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Mrsmcrocker
Posted: Thursday, August 23, 2012 2:30:49 AM

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Location: Sydney, Australia
hi guys,

could you read my first story.. I would like to know what you think about it and would appreciate some constructive feedback for areas of improvement.

thanks :)
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Posted: Thursday, August 23, 2012 4:35:01 AM

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You should link your story to this thread so that people can find your story.
Pretzel
Posted: Thursday, August 23, 2012 6:23:11 AM

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Loved the little bit of Dom you put in there. Well written thanks for sharing
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