Attention all lusty readers and writers! I have a fun story I have started and thought of using the embellish feature on this site, which I have not seen used much... so this is really a trial for this type of story.

I chatted with a girl (Tiff) about a costume fantasy. She wanted to do one on a gangster moll theme. I bought her a costume and she took pics. That inspired me to write the beginning. She then commented and that led me to write another part, which she commented on, and so on.

Here's a pic of the costume
http://test.torturschloss.com/sites/default/files/images/moll.jpg

It stopped for, perhaps lack of inertia, or perhaps because we got busy with other things. I have seen stories on other sites where someone writes something and then others comment, add, or embellish.

If you want to add something to the story then use embellish. If you feel more comfortable just commenting and voting, then that's fine too. Anything to move the story along.

The basic setting is a gangster 'Joe' and his Moll 'Tiff' and they start counting money for the night's take. Joe spots Tiff stuffing her garter with moolah. He catches her red handed, then decides to firmly 'discipline' her.

http://lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/rollin-in-da-dough.aspx

Here's the link... let's have fun!