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I wrote this for a friend.
I'm holding this mirror up to you Do you see what I can see? You've got this crust From the busted trust Your heart guarded so carefully
You've got the grooves and got the moves And enjoy life every single day You flash the smile And enjoy a sexy while In the end, you always had to pay
Crossing a field of dreams A rabbit on the run Your steps are light Maybe from a plight Making sure you belong to no one
I'm holding you still with a hug In the mirror, I want you to see You know it's all there You just don't want to care A soft, romantic heart you hide from others and me
Oh, I stood where you stand now Starless and Bible black One kiss to a broken wing From someone trusted, who made me sing What I never knew, she gave me back
You think you're in some audience Real romance only happens on a stage The guys say their lines It's happened many times Their intent making you turn the page
Yes, I know it hurts so much You don't want to talk about it I'm here to listen And here to tell you You'll find someone and want to shout it
He's going to step into your life Warm your heart with a sun-kissed flame Let go of the control It's alright, you won't fall Do you see he's feeling vulnerable all the same?
Many things in life are a given And in that list there is love It's not about sex Or what you expect You don't know what your heart is capable of
There is a movie I'm pointing you at Maybe you've seen it before It's a comedy-romance About a couple who took a chance It made you cry, you want to see more
Now look at me I want you to get this When you live a life of grandeur Nothing is gained if you don't venture You're my friend, I don't want you to miss it
Let him shoot that arrow Don't be a moving target For true love is real You won't believe how you feel Those who made your bed you'll forget
Your friends are standing on the sidelines Wanting the best for you We won't let you get hurt Break out that smile and flirt Go slow, enjoy, and have a life start anew.
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Good poem Bro
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I honestly can say, I can NOT remember the last time, I read something that moved me so much. You really do have a talent hun! You should consider writing as a career. You'd make a KILLING! Keep it up! <3
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you are amazing my friend, thank you so much for you being here
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I can't write poems that rhyme with so much feeling. I can write the un-rhyming poems. But poems that rhyme; just trip the light fantastic on my tongue. I can rhyme when I muck about ha ha.
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Lovely, Rocco
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wow that was heart felt
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