Rank: Advanced Wordsmith
Joined: 5/29/2010
Posts: 70
Location: On top of you
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Rattling inside my brain
All the thoughts getting loose
Shiver, shudder, causing pain
The war raging without truce
Fight and flash and fall
Rip open our defense
Burning, breaking, destroying all
Moving on, leading suspense
Bleeding out concern
The soldiers running free
Letting go is what we yearn
Though not what we foresee
Listen to your heart's call
Hear what it demands
They're not meek or small
Think and the brain understands
Just give in a little bit
Enough to feel complete
Need to live without the split
Living happily without defeat
Dare to get poisoned? Then try kissing me...
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 4/3/2010
Posts: 3,240
Location: California
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You did a very good job expressing what many of us are feeling.
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Rank: Lurker
Joined: 11/30/2006
Posts: 327,085
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Wow...that was extrmely good dear. Keep up the great work. Will Love to read more....
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