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Posted: Tuesday, January 08, 2013 7:43:09 PM

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Hi everyone,

I'm kit and new to the sight! I would some feedback on any of my writes! I will do the same for you!! Thank you so much!!
overmykneenow
Posted: Wednesday, January 09, 2013 12:37:38 AM

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Well you can start by not using "write" as a noun

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Shylass
Posted: Thursday, January 10, 2013 10:30:51 AM

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Welcome to Lush, Mayza1. sunny

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Guest
Posted: Tuesday, January 15, 2013 3:57:30 PM

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I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are:)
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013 8:46:54 PM

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Mayza1 wrote:
I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are:)

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Guest
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 7:38:25 AM

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Mayza1 wrote:
I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are:)


You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections...
Poppet
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 10:06:52 AM

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LiquidMatthew wrote:
You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections...


You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind? Anxious lol

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Guest
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 10:11:57 AM

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Poppet wrote:


You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind? Anxious lol


If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities...
sprite
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 10:12:28 AM

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Poppet wrote:


You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind? Anxious lol


that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :)
WellMadeMale
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 10:18:24 AM

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sprite wrote:
that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :)





You said... those three specific words - together!

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Poppet
Posted: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 10:18:29 AM

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LiquidMatthew wrote:
If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities...


Ha, Now now.. Don't go making me blush Matthew. ^-^

sprite wrote:
that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :)


I knew it.. It screamed Sprite... xP You can stay.. You tickle my fancy.. ;)

WellMadeMale wrote:

You said... those three specific words - together!


This IS Sprite we're talking about! XP

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