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mrplow
Posted: Wednesday, February 13, 2008 2:58:40 PM

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Let's see if we can get something fun going with a collaborative poem. I'll start:

She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
roccotool
Posted: Wednesday, February 13, 2008 5:18:53 PM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.
nicola
Posted: Wednesday, February 13, 2008 5:47:19 PM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Queenie
Posted: Tuesday, February 19, 2008 7:45:09 AM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Hands tied loosely to the bed
Thoughts were swirling inside her head.
Curious2c
Posted: Tuesday, February 19, 2008 6:57:31 PM

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Queenie wrote:
She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Hands tied loosely to the bed
Thoughts were swirling inside her head.




She loved the agenda, even his prose.
The feather teases her here, there, then her nose.
Laying there helpless yet she knows his love
will set her free to fly, like a dove.
roccotool
Posted: Wednesday, February 20, 2008 2:16:42 PM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Hands tied loosely to the bed
Thoughts were swirling inside her head.

She loved the agenda, even his prose.
The feather teases her here, there, then her nose.
Laying there helpless yet she knows his love
will set her free to fly, like a dove.

His actions were known and bold
Or was it her thoughts were new?
A sudden whack on her behind
Meant her needed punishment was due.
techgoddess
Posted: Friday, March 07, 2008 9:40:56 PM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Hands tied loosely to the bed
Thoughts were swirling inside her head.

She loved the agenda, even his prose.
The feather teases her here, there, then her nose.
Laying there helpless yet she knows his love
will set her free to fly, like a dove.

His actions were known and bold
Or was it her thoughts were new?
A sudden whack on her behind
Meant her needed punishment was due.

She purred as she lay stretched across his lap
And waited in anticipation for the next slap
Each time he connected, her ass became redder
And her soft bare lips became instantly wetter.


~~Tech
mrplow
Posted: Wednesday, March 12, 2008 6:24:11 PM

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Some nice additions there, thanks for that folks.
justforfun
Posted: Monday, April 28, 2008 1:58:17 AM

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She lay still, not sure what to expect
her skin so sensitive, her nipples erect
Her legs were long, thighs spread wide,
And everything was shaved, nothing to hide.

She loved being submissive
taken in whichever manner he chose
Hands tied loosely to the bed
Thoughts were swirling inside her head.

She loved the agenda, even his prose.
The feather teases her here, there, then her nose.
Laying there helpless yet she knows his love
will set her free to fly, like a dove.

His actions were known and bold
Or was it her thoughts were new?
A sudden whack on her behind
Meant her needed punishment was due.

She purred as she lay stretched across his lap
And waited in anticipation for the next slap
Each time he connected, her ass became redder
And her soft bare lips became instantly wetter.

She begins to moan, as she awakes
a dream so real, with no mistakes
A feeling so intense, that will soon diminish....
Screw my dream, where's my dildo so I can finish.
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