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Come and get a look inside the life of X
Come see the swagger and feel the sex
Can't give away my heart and soul but nevertheless
Open up your mind, I'll give you all the rest
I grew up on the east side of Oakland Cal
With the ballers and the bangers and the workaday crowd
Had to use those smarts and learned to sharpen my tongue
Had to work, had to search, had to make my own fun
'Cause the sorry motherfucker who is known as my dad
Would rather sit, drink, and bitch while takin' all that I had
So I'd creep and I'd crawl and I'd stay outta sight
To find the boys round the way I knew could break me off right
and then I...
Hitched a ride into Dallas Tex
and then I...
Ditched my ride and what happened next?
I took my brains and my body and in strappy fine shoes
Made myself into a package that nobody can refuse
So come and get a look inside the life of X
Come see the swagger and feel the sex
Can't give away my heart and soul but nevertheless
Open up your mind, I'll give you all the rest
I meet all kinds of players, some are fools and some game
Bite off more than they can chew when they try to tame
A wild pussy, wild heart, and a soul that roams
The world 'round; I can be held, but I'll never be owned
I am the master and commander over all that I do
But we can play like you're in charge if I'm into you
You can...
Pin me tight up against the wall
You can...
Fuck my body like a blow-up doll
You can...
Pop the pussy, make me scream out loud
Sink it all in, baby- ooh so endowed
Don't even try to hold back, you know you wanna fill
My hole so wet, and don't fret, because I'm workin' the pill
Don't you wish you had a piece of Lady X
Come see the swagger and feel the sex
Can't give away my heart and soul but nevertheless
Open up your mind, I'll give you all the rest
I got bite and attitude that can clear the room
You might think I'm young and stupid if you dare to assume
But if you make that mistake, I will make you know better
I show y'all who the fool is, letter by letter
But I got a new outlook with my new success
You can't touch me when I peel off a minidress
You can't touch the things I write, written just for me
All thats left is jealous hate, that is plain for all to see
I used to...
Go for the throat of those who act the fool
I used to...
Keep taking swings, I can be so cruel
I used to...
Resort to violence, let the ghetto come out
Now I try to make amends, now I hold my hand out
Because their ain't no damn gain in always being thug tough
Being me and not you is just revenge enough
You want to feel a night out with Xuani T.
I love a man who spoils a lady, it don't come for free
You might think I'm diggin' gold here with such an affront
But only saying what I want- LadyX is blunt
I want a sharp, strong man who takes care of his girl
Without making me surrender how I take on the world
'Cause I'm only after comfort, I ain't after fame
And like Amil, my little coochie has a Gucci name.
So come and get a look inside the life of X
Come see the swagger and feel the sex
Can't give away my heart and soul but nevertheless
Open up your mind, I'll give you all the rest
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Love it Xuani. Would love to see more poetry/rap from you, maybe even hear you rap it.
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I have enjoy reading this... Thank you.
I so Hate to be tame also.
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Sweet Xuani, as an outsider looking in I think you've evolved but have not yet quite realised it. You've changed - for the better.
"Whoa, lady, I only speak two languages, English and bad English." - Korben Dallas, from The Fifth Element
"If history repeats itself, and the unexpected always happens, how incapable must man be of learning from experience?" - George Bernard Shaw
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Goddamn, Babe. It's awesome. Even I could feel the beat pounding in my teeny little alcohol-sodden skull. Second vote for "Put some bass behind it and release it on the Tube." Just don't forget all us Little Folk when you get all rich and famous and have a house on "Cribs."
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wow girl..nice piece of rap there.
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Xuani, poetry...more evolution from you...love it as usual
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Look at the reviews! Now arent you glad you didnt chicken out?? LOL
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Loved it LadyX .. ! Thank you for sharing ..
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It's so lyrical, you can write a song around it.
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Very nicely done Xuani 
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I loved it very discriptive it was like I could see it all happening in my mind as your words flowed across the page. Bravo give us more.. your poem sounds like the female black author of erotica Mary B. Morrison she is a hot writter like you are...loved it!
 Behind every strong soldier there is even a stronger woman who raised him " Proud Army Mom"
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*hugs* this IS amazing, but then, that doesn't surprise me, considering the source. I have to agree that it feels like it would feel at home back by some beats. keep flexing that writing muscle - you get stronger every time. love you for it, girl. xoxo rachel
 Blondie's been itching to share another adventure sometime soon...
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Great poem Babes really well done.
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Excellent!
I hope one day you find someone with whom you can share your heart and soul.
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Xuani that was just great. We had shared much of you history and experience, but not in this format.
Your a smart young woman, with a special heart that will lead to the place you want to go. Just need time and conviction
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Keep rappin girl, and use some music with that, can't wait to see that hit on the charts
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All you need now is a sweet rapper name. Ghost Face Xuan? Notorious X? Old Dirty Lady?
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Magical_felix wrote:All you need now is a sweet rapper name.
Ghost Face Xuan?
Notorious X?
Old Dirty Lady? Lady X not a good enough name for you Felix? lol. But I'm one of the whitest people you'll meet, and as Xuani likes to point out to me, a country fan. So I may not be the highest authority on good rapper names.
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Magical_felix wrote:
Old Dirty Lady?
 Done and done! Old Dirty Lady it is! It can be my alter ego, kinda like Dirt McGirt was for Ol Dirty Bastard. By the way, thanks for the love everybody- I'll jot down something else soon, hopefully. 
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Jebru wrote:Magical_felix wrote:All you need now is a sweet rapper name.
Ghost Face Xuan?
Notorious X?
Old Dirty Lady? Lady X not a good enough name for you Felix? lol. But I'm one of the whitest people you'll meet, and as Xuani likes to point out to me, a country fan. So I may not be the highest authority on good rapper names. haha ladyX is cool too but Old dirty Lady's got more impact
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