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Kat
Posted: Friday, July 18, 2008 9:08:17 PM

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coffee
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Saturday, July 19, 2008 3:46:21 PM

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Okay, I'll start it off with a warmup session. Ladies, do not call my house, or stop by unawares. I know this may be intense for some of you, but this one will push all your buttons. There may be those of you who, upon reading this, may collapse into orgasm. It's a risk I am willing to make. Without further ado:

You watched me as I loaded the dishwasher, lovingly rinsing off the dishes before setting them in the racks. The hum of the dishwasher made you smile, and you looked away, your heart beating fast. Later, I caught you touching yourself while I folded the clothes. Your eyes were riveted on me, your mouth open.
It must have been when I cleaned the refrigerator, later that afternoon, which sent you over the edge. I heard you moaning as you passed by, holding your nose. I washed my hands afterwards, and felt your arms wrap around me from behind.

(98 words)
Zafia
Posted: Saturday, July 19, 2008 4:19:42 PM

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love10 WOW!!!!!!!!!


sign5 Oh how I love your delicious amusement Subtle..........laughing3

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





Kat
Posted: Sunday, July 20, 2008 12:27:15 AM

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Not bad, but whitegoods don't do much for me unfortunately. coffee
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Sunday, July 20, 2008 9:28:52 AM

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I was just breakin' the ice. This post is moving slowly. Sometimes humor can bring 'em in.

It's also hard, though, to be put on the bubble in a forum. We are under more of a microscope here.
nicola
Posted: Sunday, July 20, 2008 5:24:14 PM

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That was great ASP, v amusing Lapplause
Curious2c
Posted: Sunday, July 20, 2008 9:15:13 PM

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Her nervousness was compounded by her nakedness. He came up behind her, touching lightly, not sexual, but loving. Soon the loving touch became sexual in nature as his hands slipped around in front of her hot body, fingers brushing her hardened nipples. Hot breath wafting past her ear. His hardness enveloped by her bottom cheeks.

Fingers moved downwards, playing here and there until they delved between the lips of her overheated pussy. Rubbing her clit the first spasms of ecstasy exploded her nerve endings. Breath caught, his lips caressed her neck as his hard cock throbbed between them.



Wow, not as easy as it sounds. How'd I do? 98 words by my count.
Curious2c
Posted: Monday, July 21, 2008 4:02:10 PM

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*sigh*

I'll try some other time when I'm not quite so busy then.


I've got quite a few other stories started and in progress but my time has been at an extreme premium of late. No rest for the wicked I suppose.
ghostwriter
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 5:23:48 AM

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The challenge has been laid down and now I must find the words that will make you lay down and give yourself to me. Is this possible? Can I convince you by describing your soft curves, your wicked smile or how your eyes could make men start wars? Would this insult your intelligence? Should I appeal to you with laughter? Perhaps reminisce about the way you pull back your hair from your eyes in a way that makes me smile. No, this will not work. Rendezvous with me Kat. Let the real seduction begin over time, not a hundred words.
DBarclay
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 2:55:46 PM

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In my best Sarf London cockney accent

Hello darlin, wanna shag ...


who needs lots of words ...lol
mrplow
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 4:04:36 PM

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“Hi darling. You've just got in? There's a bottle of champagne on ice on the table, pour yourself a glass, and take a long hot soak in the tub.

I've booked your favourite restaurant overlooking the harbour. You can wear that black Prada evening dress you had your eye on, it's on the bed with something silky and French to go underneath it. I just had to.

There's a cab coming to pick you up in an hour. Bring your toothbrush, we're staying in the hotel above the restaurant tonight, just like old time's sake. See you there my love.”


100 words. Any good?

ASubtlepassion
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 5:17:07 PM

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We mortals are but shadows and dust. Shadows and dust, Maximus!


Sorry. Got carried away a bit. Watching "Gladiator"...


...but I'll stay tuned to the proceedings here.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 6:41:13 PM

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Oh, there you go. Some worthwhile ideas.

How about:"Can I buy you a drink or do you just want the money?" Seems to turn a woman on sometimes.

Just kidding!
techgoddess
Posted: Tuesday, July 22, 2008 8:43:14 PM

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roccotool wrote:
Oh, there you go. Some worthwhile ideas.

How about:"Can I buy you a drink or do you just want the money?" Seems to turn a woman on sometimes.

Just kidding!


Good thing you adding the "Just kidding!"

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
nicola
Posted: Wednesday, July 23, 2008 12:56:46 AM

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Some good contributions in here.
Guest
Posted: Wednesday, July 23, 2008 6:29:47 PM

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You just wanna smack muh ass, Tech.
nicola
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 12:25:54 AM

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Get a room you 2...
Guest
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 6:18:10 PM

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Who else will accept Kat's challenge?
techgoddess
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 6:25:34 PM

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Lush wrote:
Get a room you 2...


Spoilsport! LOL

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 6:36:32 PM

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I'm having performance anxiety. No, I mean, really. Look what happened to C2C? It could be me next.


"I blew in her ear, and she whispered, 'Let's make a covenant now that will last longer than the brief span of time you are actually hard.'" You see? Kat would eat me alive for using 'covenant' and 'hard' in the same sentence.


Wait. She'd eat me alive? Not bad...
Guest
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 6:54:40 PM

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"She'd eat me alive." In a world, where ear-blowing is everywhere, and sex is down to one hundred words. In an adventure, spanning the universe...

"Hard Covenant" A Subtlepassion Production. Find it at better erotica bookstores everywhere.
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 7:15:03 PM

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Rocco's a natural. If I ever need a literary agent...he'd sell my stories to a church.
LyricalMax
Posted: Thursday, July 24, 2008 10:56:55 PM

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A garish neon sign strobes as I squirm on the creaky bed, naked and alone, sweating in spite of the chill. Your searing kiss lingers on my lips, the scent of your womanhood remains in my nostrils. I shudder as my skin remembers your hardened nipples brushing against me, and I feel the muscles of your womb rippling over my member, engorged and turgid with its own memory of its rightful place. You are not here. But you are in me as I climax in you, screaming your name in my agonizing, blissful release. I sleep, and dream of you.
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 9:05:17 AM

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Quote:
In a world, where ear-blowing is everywhere, and sex is down to one hundred words


That's exavtly what I thought when I saw this thread. Why such a short time?
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 11:03:14 AM

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Not bad...Not bad...Not bad...


I really don't have a clue as to what turns Kat on. We'll keep getting 'not bad's until we finally find out that what did it was being a submissive, and letting her demean us. In a hundred words. lol
Zafia
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 3:36:05 PM

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ASubtlepassion wrote:
Not bad...Not bad...Not bad...


I really don't have a clue as to what turns Kat on. We'll keep getting 'not bad's until we finally find out that what did it was being a submissive, and letting her demean us. In a hundred words. lol


those seem like fightin words......hahaha boxing

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





Kat
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 3:36:55 PM

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chefkathleen wrote:
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In a world, where ear-blowing is everywhere, and sex is down to one hundred words


That's exavtly what I thought when I saw this thread. Why such a short time?


That's what a challenge is ChefKath!

"Performance anxiety" ASubtlepassion? laughing8 I think you win the challenge for that quote alone, made me laugh.

Let me see what else we have, a very short seduction from DBarclay, I think I'll pass. A longer seduction from Ghostwriter - nicely done, except for the start wars cheesy line.

Mr Plow, you didn't strike me as the gentle type, tempting. I'm sure hotels would have a toothbrush.

LyricalMax - I like the dark imagery, and hint at bdsm (or did I just imagine that?).

Thank you for your contributions everyone, that was fun!

I hope you don't think I've been too mean laughing6
ghostwriter
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 9:19:14 PM

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Kat said: I hope you don't think I've been too mean laughing.

Not at all. I must say however that I did tell you that the line about eyes would not work. But I had to throw it in since your avatar does not show your eyes.

What ????? d'oh! You mean that's not really you in the avatar? I mean, that's really me in mine. icon_smile

ASubtlepassion
Posted: Friday, July 25, 2008 10:05:08 PM

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Wow! Ghost, that diet has been working wonders on you. You look, uh, well...what big eyes you have!
mrplow
Posted: Monday, July 28, 2008 11:53:29 PM

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You need to put a bit of weight on Ghostwriter, you look ill.
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