not then it is simply for your own pleasure and none of what is said above matters a damn.. However if you are also doing it to please others, especially those unknown to you then you have to trust the editors etc of the world.. After all that is their job and they know far better than most writers do what the public want...

Your result for Pretty Damn Good Sexual Compatibility Test ...

Wild
67% Aggressive and 66% Sensual!

Wow! You really like to put it out there, huh? Scoring high Aggressively and Sensually simply means that you're likely to try new things and are up for truly experiencing your sexual endeavors. In fact, most people fall into this category which you might like to hear. You're less likely to be submissive and don't mind getting down right dirty at times. This does not mean you're a whore! You can be quite Wild in the sack but because of your Sensual side you are much more likely to be choosey of your partners and much more likely to pay attention to your partner as long as you have enough fun.

Golf.... no dont play and would only embarass myself..

Dinner... gotta be Hector Blumenthal (for the cooking), Tennessee Williams (for the conversation), Angelina Jolie and Olivia Wilde (do u have to ask.....)

That first kiss from someone special....

What is, the colour my ass turns after a spanking

Licking

Ohhhhhh, madam of the local brothel?

Guilty

Ever woken up beside someone, thought oh good fuck how drunk was I and snuck out hoping they would'nt wake!!

Thank you to the wonderful Morgan Hawke for the great advice she gives in the forum. I tried to use it here. Also a special thank you to my amazing geeky girl (you know who you are!!!), all those stories you make me tell encouraged me to write again...... Walking through the airport concourse, pushing the unwieldy trolley ahead of me, trying to stop it clipping the ankles of the people...

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This is my first story that I wrote especially for my beautiful lush girl and she encouraged me to publish it. Hope you like it. Sipping nervously from my glass I allow my gaze to wander around the bar. "First timer?" I look up at the bar tender, an attractive brunette in her thirties. "Sorry?" "Your first time in a gay bar, I can always spot the newbies." "Yeah I guess...." "Okay...

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