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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 12:56:21 PM

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before i start these are the lyrics to a song that i wrote and composed it is called holy love wish i could upload the song itself:


there are times you know
that fate is much more strong
and yet you fight to show that your love can carry on
but it is hard to see that whole was just a dream when u've believed
its real it was never as it seemes

and you're praying more and more
one day ill knock your door
i have now u know for sure
that ive always stayed inside of you

even love may cry
to know how much i tried
your memory is safe inside
ill see u in the other life
yeah i'll hold you
and i'll kiss you
ill tell u how much i miss u
and i'll touch u
and i'll feel u
and u r always in my heart

and tonight i'll die
baby knowing that i love u
and tonight im proud of the love that i shared u
and tonight i'll die
loving u

now i know im leaving
with my last breath im breathing
i should hold u dreaming
that u and i will summon some love
wholy love is bleeding
and in ur name and mine is believing
dont u know im bleeding
that u got her safe in life for me

when im gone so far away
im sure she wished i stayed
now im waiting 4 the day
behind her white scar is your face i see

even love may cry
to know how much i tried
ur memory is safe inside
ill see u in the other life
yeah i'll hold you
and i'll kiss you
ill tell u how much i miss u
and i'll touch u
and i'll feel u
and u r always in my heart

and tonight i'll die
baby knowing that i love u
and tonight im proud of the love that i shared u
and tonight i'll die
loving u
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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 1:29:03 PM

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Lovely poem
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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 1:31:38 PM

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That's a great song! :)
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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 1:37:17 PM

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LovelyAlexis wrote:
That's a great song! :)


I don't know the song myself but it works as a poem on it's own to lol
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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 1:49:18 PM

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That is breath taking shady. Tragic and haunting. You have a great talent my special friend.
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Posted: Tuesday, August 10, 2010 1:59:18 PM

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So sad yet so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. *big hugs for my dear friend*
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Posted: Wednesday, August 11, 2010 5:25:23 PM

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Lovely, absolutely lovely! And saaaaddddd
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Posted: Thursday, August 12, 2010 4:57:22 AM

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Can't you post the song onto youtube, then we can all hear it....please hello1
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Posted: Thursday, August 12, 2010 9:49:17 AM

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HoneyBee000 wrote:
Can't you post the song onto youtube, then we can all hear it....please hello1


Good idea!!

I read the words twice - firstly with a melancholy tempo in mind, which made me sad, and then again with a more Van Halentype quicker temp to it and then it felt almost inspirational. Honest. Try it.

Oh crap, I'm getting all emotional and wussy!!

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