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stephanie
Posted: Sunday, October 09, 2011 7:01:44 PM

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Location: Dublin, Ire., Ireland

Two of my Faves...... (And both from writers I really admire......) Both For 'Bride Unveiled'.......

(1) I love this.. I have a thing for wedding dresses.. never worn one myself! Great story.. all the emotions in there too, and you know how I love the emotions.. xxx

(2) I have a weakness for dirty bride stories... this one was delicious.

I especially love it when writers I think are better then me rate my stuff!!!!!!

Do YOU have any comments which particularly delighted You????

xx SF

Imbecile! - de som empire
Si nos efforts te delevraient,
Tes baisers ressuseraient
Le cadavere de ton Wampyr! (Baudelaire.)
(I'll ATTEMPT a free translation...)
"Idiot! Even if our efforts were
To deliver you from Her empire,
Your kisses would bring back to life
The corpse of your beloved Vampire."
EVERYONE WHO SPEAKS FRENCH: "THat isn't quite correct..."
TheDevilsWeakness
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 9:24:48 AM

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Location: I'm the girl that your father hoped he could date.
Some of my favorite comments for my stories, in no particular order, are:

This one made me giggle
Brutal (back in the 1980s) meant - WOW...that's fucking awesome!

Practice saying it in your lowest toned voice...

Bruuuuuutal...

(Received by mail for "How Far Can Angel Fall")
~~~~~~~~~~~
The first line made my knees go weak! You wrote one wonderful piece for your first try here! Great job. Sexy!

(A comment for "My Affair")
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WOW! Slap me and wake me up! A very well written intense sexual tale!

(A comment for "How Far Can Angel Fall")
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Powerful, and full of emotion, you surprised me after the opening scene.....and im glad i kept reading.

(A comment for "How Far Can Angel Fall")
~~~~~~~~~~~
You're such a tease, Angel, that you just couldn't resist teasing us all with the anticipation of a part 2. Nice job.

(A comment for "To Tease Or Not To Tease")

Comments from writers I admire always make my day...
It gives me validation that I'm not a complete noob
I find it gives me the motivation to write more :)

SensualDesires83
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 9:29:04 AM

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Location: Southeast, United States, United States
I actually have two:

The first one:

"I went back and read the other three parts first. I scored each of them individually, but this comment serves for the series thus far (okay, I'm a little lazy).

I enjoyed this story! You use metaphors and have detailed descriptions. You take your time building the story up to the action. One comment said it was "nothing special." The basic storyline is perhaps found on LS in numerous iterations, but the manner in which it is presented makes all the difference, and that is what set it apart from others. Good series. I'll have to read your other works."


The second one (also was the craziest/weirdest comment which I posted in that board- but still this one is a favorite:"

"You are a vagina thesaurus!"

"So don't cry to me.
If you loved me,
You would be here with me.
Don't lie to me,
Just get your things.
I've made up your mind."

--Evanescence
DirtyMartini
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 10:50:40 AM

Rank: Purveyor of Poetry & Porn

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I think the best comment I ever got...well, really the most flattering was over on Writing.com, and I think I can mention that site, it's not really any competition to Lush...this was about a week before I joined Lush btw...it was the first time any of my writing got any outside "acknowledgement"...and it was weeks before the same story got an Editor Pick here on Lush...

Anyway...SoCalScribe is a professional Hollywood screenwriter btw...


# 1. Review of "Your Eyes" (GC) Review ID #3177403
Review By: SinfulScribe (424)
Date and Time: 10-13-09 @ 2:32pm
Public/Private: Private | Hide Review (?)
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)
Review Length: 319 Characters | 297 w/o WritingML
Great story, Exakta66 . I really enjoyed reading this item and thought you did a good job with both the characters and the storyline. I would be a pleasure to feature this item in this week's issue of the "Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 's weekly newsletter.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,

-SoCalScribe


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Dancing_Doll
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 2:13:10 PM

Rank: Alpha Blonde

Joined: 2/17/2010
Posts: 6,300
Location: West Coast
I've gotten so many really humbling and wonderful comments, letters, and feedback. It's actually hard to just pick one... so I'll pick two (for different reasons).

1. This first is one that really stands out because it's kind of like the perfect tagline for my Sex Rehab series:

"This entire series has been unmitigated filth dressed up in clever writing and fine plotting." (a comment on The Sex Rehab Diaries: Stacey's Confession)


2. And this second piece of feedback was just so complex and well thought out. I think it's kind of a writer's dream to have a reader be able to articulate this level of impact, and know that they totally 'got it' (ie. all the subtleties of the story).

"Dense and throbbing with erotic, psychological turmoil! There are a lot of stirring sensual images in this story: not only sights but smells and sounds. The party has a kind of cinematic immediacy, taking us along with Rachel's sensual disorientation in the cage and into the flood of sensations that envelop her throughout the party.

At another level, the psychological interest of the story is high, particularly because, on two fronts, it breaks with some of the fantasy conventions of the genre: first, that someone at the party 'cheats' and videos her, exposing her to public shaming; and second, that despite her independent spirit, she hasn't managed to avoid winding up here at her parents' direction (tho, as is hinted, this plan will backfire!).

The conflict between her rich self-awareness and immersion in sensual escapism vs her parents' conviction of what's best and her 'true self' makes itself realistically felt, without harming the erotic impact." (a comment on The Sex Rehab Diaries: Rachel's Confession).


Both of those comments are from fabulously talented Lush authors that I greatly admire.

Oh... and I did get a great email that I won't post here from a professor of a college that teaches psychology and human sexuality asking permission to be able to use my stories for a semester as assigned reading to generate class discussion. That was pretty cool. And yes, I did check it all out, it was totally legit. Wish I could have been a fly on the wall in those classes though. :)



magnificent1rascal
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 2:52:09 PM

Rank: Divine Rapscallion

Joined: 8/15/2010
Posts: 3,018
Location: On the ragged edge of disaster
My two favorite comments on The Secret Life of Bellingham Sam are these:

~ From Gypsymoth: "...I love it; you hit just the right note of humour, satire, affection and genuine understanding of what is erotic. Sex and human relationships are funny. You've nailed it."

~ From servin9: "Unlike anything I've read before in its structure. A gripping tale that flows so effortlessly. Very Well Done. Wish I could give it a higher score. 5+++++"

Maggie Rascal
stephanie
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 3:54:04 PM

Rank: Bohemian

Joined: 1/1/2010
Posts: 4,886
Location: Dublin, Ire., Ireland


Thanks for responding, Guys n Dolls...... Perhaps people might post some more.... I get a genuine boost when people seem to get the stuff...

As for ""This entire series has been unmitigated filth dressed up in clever writing and fine plotting." (a comment on The Sex Rehab Diaries: Stacey's Confession, by Dancing Doll)"


That's a 15 word description of what I ASPIRE to do every time!!!!!!

xx SF

Imbecile! - de som empire
Si nos efforts te delevraient,
Tes baisers ressuseraient
Le cadavere de ton Wampyr! (Baudelaire.)
(I'll ATTEMPT a free translation...)
"Idiot! Even if our efforts were
To deliver you from Her empire,
Your kisses would bring back to life
The corpse of your beloved Vampire."
EVERYONE WHO SPEAKS FRENCH: "THat isn't quite correct..."
Mistress_of_words
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 5:39:21 PM

Rank: Forum Guru

Joined: 2/14/2011
Posts: 591
Location: At my keyboard, writing stories for you
I have a few to share:


Okay, who the hell gave you a 3 for this? Very hot...I love stories about longtime friends that become lovers, it just makes it that much more special! Great job! (How Quiet Can You Be?)
Love it when I inspire indigence on my behalf!

~~~~~

Funniest comment:
MOW simply brilliant!! You are so very talented, you build the tension superbly!
If Carlsberg did muisc festivals then this is certainly one I would be at. Wonder if Kez and Ella will have more stories to tell lol xx
(Festival Fever)

~~~~~

You had me at “No. Make me!”. The Domina in me grabbed her crop. Well done. (Bad Girl)

~~~~~

Now that's how you leave a job. I just gave the Bosses the finger n thru some SHIT. Great story loved it (Last Day Send Off)
Was that actual shit do you think?

~~~~~

Is it weird that I want an Xbox online account now? I never thought I'd hear myself say those words! Fabulous story MOW... I can't wait for part 2!!! (Like an Actual Girl pt1)
Watch out, my stories may cause you to behave out of character, lol.

~~~~~

Ahh the stacks... Flashback! Good read. (Secret Sex in the Stacks)

~~~~~

BEST comment:
Sweet and naughty, with a touch of humour. Loved every tantalizing second. I really liked Ellie's character - the complexity was very realistic; I felt she was balancing between her inner and outer worlds - showing the expected restraint and trepidation but also being experienced with her own inner knowledge of her body and fantasies. (Might as well go there in style)

~~~~~~

I also think some of the best comments I've ever received were for "What are Friends for?" which dealt with a young woman offering a blowjob to an older, married man who had never had oral sex. It seemed to touch a lot of people.

DirtyMartini
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 6:59:45 PM

Rank: Purveyor of Poetry & Porn

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Posts: 5,791
Location: Right here on Lush Stories..., United States
Dancing_Doll wrote:

Oh... and I did get a great email that I won't post here from a professor of a college that teaches psychology and human sexuality asking permission to be able to use my stories for a semester as assigned reading to generate class discussion. That was pretty cool. And yes, I did check it all out, it was totally legit. Wish I could have been a fly on the wall in those classes though. :)


That's very flattering Doll...I'm sure it felt good to get that note...always flattering when someone chooses to use words you've written for whatever purpose...

I don't think any of my stories have been used in a classroom setting...at least not as a good example anyway...

And your mention of the perfect tag line reminded me that the tag line I use for my story "My Best Friend's Girl (She used to be mine)"...the tag line I use now being "Public sex with an ex"....that tag line came from an early comment someone left on the story...

So, comments can be useful as well...


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Dancing_Doll
Posted: Monday, October 10, 2011 7:34:31 PM

Rank: Alpha Blonde

Joined: 2/17/2010
Posts: 6,300
Location: West Coast
DirtyMartini wrote:
Dancing_Doll wrote:

Oh... and I did get a great email that I won't post here from a professor of a college that teaches psychology and human sexuality asking permission to be able to use my stories for a semester as assigned reading to generate class discussion. That was pretty cool. And yes, I did check it all out, it was totally legit. Wish I could have been a fly on the wall in those classes though. :)


That's very flattering Doll...I'm sure it felt good to get that note...always flattering when someone chooses to use words you've written for whatever purpose...



Well... unless they are plagiarists, of course. evil4


clum
Posted: Tuesday, October 11, 2011 8:26:56 AM

Rank: Clumeleon

Joined: 5/13/2011
Posts: 4,636
Location: Edinburgh, United Kingdom
On 'The Ethan Blake Story: Dave's Party':

Buz wrote:
Clum! I was quite pleased to see that you took time away from hammer throwing, telephone pole tossing, eating haggis, lopping off English heads with claymores and all those other things you wild Scots are famous for and sat down and wrote another story!! haha And an excellent story it is indeed. You write with a thorough command of the English language. Your story builds up to an authentic erotic sensuousness. You should consider becoming a novelist. 5+


Followed by,

mazza wrote:
Wow, that was brilliant!! You've got an excellent style developing and I agree with Buz (not about the ridiculous Scottish stereotypes of course, Grr) But yes, you should be thinking about writing professionally... Loved it and really looking forward to reading the next installment. (hope I don't have to wait too long!) xxx


The grin was wide across my face.

Every day is a school day.
erectus_2011
Posted: Thursday, October 20, 2011 4:36:47 AM

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Posts: 197
Location: Delta of Venus
"Wow ! Erectus, your words are beautiful - and, they worked !! xx "
sprite
Posted: Thursday, October 20, 2011 11:26:12 AM

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Posts: 14,656
Location: My Tower, United States
Doll's comments are always just amazing. i swear, she needs to give a class on how to write comments, they're almost as good as her stories... well... they're good, anyway, and always inspire me. :)

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/west-coast-games-part-one-the-beach.aspx
TheDevilsWeakness
Posted: Friday, October 28, 2011 8:09:52 AM

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sprite wrote:
Doll's comments are always just amazing. i swear, she needs to give a class on how to write comments, they're almost as good as her stories... well... they're good, anyway, and always inspire me. :)


Ditto :)

CharlotteRusse1
Posted: Friday, December 02, 2011 9:46:04 PM

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The funniest comment I ever got was from a guy who said my story was so good he had to stop and pull over while reading it. Who reads erotica while driving? I hope he was at least in a traffic jam and not on an offramp.

Writer of amateur erotica since 2011..See the latest at:

TXGirl
Posted: Saturday, December 03, 2011 9:17:28 PM

Rank: Story Verifier

Joined: 2/9/2011
Posts: 186
Location: United States
I recently got an email from an anonymous reader on another site who said my stories make him want to better himself. That blew me away...who knew writing erotica could lead to influencing someone like that!

Click here to read "Billion Dollar Booty Call" by Tessa Leigh Hartmann
DLizze
Posted: Thursday, December 08, 2011 8:07:39 AM

Rank: Story Verifier

Joined: 4/23/2011
Posts: 2,552
I just received this one from Gypsymoth, who is no mean writer in her own right. SHe was commenting on my latest series, Charlie-Charlene.

I loved it, D! Your writing gets better and better and this one just crackles, it is so crisp! Your sense of humour is delicious, too. Excellent work. Thank you.

I am wearing a huge grin. If it were any wider, I'd hurt my ears.

"There's only three tempos: slow, medium and fast. When you get between in the cracks, ain't nuthin' happenin'." Ben Webster
soul_purpose69
Posted: Saturday, December 10, 2011 7:37:14 PM

Rank: Rookie Scribe

Joined: 3/26/2007
Posts: 5
Location: United States
I find it flattering, but overwhelming, when people tell me they want me to continue my Teacher's Pet series. I'm told pretty often it was a good story and I should write another chapter. But yeah.. people asking for more is the best compliment.
Ladyinsomniac
Posted: Monday, December 12, 2011 1:11:40 PM

Rank: Rookie Scribe

Joined: 7/20/2009
Posts: 6
Location: United States
That someone actually read me ... I'm such a dork


"graveyard shift girls do it at night"
"I might not be pretty but what I bring in talent and enthusiam balances it out"
avrgblkgrl
Posted: Wednesday, December 21, 2011 12:32:20 PM

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Posts: 634
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The best comment I ever received was on a story called "Only For One Night". The commentor said that they felt a tremendous amount of guilt for having read such a good story for free. She/he said that I should definitely be getting paid for what I do. That meant the world to me.

My latest Poem explores the power of submission--A Recommended Read:




~Sit back and enjoy several voice readings of my poetry too~
Guest
Posted: Monday, January 02, 2012 8:19:10 AM

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Joined: 12/1/2006
Posts: 537,818
The best comment I've received is from Magnificent1rascal, on my new story:

Quote:
This is quite possibly the best story I have read on Lush. A beautiful, haunting, sensuous love story, it is, in a word, magnificent.


A link to the story is in my sig.



sam_kind
Posted: Monday, January 02, 2012 10:28:16 AM

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Posts: 32
My best comment was from CamancheBill- "You are writing one of the most beautiful erotic stories I have ever read.I can't wait now for the next installment- when you describe the actual mating of these two people who love each other.You do describe it up to now in terms so beautifully written, This is a 5.0 for sure". I was really pleased with that!
SweetPenny
Posted: Monday, January 02, 2012 9:17:46 PM

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My favorite comment is from Sprite on Penny Gets Punished:

*blushes* it's rare that i have trouble getting to the end of a story, not because it's not good, but because it's TOO good... this is the second time it's happened with one of yours, tho.
alexandraLacy
Posted: Tuesday, January 03, 2012 5:37:55 PM

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Well before I made a comment saying something like "I made an account to to comment on how good the story was!" And I had been reading lush for years but just made an account to comment now that I was old enough lol
WellMadeMale
Posted: Tuesday, January 03, 2012 9:38:33 PM

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Joined: 9/30/2009
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Location: Cakeland, United States
"When can you cum over and see me?"

No, that comment was not left here on Lush.

If ya can't beat 'em... pay someone to do it for you.
Milik_Redman
Posted: Monday, January 09, 2012 2:46:26 PM

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"I burn't my bloody dinner Milik!"
This from a poster who read my story "the survivor"
Sadly he closed his account and the response was deleted.
For me though knowing I was able to draw a reader in and maybe even excited them enough to orgasm is a heady feeling. The thought that my words alone were enough to cause a reader, especially a woman to get off...
That is what makes writing worth the effort

“It is a great thing to know your vices.”
― Marcus Tullius Cicero


My New collaboration with Dirty _D is one I am extremely proud to offer:





magnificent1rascal
Posted: Monday, January 09, 2012 3:17:58 PM

Rank: Divine Rapscallion

Joined: 8/15/2010
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Location: On the ragged edge of disaster
This comment on my poem Fragmented, Too was quite humbling because the commenter saw so much more in the piece than I did:

~ From the perspicacious, incomparable internet sensation, Ms. Catnip: "This is a poem that would fit very well in a paperback, lying on the night stand. Once in a while it'd be read and remind the people out there what it's all about. I can fit this poem not only to a relationship between two, but the humanity itself."

Wow. She got all that out of 50 little words. I am honored.

Maggie Rascal
Guest
Posted: Wednesday, February 15, 2012 9:26:36 PM

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Posts: 537,818
My favs so far...
Eden: Ode to a Beautiful Lover-spearone-That was one of the best depictions of the sensual female form, i've ever read. Very very beautiful...

Water Dancing-sprite-blushes this makes me want to make love with my girl... it flows, it's so sensual and truly erotic. beautiful.
Water Dancing-ArtAngel-Excellent rendition of what Love really is...well done

River-Frank_Lee-This just brought tears to my eyes. Nothing I can say seems adequate at all. I wish I had a soul as beautiful and hopeful as yours. Kick the world in the ass, GypsyChild, and kick it with everything you've got.
Anjasa
Posted: Thursday, February 16, 2012 7:00:14 PM

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Location: Canada
This comment means a lot to me because firstly, I love the commenter's stories. She's amazing.

Secondly, she put a lot of thought into the comment and it shows.

Quote:
There is an attention to detail in this story that I feel many stories in general are sadly lacking (and this extends far beyond this forum, but rather fanfiction general). Neverminding that the piece in itself is extremely arousing, the sensory details mixed with that eroticism do well to not only excite the mind, but enrapture it in the world created. I'd imagine it would be difficult to make the act of reading something, even if it is from a particularly lascivious vixen, to be inherently erotic through text, yet this not only captured that feeling but exceeding the expectations by drawing out Anjasa's sexual nature.

Of course, I could just be a tad bit biased on that part, but that's the magic of it.

No sooner is the reader pulled into that erotic tale (we've not got a delectable elf reading a dirty story) than does that intermission arrive, and then we get to see the next "act" in the story, whose progression is nothing short of fulfilling. I believe that, in all honesty, anything less than the he showed her in that moment would have detracted from the scene. That he would play to her feminine sensuality and rather than insert a masculine "wham bam", instead address her through cunnilingus is a touch that perfectly punctuated the steadily rising notes of eroticism that dripped from the passage until its inevitable and well-deserved climax.

I dare say that after that kind of show, the audience would be not only eager to hear chapter three, but to see just where their little show went from there.

Overall? I'm delighted that I read this. It's definitely nice mind candy to keep in store, if ever I've seen any. I'd say the strength of the piece is that it's a story that while obviously smutty, is nevertheless comprehensive enough to stand on its own as a tale. We see the beginning, enjoy the middle, and anticipate the climax. It's a finished work -- a completed piece.

Bravo, I say. Bravo.
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