You see, you are two days late with this thread! I sent message and I wouldn't had it, if I would have this option to get it out of my system. Now I have nothing for you..maybe I can ramble about how I made story banner and now I just need to write a story, but that's more boring than it sounds like..

Don't worry Gurlyboy, I have plenty to ramble about, that makes it slightly interesting putting it down

So, the other day and this is not critique!I was going through some poem comments and what surprised me is aside support which is absolutely lovely, people were talking about deepness.

'You write soo deep'
'You write deep'
'I cannot believe how great deepness this poem has'
..and so on

I was thinking, did we reached the point where Paulo Coelho is a synonym of deep writing?

Ffor instance and I will overreact/overdo it:

..at the end of the tunnel
You proudly stood
A man
With a bright smile

You were there..
The whole time
Waiting for me
To accept you
Man as, you are.


I was wondering, is this deep poetry? not to me anyway.

At the other side, blue one, I read couple amazingly great poems, just saying..

Here next Lushie, have one

:) I was wondering when someone would quote that!

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