I have loved erotic short fiction for many, many years. I think it's a good way to indulge and explore kinks/fantasies that one might not plan to ever act on (if they're even possible). I finally feel confident enough in my writing abilities to try my hand writing my own. I really appreciate comments...not because of ego, but I just get a kick out of knowing people are enjoying what I'm writing. So, if I've managed to tickle your fancy...please tell me! This might be a silly thing to mention here, but I recently realized that I seem to be leaving entire words out of sentences or not catching dumb typos. This isn't usually a problem, so I might be losing it a little or something. Anyway, if that kind of thing drives you crazy, I apologize, because it does the same to me when I'm reading. Oh, and also, feel free to mock me for excessive adverb usage. I'm trying to break that habit.
Never quite understood it myself...especially since most of the time, it's cock and cock alone...rather than, "here's me naked, and looking theoretically sexy."
I see that all the time at the stores but I am to nervous to carry it to the register! lol! Kinda embarrassing. I still feel that way sometimes...but look at it this way. The cashier can assume all they want about what you're going to do with it. But, for all they know, you're having crazy sex parties at the sorority house down the street or some shit. I like K-Y warming for sex toys (big fan of Tenga)...it may not be the "best" per se, but I think it's the thickest of what you'll find at a local store.
Well - here on lush some of the people come just to read the stories as porn and get off to it. (I'm not complaining - just defining part of the audience) I think I made the assumption this is everyone. Makes perfect sense that it's not though. I'm one of the 3rd. I appreciate it all, it depends on my mood. I love romance, I love erotica, I love a little bit of everything thrown in from suspense to violence (frowned on here at lush) within the story line. ...and if one person feels that way, then so do a thousand others. Well, you weren't inputting the correct search criteria, but then again, you're not the first to either admit such or ignore such. Play on, I say. Please try a bit more - in the future. OK, fine, you got me. I didn't try very hard. And - (not to the original poster) but to the rest of you haters... Fuck off. Why? Because I can. Did I miss something here? For me it depends on the relationship between the characters. If you're writing about a couple in a long-term relationship you don't really need a big lead-up to the sex scene because their relationship is already established. If the story involves characters who've never slept together before I'd generally want to read about how they met and what brought them to the point where their relationship became sexual. There are exceptions to this though, because I've read some good "quickie" stories between strangers where there was no backstory and the sex was hot. I think the main thing is just to make sure there's tension and only add information that helps the story progress, that way your readers will want to keep reading and it won't really matter how much of a build-up you write. That's kind of what I was thinking (although wouldn't have explained it as wel).Thanks for the input!!
Excellent, thank you everyone for the feedback. I just wanted to make sure I wouldn't somehow get myself in trouble. :)
Hopefully this is the right spot to ask this question...If at some point, I choose to publish a collection of short stories as an e-book, is it OK/permissible to use stories I have posted on Lush? Or, do they become property of Lush once I post (like Craiglist)?Related secondary question... If I did publish in an e-book, I would leave any "re-used" stories posted here. Is there an appropriate or "good" way to tell people reading the book that if they saw the stories here, they are not stolen...I just put them in two places?Thanks! :)
Hi!My apologies if this has been addressed before...I haven't come across it yet.Question for you all: What are your preferences and thoughts when it comes to the length of the lead-in to a story? If the primary sexual encounter of the story is the "climax" (punned!), how much is too much when it comes to the non-sexual setting of the stage? I ask because whenever I write something new, I worry that somebody reading it is sitting there going "get to the good stuff already!"My opinion is that I prefer enough lead-in to provide context and detail that makes the "good stuff" seem at least a little bit plausible, and I try to work that into my stories. I feel like providing that kind of content makes the sexual parts hotter.Should I:A) Keep doing as I'm doingB) Keep the lead-in as short as possibleC) Stop worrying about it and just write the damn storyThanks in advance for your input!
“Mark, I think I know what you were up to the other night,” Laura said. Mark’s heart plunked into his stomach, and he tried to sound as nonchalant as possible. “O-oh? What’s that?” “Well, you seem to be awfully friendly with Gail.” “No, we jus-” “Let me finish, Mark. I know we were all drunk and being a bit silly, but I think you might have been taking advantage of that by...
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A couple weeks ago, I found myself on a rather interesting business trip. The long and short of it is that I ended up walking in...accidentally, mind you...on one of my coworkers masturbating. But, a little background before I get to the good stuff. My name is Will, and my aforementioned coworker is Kelli. I'm 33, in the neighborhood of five foot nine, perfectly average looking, with my...
Added 25 Aug 2013 | Category Masturbation
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By the end of summer, Judy's house was fixed, and much to Mark's mixed relief and disappointment, she was able to move home. Not long after, he was once again up to his eyeballs in schoolwork as summer session ended and he was back to a full class load. He was also surprised and delighted to find himself with a girlfriend, a shy and somewhat prudish girl named Nora, by the end of September....
Added 16 Jul 2013 | Category MILF
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After the Book Wagon, life once again returned to normal - school, work, sleep, eat, rinse, repeat. There was one key difference however. Every moment Mark was at home was fraught with a sort of erotically dangerous tension. Not only did he almost constantly think about his experiences with Judy and have to hide erections practically every time they were in the same room, he also had to...
Added 30 May 2013 | Category MILF
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The dinner was quiet and normal. Judy and Mark’s mother Laura carried on an animated conversation, just as she normally did, about bosses, talking about upcoming church events...the usual. Mark made sure to sit in the opposite corner of the booth from Judy and mostly kept to himself, while still smiling and nodding at all the right times. After arriving home for the night, Mark...
Added 06 May 2013 | Category MILF
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Wham! Mark’s Econ II textbook bounced off the wall and fell in a heap on the floor. "Mark, what the heck was that?" his mom, Laura, called from down the hall. "Nothing!" he yelled back. A moment later, she poked her head into his room. "Nothing?" she asked, pointing at the used textbook lying at her feet. "Sorry mom...just sick of this fu...er...this dumb class." She glared at...
Added 29 Apr 2013 | Category MILF
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[Author’s note: Continued from previous stories. Characters may make more sense if you read those first.] Heather walked Miranda down the darkened, glistening streets to her apartment. The mostly quiet stroll was punctuated by short conversations about city life, favorite books, wine drinking habits, and so on. Both women avoided discussion of their strange, budding relationship - not out...
Added 08 Dec 2012 | Category Lesbian
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[Author’s note: This is continued from a previous story, and will probably make more sense if you read that one first. For anyone that enjoyed the previous one, I of course hope you enjoy this follow-up.] Miranda walked down the street in a daze, trying to ignore the lingering wetness between her legs. After her surprising, yet incredibly rewarding experience at the coffee shop, she...
Added 10 Oct 2012 | Category Masturbation
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[Author's note: This is a continuation of another story (linked below). The plot isn't complicated by any means, but it might make more sense if you read the other one first] The week following our romp in Colleen's office was an interesting one. Aside from some sly looks between Katie and I, and the occasional quiet reference to that evening, not much came of it right away. Colleen was...
Added 03 Oct 2012 | Category Group Sex
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[Author’s note: This is a short one that occurred to me as I was sitting in a coffee shop. I tried for a “less is more” approach…no idea if it worked or not. If the feedback is mostly positive, I’ll see about continuing it.] It was a scorching hot day, slightly humid, but mostly just plain old hot. Barely a cloud in the sky, and every surface in the city radiated waves of heat. Wanting...
Added 02 Oct 2012 | Category Masturbation
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