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Artisan cheeses and fine wine. I'm not even kidding. Like, I'm dead serious right now. Motherfuckin sheep's milk gouda from holland, green table grapes, organic honey and fortified wine.
Yes, I was saying I made the adjustments in a few hours. It actually only took a few minutes to decide how I would fit the product placement into the story. It's a story that I've been thinking about for nearly a year, but I've only recently felt happy enough with the standard of my writing to be able to attempt to write it. As for Nymphwriter being sensitive, I think its due to the fact that the tone in someone's post can be hard to pick up, so if it contains humour, or sarcasm, it can be easily read as something different. I hope you manage to think up a story idea and wish you the best in the competition. Of course you only heard about the comp the day you posted and that same day you thought of your adjustments... Sounds legit. discretiondis·cre·tiondisˈkreSHən/Submitnoun1.the quality of behaving or speaking in such a way as to avoid causing offense or revealing private information. Not sure if crowbarring a backburnered story into a comp theme is the way I would go nor do I think it is in the spirit of competition... but good luck to you.
So shrink her down by 10-15%! Problem solved...(or do you have some experience that you're not telling us :-" ) Laying type isn't as easy as it seems. So her big ass shoulders were in the way... Move them, the collar bones look off now... fix them. It happens. Anything that you pay for is fake as hell. If it wasn't you wouldn't pay for it because you could get it for free on the street. Supply and demand bitches.
You can say what you want the photoshopped version looks better. It looks unnatural and maybe even extraterrestrial, but the buldging in her clothing is gone her silhouette is smother. Additionally have they accentuated some features and given her more color and contrast. It's what you expect from a glossy magazine cover. It's editorial and wouldn't look ok in real life. Almost like editing a rough draft for mass consumption, yeah?
You have to write it! Pretty please? :) Another time Emilia. Another time.
You made these adjustments in just a couple hours? Well that's pretty impressive. You had a story (idea) already, then you heard of this comp and in a couple hours you figured the proper adjustments to make it work for this comp. That is what you are saying? Well that is very impressive. Good luck in the comp! Really, you can't come with a story idea in a few hours? What's wrong with you?. Hell, I get an idea within a matter of minutes, it's just the time I take to hammer it out that makes the real difference. Some authors can plan out a story with in a few hours, but writing might take a bit longer. She didn't say she had it written, just planned. BIG DIFFERENCE.I'm with Sprite on this one dude, you're being a dick, dick. No, I guess I am not good enough to have a story idea ready to start writing right when the comp is announced. I am not that good unfortunately. You're with sprite on this one eh? Yeah, me too. How dickish of me to ask an author their method so I can learn how to have a story, sorry, I mean an idea ready to go right when the comp is announced. It's amazing. Usually takes me a week or more to have a thorough idea down for a comp before I can start writing. Probably why I struggle to get them in on time with only a few days left before the comp closes. I found Jayne having an idea ready to go right at the start when she first heard of the comp to be noteworthy. So I asked her about it, my bad. Not sure why you would be so sensitive about it. I would brag if I were that good.
I've got my story all planned out, so I'm hoping it's going to be easy to write.Super excited about this one!!! Look, not trying to be a dick....But how do you have your story all planned out just a few hours after the announcement? It's just been a few hours.Is this the first you've heard of this comp and you already have a story all planned out? That's pretty impressive. Would like to know that process.
Stupid old asshole will go to a "prison" where he is with other old assholes getting his meds and meals and care in some "prison" that isnt far off from an assisted care facility. Trust me, I volunteered in one for years, it felt like a prison but the old folks were paying thousands a month to stay there and they got to play chess with the likes of me and negotiate me stealing some extra candy for them if they won. They PAID for that. These were stand up people with careers and that was their fate. Sounds like a prison to me... These were ex pilots, teachers, farmers etc... This vomit getting to stay in a similar place just because he's old and weak? And we all get to pay for it? What a joke. He should be tossed to the wolves just like his victims were. Let him realize what he did through his own suffering.
That reminds of a story you told me once. You know, that time you robbed a bank wearing a lime green thong and nipple tassels? You rode in on the back of a sheep that you'd spray painted luminous pink. You were wearing a Patrick Swayze latex mask, and had a gun in one hand and a four-foot inflatable cock in the other. As you stashed all of the money in your revealing undies, you shouted at the top of your voice the most foul obscenities known to man. Before leaving, you took the time to urinate in the potted plant in the corner of the room before turning to the CCTV camera on the wall and nonchalantly saying,"Try recreating that for TV, you fuckers."(Did that really happen?)L x On second thought that might make a better read.The time I robbed a bank was less... Cinematic... Yet, more effective. It involved: Asians, motorcycles, fake identities, ATMs, weak tellers, college students, lies, and balls. I may write that one yet. The sex would be crowbarred in though. I'd come off as a hack.
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