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before i start these are the lyrics to a song that i wrote and composed it is called holy love wish i could upload the song itself:
there are times you know
that fate is much more strong
and yet you fight to show that your love can carry on
but it is hard to see that whole was just a dream when u've believed
its real it was never as it seemes
and you're praying more and more
one day ill knock your door
i have now u know for sure
that ive always stayed inside of you
even love may cry
to know how much i tried
your memory is safe inside
ill see u in the other life
yeah i'll hold you
and i'll kiss you
ill tell u how much i miss u
and i'll touch u
and i'll feel u
and u r always in my heart
and tonight i'll die
baby knowing that i love u
and tonight im proud of the love that i shared u
and tonight i'll die
loving u
now i know im leaving
with my last breath im breathing
i should hold u dreaming
that u and i will summon some love
wholy love is bleeding
and in ur name and mine is believing
dont u know im bleeding
that u got her safe in life for me
when im gone so far away
im sure she wished i stayed
now im waiting 4 the day
behind her white scar is your face i see
even love may cry
to know how much i tried
ur memory is safe inside
ill see u in the other life
yeah i'll hold you
and i'll kiss you
ill tell u how much i miss u
and i'll touch u
and i'll feel u
and u r always in my heart
and tonight i'll die
baby knowing that i love u
and tonight im proud of the love that i shared u
and tonight i'll die
loving u
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Lovely poem
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That's a great song! :)
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LovelyAlexis wrote:That's a great song! :) I don't know the song myself but it works as a poem on it's own to lol
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That is breath taking shady. Tragic and haunting. You have a great talent my special friend.
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So sad yet so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. *big hugs for my dear friend*
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Lovely, absolutely lovely! And saaaaddddd
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Can't you post the song onto youtube, then we can all hear it....please 
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HoneyBee000 wrote:Can't you post the song onto youtube, then we can all hear it....please Good idea!! I read the words twice - firstly with a melancholy tempo in mind, which made me sad, and then again with a more Van Halentype quicker temp to it and then it felt almost inspirational. Honest. Try it. Oh crap, I'm getting all emotional and wussy!!
"Whoa, lady, I only speak two languages, English and bad English." - Korben Dallas, from The Fifth Element "If history repeats itself, and the unexpected always happens, how incapable must man be of learning from experience?" - George Bernard Shaw
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