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Guest
Posted: Monday, March 29, 2010 10:08:38 PM

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Well I guess I shall give it a shot..



His smooth hands caressed my heated flesh. Rough kisses trace a path of fire across my quivering thighs. I wait with lustful anticipation.



nicola
Posted: Monday, March 29, 2010 11:22:17 PM

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2 chars short eroticwriter book (this might help: http://www.lushstories.com/resources/count-characters.aspx)
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, March 30, 2010 12:07:03 AM

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nicola wrote:
Thanks NobeUddy, you made it onto our Twitter page 3601

Both lines were missing periods so shouldn't technically have gone up, but hey, let's live dangerously for a change.


Thanks for that! It's hard getting the characters to play nicely together.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, March 30, 2010 12:24:14 PM

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nicola wrote:
2 chars short eroticwriter book (this might help: http://www.lushstories.com/resources/count-characters.aspx)


No prob, I had used the counter originally but made so changes right before I posted, I'd though switch the characters properly but guess I missed something. LOL. This one should do it, 140 right on.

His smooth hands caressed my heated flesh. Rough kisses curve a path of fire across my quivering thighs. I waited with lustful anticipation.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, March 30, 2010 12:44:58 PM

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Two lips: one of past remembrances, and one of future pleasures, both heated by the winds of delicious breath and extinguished by cool eyes.
nicola
Posted: Tuesday, March 30, 2010 1:41:33 PM

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Thx Rocco.

I don't think the world's biggest watercooler has enough juice to handle the number of people hitting it, it hasn't been fast for over 6 months.
JJTee2010
Posted: Tuesday, May 04, 2010 9:53:34 AM

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Fingers slippery with my cum rammed in and out of my cunt, she whispered, "Come for me". And I did, all over that talented hand.
Revolution
Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2010 12:54:14 PM

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I removed my fingers as her body began to relax. I stared into her dark eyes. She slowly exhaled, bit her lip and then whispered, "Fuck me".

Hmm. A bit more challenging than I thought. It's late, I'll try come up with more some other time.

"Oh yes, the past can hurt. But the way I see it you can either run from it...or, learn from it." - Rafiki, The Lion King
nicola
Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2010 2:14:26 PM

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128 characters only JJTee2010, it's meant to be 140 exactly, that's the challenge.

nicola
Posted: Sunday, May 23, 2010 2:15:11 PM

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Added to Twitterland Revolution, thank you.
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Posted: Sunday, June 06, 2010 5:06:28 AM

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I had known that such pleasure would taste this sweet. I could feel his sweet lips on my skin. Like butterflies wings can this last forever?
nicola
Posted: Sunday, June 06, 2010 5:56:38 AM

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Thanks Rebecca.
tommie
Posted: Sunday, June 06, 2010 7:12:34 AM

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If only I had seen this sooner. :)
Here's my try:

His mouth drowned her nipple in his warm breath. Biting her lips she closed her eyes, longing for his electrifying touch on soft naked skin.
nicola
Posted: Sunday, June 06, 2010 6:11:11 PM

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Thanks guys, you're both on our twitter page icon_smile
KrrraaazzzyGuy
Posted: Sunday, June 13, 2010 12:10:16 AM

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Love. Sweat beaded on flesh, soft flesh pressed on hard flesh pressed deeply into soft flesh, desperate urgent motion, pressure building!

I'm a wild and Krrraaazzzy Guy!
Aaannn
Posted: Sunday, June 13, 2010 12:42:49 PM

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Sweat rolled down our backs as I enveloped his cock inside me. Euphorically, I bit my lip in pleasure, my walls rippling over his length.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 12:21:15 AM

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I went to the bed to lay down my head when i found her there i rustled her hair and let my despair slip to the floor as i slipped inside.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 12:26:09 AM

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Though we find ourselves in a sexual embrace we both have a love and passion to be together so that we may be loving and caring to both.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 12:28:39 AM

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Both sweating, tension rising, pressure building, heat enveloping, this is not sex, this is what happens when you fall in love with another.
nicola
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 12:35:38 AM

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Thank you for the contributions, they will be up shortly occasion5

I noticed a few there were 3 characters short, I've added them anyway. Please remember the challenge is supposed to be exactly 140 characters of hotness thatshot
Algol
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 11:39:26 AM

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His lips traveled over her tummy, she could feel his hot breath nearing her moist lips, his tongue tracing their edges before probing inside

Algol

nicola
Posted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 4:31:28 PM

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You need a full stop at the end there Algol, nice try! (I added you anyway)
Katland
Posted: Monday, August 02, 2010 10:33:34 AM

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My being tingled with waves of pain and pleasure as her hands delved into the depths of my pussy and ass, powerfully pumping & pounding me.
nicola
Posted: Wednesday, August 04, 2010 4:59:15 AM

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Sounds like a nasty evening ensued Katland, I like it! You were 1 character short, but it's up icon_smile (Check out smiler77's stories if you haven't already).
scarletblue
Posted: Friday, August 27, 2010 9:06:22 AM

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Location: Giving you pleasure..
giving it a go ..

She swayed her hips seductively in tune with the rythmic beat of the drums.Her heart raced as he looked lustfully into her kohl rimmed eyes.

hiding

Southern_Sass
Posted: Wednesday, September 08, 2010 10:08:08 PM

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Heaven help the man that truly loves me. He took me in his arms and as he lowered his head to kiss me softly, he growled "Heaven help me."

cunnilinguist
Posted: Saturday, September 18, 2010 8:45:23 PM

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Welded together with fiery passion, our bodies engaged in fast, undulating movements... Until both of us burst out into shudders of ecstasy.
Guest
Posted: Sunday, September 26, 2010 1:15:24 PM

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Electricity firing deep inside me as he nibbles on my neck. Spreading both my cheeks, sliding in, our bodies moaning loudly, “Good morning.”

You were right...it is hard to make it exactly 140 characters. That was a lot of rewrites and still full of fragments!!! lol
Monocle
Posted: Sunday, September 26, 2010 3:37:27 PM

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I tweeted these many moons ago:

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I trace the lines of her body with my eyes, archiving. Fixing her like this in my mind. I have to, because, at some point, I will untie her.

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Go on, keep it up, smiling like that, Miss Strapless-and-Sandals. Spy on me from the corners of your eyes. But careless. I'll eat you alive.

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I see the hesitation in her eyes. She's guessing at who I am. Whether she can trust me. She can't. She shouldn't. I smile when she says yes.

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You shouldn't be smiling. You've no idea what you do to me- what you've awakened in me. It scares _me_. It should scare the hell out of you.
nicola
Posted: Sunday, September 26, 2010 6:06:05 PM

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The first one is my favourite Monocle. Good to see you!
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