I'm aspiring to be a mainstream novelist which my work will hope to range from young adult to adult work with maybe a few love stories in between.
But if you know the exact changes that need to be made, why not fix them yourself? If it's literally the only thing wrong with your story, waiting for someone to do it for you seems a bit counterproductive, no? Because I honestly don't know where they are and I tried to look at errors a few times I couldn't find anything
I don't understand. You want someone to change the tense of your story for you? Sounds about right
Last night I tried to submit Return of the Rain for publication and got a rejection message saying: Hello, Thank you so much for submitting your story. We are not able to approve it just yet. You switch between present and future tense throughout your story. Once you have changed it to be in the same tense through the entire story, we would be happy to approve it.Please do not hesitate to ask if you have any questions.Thank you and have a great night,Saga I know there is something wrong with the story and I've been trying to talk to some people to see if I could get help with it but so far I got nothing. I'm gonna do the same thing like I did with the prequel story "You Ain't Got Me" if you see anything wrong with "Return of the Rain" don't hesitate to fix it and if you can make a better sex scene than I could don't hesitate to do so either. I will also give you credit like I did on the prior story.I will post the story upon immediate reply of this thread to anyone who wants to see it and I appreciate y'all taking the time to read this message.
Back when this guy first came around when I was still in High School, I tried so badly to give this guy a chance and hopefully have some level of respect for him, but after bad song after bad song and after bad song I just look at him and go "Why is it that I'm the only person who thinks he really sucks without redemption?" the biggest song that turned me off from him completely was none other than: http://www.youtube.com/embed/Lb9q1ScC4cg
http://www.youtube.com/embed/MXp413NynFk Now I would like to go on record as saying that these two guys are good at what they individually do, I think Carlos Santana is a great guitarist and Rob Thomas is a great singer songwriter, but a song as stupid as this one and as overplayed as this one was, everytime I hear this song I wanna put a bullet in my head
This song was basically the demise of a singer who I used to have respect for in childhood, if you were to hear this song and play this against his old stuff you'll have a tendency to go "You son of a bitch" http://www.youtube.com/embed/BKZqGJONH68
Raylene may technically be retired, I know Nina Mercedez isn't, neither is Samantha Ryan, or Teanna Kai for that matter but those ladies are my personal favorite because behind the scenes they all seem very down to Earth for me
http://thinkprogress.org/health/2013/01/04/1398631/hiv-vaccine-breakthrough/A team of Spanish researchers say they have made an important breakthrough in HIV research, developing a new vaccine against the virus that is significantly more effective than earlier attempts. Advancing vaccine research could eventually eliminate the need for the expensive methods currently used to treat HIV-positive individuals.Researchers tested the vaccine on randomly selected HIV-positive individuals who were already taking highly active antiretroviral therapy (HAART) medications, the most scientifically advanced form of treatment currently available to combat the virus. They wanted to see if, rather than simply suppressing the effects of the virus with outside treatment, their vaccine could lead the human immune system to coordinate its own defense against HIV — and they succeeded, seeing some subjects’ HIV viral loads drop more than 90 percent after 12 weeks of the trial: “What we did was give instructions to the immune system so it could learn to destroy the virus, which it does not do naturally,” said Felipe Garcia, one of the scientists in the team at Barcelona University’s Hospital Clinic. The therapeutic vaccine, a shot that treats an existing disease rather than preventing it, was safe and led to a dramatic drop in the amount of HIV virus detected in some patients, said the study, published Wednesday in Science Translation Medicine. The vaccine allowed patients temporarily to live without taking multiple medicines on a daily basis, which created hardship for patients, could have toxic side-effects over the long term and had a high financial price, the team said. “This investigation opens the path to additional studies with the final goal of achieving a functional cure — the control of HIV replication for long periods or an entire life without anti-retroviral treatment,” the researchers said in a statement.The researchers did find that the effectiveness of the vaccination declined after the first year, when patients had to return to their previous HAART treatment. Still, though, they noted this breakthrough is the culmination of seven years of research — and they will spend the next several years working to improve the vaccine even further.Over the past year, the global community has made significant strides forward in its mission to eradicate the HIV/AIDS epidemic. This latest scientific progress builds upon previous research and policy advances that have contributed to better tests and treatments for HIV, better health care for HIV-positive individuals, and ever-increasing life expectancy rates for those living with the virus.
Source: shewired.comBisexual women and gay men face elevated risks of intimate partner violence, according to a new Williams Institute report published in the Journal of Interpersonal Violence.“As Congress considers reauthorization of the Violence Against Women Act and we reflect on Domestic Violence Awareness Month, our report’s findings highlight that these issues also impact the LGBT community,” said Naomi G. Goldberg, MPP, who created the report along with Ilan H. Meyer, PhD, Senior Scholar for Public Policy at the Williams Institute.Among the key findings: * Bisexual women had elevated risks of experiencing intimate partner violence compared with heterosexual women, lesbians and women who have sex with women over the course of the lives and in the past year. But, significantly, in 95% of intimate partner violence annual incidents reported by bisexual women, the perpetrator was a male intimate partner, indicating that the violence occurred outside a same-sex relationship.* Gay men had elevated risk of experiencing intimate partner violence compared with heterosexual and bisexual men, as well as men who have sex with men but do not identify as gay or bisexual. Almost all (97%) of the annual incidents of intimate partner violence incidents occurring to male victims involved a male intimate partner.* Binge drinking and a history of psychological distress predicted intimate partner violence, but these factors did not explain disparities between bisexual and heterosexual women or between gay and heterosexual men.The researchers’ findings are based on a 2007-2008 sample of the California Health Interview Survey. The authors compared patterns of intimate partner violence among four groups: heterosexual men and women, bisexual men and women, gay men and lesbians, and men and women who have had sex with members of the same gender but are not identified as gay, lesbian, or bisexual. The study defined intimate partner violence as physical and verbal abuse, or threats of physical abuse, by a current or former wife, husband, boyfriend, girlfriend, or someone else an individual has lived with or dated.You can read the entire study, "Sexual Orientation Disparities in History of Intimate Partner Violence: Results From the California Health Interview Survey," here. Now for my two cents: hopefully this ain't happening to many of you over here
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As dark as a moonless night Even with all the candles in sight In all her glory she's kneeling down Not even allowed to wear an evening gown There he comes in his usual garb About to play a game of fake harm Acts like this are likely to be looked down Mostly by stupid people who worship a crown While people can look at that act And think of how good that they're a lovely fact ...
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At sundown in the city With gravel thick and gritty You see three red roses on the road One of em crushed but not so dirty Now you may ask yourself How can three red roses be on the road Did they fall off a flower truck during a load Or did kids throw it out the window like yesterdays trash Or maybe just maybe If you wanna go that deep Those roses may have belonged to...
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Unmasking True Love by Seth Millis Hot candlewax and cold steam Two different things That blends together like sugar and tea When your cold kiss hits my hot lips My angry fire dies down And the world will never defeat Hot candlewax and cold steam Every word oozed out of the singer like honey hitting a spoon, as she mesmerized the crowd in that penthouse with...
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Hot Candlewax and Cold Steam by Ginger Foutley and Courtney Foutley In the warmth of the night We only show two lights One in the room of our child We tuck him into sleep Happily content in the comfort of our love In another lighted room We consider a different world A world where no one looks down on us Population you and me With hot candlewax and cold steam ...
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