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Rank: Lurker
Joined: 11/30/2006
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I realize that every woman has different tastes and different fantasies but I'm wondering what turns you on in a story more than anything else. When you read a story, and start becoming so aroused from it that you have to masturbate yourself to orgasm ... what was it about the story that really did it for you?
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 8/1/2009
Posts: 282
Location: the Swamps of Jersey
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well written ones :)
Success is doing what you love, and doing it so well that someone will pay you for it.http://www.lushstories.com/fantasyfiction
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Rank: Advanced Wordsmith
Joined: 9/20/2011
Posts: 80
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Detailed True!
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Rank: Active Ink Slinger
Joined: 1/20/2011
Posts: 31
Location: United States
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I really like when a woman starts to get vocal. Not squealing or saying crap like, "Fuck the shit out of me!" I really can't stand that...but most other vocalizations get me off like mad.
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Rank: Story Verifier
Joined: 4/15/2011
Posts: 3,815
Location: Gainesville, United States
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grammatically correct, detailed, but not overly so tales that stir my dirty mind. Actually, just read these. Dancing Doll always gets it right.
Who would have guessed that my little tale, the very First one I ever submitted to Lush would be read by so many? It shocks me a little to realize that it has now served over 20,000! Charge NurseThank you so very much to those who have read it!
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Rank: The Linebacker
Joined: 3/2/2011
Posts: 3,283
Location: Atlanta, United States
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Well written stories that get to the hot sex quickly and have great descriptive juicy wild sex scenes.
Please check out my newest story: "10 Items Or Less"http://www.lushstories.com/stories/milf/10-items-or-less.aspxOr my previous story: http://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/in-the-land-of-salvation-and-sin.aspx
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 2/10/2012
Posts: 1,909
Location: Vancouver, Canada
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well written and believable stories.
a story that is lots of fun .... Ben's fun!! Good Morning, My CumSlut (oral sex)
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 9/13/2011
Posts: 928
Location: United States
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Not a woman but, I prefer stories written in first person present tense, but first or third, present or past work. They need to be well written and grammatically correct. I like believable situations. I like to hear that the woman is really enjoying it, especially if she's receiving oral sex.
Sensei's altimeter is reading 9000'. Suddenly the engine noise level drops a lot. The engine on the door side of the plane is quiet. We hear, "Shit! Fuck me!" from the cockpit, then the pilot yells, "Everybody out! Now!" Airgasms Induce Orgasms
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Rank: Lurker
Joined: 11/30/2006
Posts: 327,048
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I'm a naughty guy. I have lots of fantasies. I fantasize about light BDSM (both being the dom and sub), watching others have sex, having others watch me have sex, and anal. Those are some of the things that turn me on. I love reading these types of stories. During cyber, I like to act some of those out. 
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Rank: Purveyor of Sweetness
Joined: 9/10/2011
Posts: 1,991
Location: the sweet, sunny south, United States
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if it involves me emotionally... through a poetic image... a phrase.... it is all about what i see in my head when i start reading.... i know within a couple of paragraphs if it is going to work for me... with the best stories i know at the end of the first line....
i am really excited to have two "recommended reads". they are "did you know i love your cock?" and "just fuck me". great titles, huh?
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Rank: Story Verifier
Joined: 7/8/2012
Posts: 319
Location: The naughty little world inside my head, United Ki
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I love erotic words and language; anything that sweeps you up and takes you away into the story, into the head / world of the characters. Since I started writing more seriously, I tend to analyse a bit further and can now appreciate stories on multiple levels - I can see what the author is trying to do... and it's delicious when they succeed. I can enjoy anything that is well written but I love slow reveals and twists. The best one I've read recently was this: "Suddenly I felt something cool and hard at the mouth of my vagina - not a tongue, or even a finger." from Naughtieannie's VIP competition entry, "A Fuck at the Opera" That one sentence blew me away. "Hot" and hard and I'd be onto the next sentence. But "Cool" and hard - suddenly my eyes were flicking back to check that I'd read it right. I was intrigued. My mind was engaged and yes my fingers were engaged soon after... Read it to see what I'm talking about.
 
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Rank: Rookie Scribe
Joined: 8/3/2012
Posts: 8
Location: UK
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spanking/bdsm, occasionally incest... x
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 2/24/2012
Posts: 193
Location: Where it rains sweetness, United States
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Most of them turn me on, If it has sex in it it's for me.
Anything you think is sweet, I'm a little more than that.
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Rank: Lurker
Joined: 11/30/2006
Posts: 327,048
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I like well written and detailed stories...My favorites that really do it for me are oral and anal....
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 1/14/2011
Posts: 380
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Yes.. Grammatically correct, detailed, with a solid build up. I prefer reading longer stories because it keeps my mind enticed. I love straight, taboo, and incest the most. SO HOT <3
Click > here < to read my first feature story, Techno Aphrodite by Piquet!
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 7/24/2012
Posts: 1,054
Location: Central NJ, United States
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Good erotica is well written, with a believable scenario that captures your imagination. We enjoy kinky erotica from first time to taboo to BDSM to family love.
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 11/18/2010
Posts: 782
Location: Far from the madding crowd, United Kingdom
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I write stories based upon what turns me on. I like a story with a plot, sub-plots, and surprises that's believable, introspective and draws you into the mind, fantasies and experiences of the writer with a twist at the end leading you on to want to read the next chapter.
My latest story: http://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/the-school-reunion.aspx
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Rank: Active Ink Slinger
Joined: 9/10/2011
Posts: 37
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yes, well written stories are definitely the best. ...well written BDSM stories involving a female sub and male Dom, now that's what i'm talking about. ;)
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 7/15/2012
Posts: 1,998
Location: Snowboard Nation, United States
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agreed. well written stories. probably incest the most.
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 8/7/2009
Posts: 10,564
Location: The Other Side Of The Mirror
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I prefer well written stories that allow you to get to know the characters and you understand how the sex came to be. I do not like when you quickly see people having sex without knowing how they met, who seduced who or anything about them. As far as genre, I prefer stories that are a little (or a lot) kinky and taboo. I also like stories that explore a little of a characters dark side. The typical romantic love story can be fun but usually it doesnt do it for me.
I also like first time and Older/Younger girl/girl stories too.
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Rank: Active Ink Slinger
Joined: 7/11/2012
Posts: 24
Location: Phoenix, United States
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The same well written and something different, such as incest or bdsm
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Rank: Forum Guru
Joined: 1/7/2012
Posts: 816
Location: United Kingdom
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Well written for a start. And also BDSM stories I like.
Teased and Tormented -My very first story and competition entry is now up!
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Rank: Rookie Scribe
Joined: 8/13/2012
Posts: 1
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First time stories, particularly involving voyeurism and masturbation... even more so if it's incest (siblings or cousins, never adult/child. ew)
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