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Sal
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 5:55:48 AM

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Writing explorations have drawn me to my notion of writing Senryu. Of course being of salacious mind and spirit I find it necessary to put my own twist on the traditional form of Japanese poetry and heat it up. I continue to follow the structural rules of a poem that consists of three lines and a total of 17 syllables (five on the first and third lines, and seven on the second line). However, unlike traditional Senryu, I choose to title my poems. I think they serve as miniature stories or snapshots of time. It is my hope that they paint a visual in your mind as they do in mine.



Here is one:

Time for change
Softly she sighs now,
"Not vanilla sex tonight,"
Zipping up her boots.


Sal
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 5:58:11 AM

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These three seem to work well together to form a sort of ode to the ass or posterior prose.


Anticipation
Fidgeting she waits.
With slow deliberation
He tugs her panties



Blooms
With an open hand,
Flowers bloom in sprays of red
Desire scents the air


The Gardener
Extended fingers
Drag through her swollen furrow;
She across his knee.



Sal
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 5:59:50 AM

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Extending the theme above...


Buggery
Breeching her sphincter
Muted groans, pushing deeper
Her submission his


Sal
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 6:01:53 AM

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This one always gives me a smile. Finding my religion.



Resurrection
Panting, gasping, hot
Drawers slam open and closed
Rip, crunch, snap, buzz, "ahhh!"



Guest
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 7:06:42 PM

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That's some classic Senryu poetry there. I like reading Chinese poetry from Stonehouse. He was a 14th century zen monk that wrote a lot of zen poetry.
Sal
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 10:20:43 PM

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Oh my, I'm going to learn from you roccotool. I love learning new things. Truly I do. *runs along to go discover this Stonehouse of which you speak*


But shares another poem before I go. Simply because your comments made me feel great!






Blind Faith
Nude beneath her cloak
Blindfolded she knocks and waits
Her heart pounds with joy.




nicola
Posted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009 10:23:02 PM

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Very nice Sal. We don't get nearly enough poets and students of poetry on here.

Thank you for your posts icon_smile
Sal
Posted: Thursday, October 08, 2009 5:46:26 AM

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Thank you nicola... I wasn't sure where to share them, so I opted for this corner of Lush.
Sal
Posted: Thursday, October 08, 2009 5:47:03 AM

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The Beckoning
Ring-a-ling it sings
She instantly bows to him
“Good girl,” He praises.



MrNudiePants
Posted: Thursday, October 08, 2009 9:16:02 AM

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The Judgment:

Silently he sits,
Watching her as she disrobes.
Fine art cast in flesh.
Sal
Posted: Thursday, October 08, 2009 5:47:32 PM

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MrNudiePants wrote:
The Judgment:

Silently he sits,
Watching her as she disrobes.
Fine art cast in flesh.




Lovely MrNudiePants, did you enjoy creating? It's terrific. hello1
DonAbdul
Posted: Saturday, October 10, 2009 3:41:01 PM

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Sal wrote:
Extending the theme above...


Buggery
Breeching her sphincter
Muted groans, pushing deeper
Her submission his




I've learnt a few things reading these exciting erotic senryu poems. This one is my favorite of the lot but I love the whole lot. Looking forward to so much more from you Sal Applause

Life is too short to waste it on drama. Have fun while you still can.
Sal
Posted: Saturday, October 10, 2009 5:09:26 PM

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DonAbdul wrote:
Sal wrote:
Extending the theme above...


Buggery
Breeching her sphincter
Muted groans, pushing deeper
Her submission his




I've learnt a few things reading these exciting erotic senryu poems. This one is my favorite of the lot but I love the whole lot. Looking forward to so much more from you Sal Applause



I hope to find inspiration and post more. Thank you kindly DonAbdul.
Sal
Posted: Saturday, October 10, 2009 5:11:52 PM

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Again
Slippery soft sheets,
Hanging on tight and screaming,
"Please fuck me again!"



DonAbdul
Posted: Sunday, October 11, 2009 1:51:33 AM

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Sal wrote:

Again
Slippery soft sheets,
Hanging on tight and screaming,
"Please fuck me again!"




Oh wow!

Life is too short to waste it on drama. Have fun while you still can.
Sal
Posted: Sunday, October 11, 2009 10:20:17 AM

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Too much? Something a wee bit tamer...



Bedtime Tales
Nightlight glows softly;
Fingers wet, dip and repeat
As she turns the page.




Confessions of reading erotica at bedtime eh.
Guest
Posted: Friday, October 16, 2009 10:42:24 AM

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I love Lush, there is always something I have not read before. I love these poems they are amazing. I will be having a little think myself later on, see what I can write. Nice work Salclapping
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