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magnificent1rascal
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An A to Z Guide for Lush Stories Authors
Updated January 15, 2014

This guide is intended to assist writers in adhering to content
guidelines.



Story Content Guidelines

Age — Characters must be at least 16 years old at the time the sexual situation occurs, including in flashbacks. This means that any "for as long n as I can remember..." type of statements are prohibited, since most of us can remember far earlier than age 16. All stories that contain references to minors — including the author / narrator of a story told in flashback — will be removed.

Age Play — We accept age play stories. It must be clearly spelled out that all participants are actually adults engaging in role play. Such stories should be in Taboo or another appropriate category and have an "age play" tag.

ANAL — Rough or unprepared for anal sex which draws blood is unacceptable.

BDSM — All BDSM activity must be consensual, and submissives or bottoms must be able to put a stop to it. We do not allow knife play, and other forms of edge play may be considered dangerous sexual acts as well. Please see the BDSM Guidelines below for more detail.

Bestiality — We do not accept stories that include sex with animals or that paint animals in a sexual light. However, if a person becomes aroused horseback riding and it is clear that the animal is not the sexual partner, we will accept the story.

BISEXUAL — These stories need to include bisexual activity, mention a bisexual inclination, be about first time with the same sex by someone who had previously identified as hetero, or otherwise indicate that Bisexual is the proper category. Writers sometimes wrongly categorize Lesbian or Gay Male stories as Bisexual.

Blackmail, Extortion & Other Coercion — These stories are allowed. Please note that the person being blackmailed must be willing (even if the person reluctantly agrees) and must ultimately enjoy the outcome. However, blackmail stories involving the threat of physical violence, or totally unwilling participants are disallowed.

Blood — Sex or erotic acts that draw blood may be regarded as dangerous sexual practices, and stories that include such details should be returned to the author for rewriting. Examples include excessive or careless whipping / flogging and rough anal sex. Brief mention of blood may be allowed in First Time stories.

The exception to the no-blood rule is in the Supernatural category. Supernatural stories which do not have some kind of bloodletting are rather rare. Still, we don't need graphic descriptions of blood for titillation sake. Let the vampires, werewolves, et al have their fun, but keep it within reason.

Breath play -- We do accept stories that contain light choking and breath control. However, a person's breathing must not be withheld to the point were a person cannot breathe and is in danger of dying. Turning blue, drowning and suffocation are not allowed.

Celebrity Stories — We do not accept celebrity stories, or those containing famous people. The same is true of fan fiction and derivative works (see Fan Fiction entry).

CHEATING— Our cheating stories feature characters that are unfaithful to their significant others. The characters can feature boyfriends, girlfriends, husbands, and wives. It is not as limiting as the Wife Lovers category in which the central theme is a cheating wife.

Children — No one under age 16 may be depicted in a sexual situation or in a sexual manner. This means participating in sexual activity (including body exploration and masturbation), witnessing it, making mention of it, hearing references to it, or being referred to in any sexual way whatsoever. No sexual arousal, inadvertent or otherwise, or sexual activity of any sort (groping, covert touching, sly attempts at it, etc.) is allowed while children are present. Any risk that children might witness sexual activity must be excluded. Children may be included as characters in a story only if all the above stipulations are met. (See Age entry for further clarification.)

Coercion — Convincing someone to have sex is OK, whether by persuasion, cajoling, begging or other means.

COLLEGE —Our college stories are strictly for shenanigans on college/university campuses. Think frat parties, dorm life and spring break naughtiness when submitting these stories. If the relationship is between a professor and a student, please consider this category as opposed to the Taboo category.

Consent — Consent must be given prior to the act. We do not allow disguised rape, where the victim is forced at the outset but eventually gets into the swing of things. Initial reluctance may be overcome with persuasion, not force, and all participants must retain the ability to put a stop to the proceedings.

Prior knowledge of what may occur, in at least a general sense, is necessary in order for sex to be considered consensual. We do not accept stories in which someone signs away all rights to stop the sexual events without knowing what they may entail, and then finds out too late that some nasty stuff is involved but is powerless to do anything about it, having agreed earlier to do whatever the other party commanded.

CROSSDRESSING — Our crossdressing (cross-dressing) stories feature tales of either gender (usually male) dressing up in the clothes of the opposite sex, for reasons of sexual gratification. Crossdressers are akin to the transvestic fetishism, which is a sexual fetish for the clothing of the opposite gender. The crossdresser can be of any sexual orientation.

CUCKOLD — Our cuckold stories feature tales that illustrate males that allow or encourage their partners, spouse or otherwise, the freedom to have sex with other people. Humiliation, bondage, and orgasm denial is often depicted in these stories, all of these actions are acceptable in this category.

Dangerous Sexual Acts — We specifically prohibit knife play. We may consider a story that involves scissors. However, the blade must not touch the skin deliberately and must only be used to cut clothing. Other forms of edge play may be considered dangerous sexual acts as well. The BDSM Guidelines section that follows contains greater detail about other specific activities considered dangerous sexual practice.

Drinking / Drug Use — Recreational drinking or drug use is allowed.

Drugging — We do not accept stories that include drugging or other artificial means of inducing a state in which a character is unable to resist sexual advances. This includes hypnosis, supernatural mind control, or spiking someone’s drink.

Enemas — As long as no graphic description of fecal matter is given, stories that include enemas are all right.

EROTIC POEMS — Our poetry category features subject matter that covers every area of sexuality, but is not about love or romance. Thus, this category might include anal, fetish, and even BDSM themed poetry. However, as of this update, we will now longer accept incest themed poetry.

EXHIBITIONISM — All exhibition stories are allowed. Please note that this is a complete change from our prior stance. A person does not have to consent to being watched.

Fan Fiction — We do not accept fan fiction and derivative works, even if the characters’ names have been changed. We will not publish anything recognizable as being directly based on the copyrighted work of others.

FANTASY & SCI-FI — Our fantasy and science fiction category covers all technology and advanced universe ideas and themes. Stories that contain time travel, medieval settings, and battles against dark forces are acceptable in this category. Please don't confuse this with our supernatural category.

FETISH — This broad category of fetish stories covers all kinds of fetishism activities, whether they be for feet, latex, smoking, pantyhose, stockings, rubber, high heels, and even balloons!

FIRST TIME — These stories should relate to losing virginity, not to a sexually experienced person partaking in a specific activity for the first time.

GAY MALE — Stories that feature male on male action exclusively belong in this category, rather than in Anal or Oral Sex.

Golden Showers — We allow urination as an element of sexual activity.

GROUP SEX — Group sex is sexual behaviour involving more than two participants at the same time, and often referred to as swinging. Group sex where one person is penetrated by many others at the same time is often referred to as a gang bang. Gang rape is something totally different, and disallowed.

HARDCORE -- This category can contain anything from anal to fisting to rough sex and snowballing, nothing is taboo here. Consider this our most depraved category. All content must still meet guidelines even if it is extreme.

HUMOR — This category covers all erotic satire and comedic themed stories.

INCEST FANTASIES — Stories in this category must be fictional. Please do not include comments like, "this is a true story" or other similar wording. Otherwise, standard rules apply (all characters must be 16 or older and sex must be consensual).

Stories containing sex between family members must be in the Incest category, but it may be all right for depictions of other activities (such as kissing or engaging in group sex but not directly with each other) to remain in other categories.

INTERRACIAL — These stories feature sexual relationships between different ethnicities or races. They may refer to any differing race. Racial slurs are not allowed.

Kidnapping - Stories that are centered around kidnapping are not allowed. However, a cleverly written role play story involving a kidnapping is acceptable; the victim must be aware of the activities and consent must be clear.

Lactation / Breastfeeding — These stories belong in Fetish or Taboo. Stories that focus on lactation as an erotic element are acceptable if the erotic element is exclusively between adults: no erotic nursing or touching of breasts happens when a baby is present, and NO orgasms or arousal from an infant breastfeeding is part of the story. The fact it happens in real life is a subject for breastfeeding and parenting discussion boards, and is not appropriate on an adult erotic story site.

LESBIAN — Tales of women who love other women.

LOVE POEMS — Love poems should contain elements of romance or eroticism. Poems dealing with the death of a loved one, those commemorating disasters, and those that are "downers" in every way are not acceptable here.

LOVE STORIES — This is the only category in which we accept stories that do not necessarily contain erotic elements or sex scenes. These are stories of romance and love, which are generally on a deeper relationship level than stories in other categories. This category focuses on falling in love, being in love, and developing a loving relationship.

MASTURBATION — Masturbating has been defined as the excitation of one's own or another's genital organs, usually to orgasm, by manual contact or means other than sexual intercourse.

MATURE — The participants in these stories are "of a certain age."

Member Names — Using a lush member's name in a story / poem, is permitted, provided you have written consent from that member. Any story / poem, containing heartbreak / slander etc against another member, will be rejected.

MILF STORIES — MILFs and cougars, hot older women / younger guy stories are what we serve up here.

Necrophilia — We do not allow sex with dead people.

NOVELS — Lengthy stories should be broken into shorter chapters if any part is more than 10,000 words. People are unlikely to wade through a story which is any longer.

ORAL SEX — Oral sex stories relate to the giving and receiving of oral pleasure. Cunnilingus refers to oral sex performed on females, whereas fellatio refers to oral sex performed on males. A subcategory, Analingus, refers to oral stimulation of a person's anus, either male or female.

Pet Play — We allow pet play, as long as it doesn't involve the actual family pet. Please ensure it remains strictly role play among consenting adults and does not hint at fantasizing about a real animal. Standard rules apply. These stories should probably go in BDSM or Taboo.

Piss Play — See Golden Showers entry.

Pony Play — We allow pony play. Please ensure it remains strictly role play among consenting adults and does not hint at fantasizing about an actual animal. Standard rules apply. These stories should probably go in BDSM or Taboo.

QUICKIE SEX — A quickie does not require full copulation; it may be limited to oral sex or mutual masturbation.

Rape — We do not accept any stories containing rape.

Rape Fantasy — A rape fantasy suggests the idea of being “owned,” controlled and used. The fantasist is a willing participant, and proceedings can be brought to a stop at any time they choose. It isn’t rape as such, rather than a form of role playing and submission.

RELUCTANCE — A person may initially be reluctant but ultimately must be a willing participant.

Road Head — Receiving oral sex while driving. We allow this foolish and potentially dangerous activity.

Role Play — Stories featuring role play must meet our guidelines. See separate entries for Age Play, Pet Play and Rape Fantasy.

Scat — We do not accept stories with scat play. Enemas are all right as long as no graphic description of fecal matter is given.

SEDUCTION — Our seduction stories are based on the character's ability to persuade another into sexual acts for their own pleasure. The seducer may use any form of persuasive tactic as long as consent is clearly given and doesn't violate any other of our guidelines.

Slapping -- This activity often occurs in BDSM and reluctance stories and is allowed. However, slaps should be open handed and not excessive. Penis slapping is allowed. Back hand slapping and excessive slapping that renders a person seriously injured is prohibited.

Song lyrics -- Lyrics are not allowed in a story's content as they are creative works protected by copyright laws. There is no exception to this rule.

SPANKING — Spanking stories involve characters who like to spank or be spanked.

STRAIGHT SEX — Straight sex stories relate to aesthetic, sexual and romantic attraction exclusively between two individuals of differing genders.

SUPERNATURAL — This is a wide story category, catering for stories with a Supernatural / Non-Human theme. These are often associated with paranormal and occult ideas. Stories to be placed in here include those relating to Vampires, Fantasy Worlds, Ghosts, Aliens, Futuristic themes, Robots, Triffids or anything else the imagination may conjure. We allow a certain amount of leeway in this category, but basic guidelines must be observed. That is, it's all right for a vampire to draw blood by biting someone, but it's not OK to use mind control to force anyone into sex against their will. Please see the Supernatural Guidelines below for more detail.

TABOO — Taboo sex stories relate to the restrictions placed on sexual activities and relationships (sex outside of marriage, adultery, intermarriage).

Terms of Service — Accepted by all members upon joining Lush: "I agree not to post stories which feature underage people / minors. I also agree not to submit stories which include content pertaining to rape, abusive situations, graphic violence, totally unwilling participants, drugging, dangerous sexual acts, suicide, death, or sex with animals (bestiality)."

TOYS — The use of sex toys, vibrators, butt plugs, strapons, pumps, and other adult toys are featured in this section.

TRANS — Trans is a broad category encompassing transvestites, transsexuals, transgendered people, ftm, mtf, ts. There may be some overlap with the crossdressing section — please move to that category if the story is specifically to do with crossdressing.

Unacceptable Content Disclaimer — We do not accept stories which feature underage people / minors. Teen stories are fine providing the characters in the story are of legal age (16 years old). All stories that contain references to minors will be removed, and the submitter may be banned from the site at our discretion.

We also do not accept stories including content pertaining to rape, abusive situations, graphic violence, totally unwilling participants, drugging, dangerous sexual acts, knife play, mutilation, suicide or death.

The same is true for stories featuring sex with animals (bestiality) and scat.

Violence / death - We are accepting stories that contain graphic violence and death in the plot and development of the story. However, if the action takes place during any sexual act, then the story is not allowed. In other words, snuff stories are absolutely not acceptable here. If you have a question as to the story's violent content, please check with a moderator.

Vomit - We do not accept stories featuring sexual acts which result in vomiting or where vomit is described in graphic detail in a non-sexual context.

VOYEUR — Stories involved filming a subject while they are not aware are allowed. However, all parties must be made aware of the film's existence before the story's conclusion and they must agree to the activity.

Water Sports — See Golden Showers entry.

WIFE LOVERS — These stories are specifically concerned with married women. The wife in question may not actually be making love to her husband, and the stories could involve other lovers, either men or women. Akin to this category are slut wives, hot and horny wife stories, wife swapping, and cheating wives.



BDSM Guidelines

All BDSM activity must be consensual, and submissives or bottoms must be able to put a stop to it. Rules of safe play must be followed.

In stories about an ongoing dom / sub or master / slave relationship, consent may be implied; however, if the question arises, it must be clear that the bottom does have a choice. Such a relationship may not be established through fear or coercion. Both (all) partners must be willing participants in their respective roles.

With few exceptions, we prohibit the following activities for the reasons specified.

If done incorrectly or something goes wrong, these could result in death:

- Knife play. This applies to all sharp implements, such as letter openers and scissors. However, scissors may be used to cut away clothing, so long as the person doing the cutting keeps his or her hand between the flesh of their partner and the clothing being cut.
- Self-bondage or unattended bondage. All participants must be able to put a stop to the scene, by employing a safe word or other means. A bound person who is alone does not have that ability, so we do not allow unattended or self-bondage. Exceptions may be considered on a case-by-case basis, if it is clear that self-bondage is being done in a safe manner, including having a means to escape and a backup person involved.
- Electrical play (electrotorture). Stimulation with a small, battery-operated device is acceptable. Hooking someone up to the mains supply is not!

These include bloodletting or a likelihood of bodily injury / psychological damage deemed unacceptable at Lush:

- Blood sports or anything that draws blood. This includes whipping, beating or flogging to the point that blood appears.
- Skin cutting or Scarification.
- Surgical modification.
- Nailing.
- Branding.
- Fire play.
- Abuse. This does not mean standard physical discipline or humiliation within the context of a scene; it means harshly punishing everyday occurrences, using extreme discipline or never allowing any downtime from the psychological demands of a role.




Supernatural Guidelines

- No apes. This is bestiality.
- No unicorns or centaurs because they are basically horses.
- We don’t allow tentacle sex with real animals like octopuses, as this is basically a form of bestiality too. A supernatural story featuring sex with plant tentacles or fantasy creatures would be ok.
- Blood-letting in vampire themed stories is ok.
- We don’t allow snuff as part of a supernatural storyline. Death may be used as a back story but not as part of the actual supernatural storyline.
- We don’t allow mind control through supernatural powers, as all sex (even supernatural sex) needs to be consensual.



Story Submission Guidelines

Categories Since many stories fit into multiple categories, we recognize that it might be difficult to choose the correct one. Please keep the following in mind when selecting a category: Stories with sex between or among family members must go in Incest; stories featuring any magical entity or occurrence belong in Supernatural; stories about dominance and submission need to be in BDSM; and stories in which any party is hesitant should go in Reluctance. Other fitting categories may be used as tags. We reserve the right to move any story into a different category if we see fit.

"Do Not Resubmit" If you receive this message from a moderator along with a rejection notice, please do not resubmit the story, either by editing the existing file or as a new submission. We track submissions and know which are not to be accepted.

Formatting A story may be rejected for improper formatting (hard returns at the end of each line, no blank space between paragraphs, etc.). It is the writer's responsibility to make sure the submission is formatted according to our specifications; we will not publish stories that are improperly formatted.

Grammar Proper grammar is essential. Please use the pull-down menus in the highly useful Guide to Grammar & Writing to learn about the specific items that may be troubling you. Some of the more common mistakes involve sentence fragments, run-on sentences, subject-verb agreement and tense shifts.

One-Liner The one-liner (a short sentence describing the story) is not required. If included, it should pertain to the story.

Punctuation Stories must include correct punctuation. Please refer to our User Friendly Guide to Punctuation if you have questions. When using quotation marks, either American or British punctuation is acceptable, but it should be consistent throughout the story.

Spelling Both American English and British English are acceptable.

Story Length Stories should be between 600 and 10,000 words. Except for Love Poems, submissions shorter than 3,000 characters (about 600 words) are kicked back programatically. Story verifiers may, at their discretion, either verify or return stories of slightly more than 10,000 words. Stories longer than 10,500 words will be removed with a request they either be trimmed to 10,000 words or submitted as chapters.

Suspension of Your Account Submitting a story that egregiously violates our rules will result in immediate account suspension. This includes (but is not necessarily limited to) stories that depict rape, mutilation, excessive violence, bestiality, necrophilia or pedophilia. In most cases, submitting such a story will also result in account deletion, and in extreme situations the offender will be reported to the appropriate authorities.

If any story is submitted multiple times without the necessary corrections being made, the writer will first be given a warning and then may be suspended upon any subsequent resubmission of the same story. Please heed the instructions of the story verifiers to avoid this outcome.

Tags Tags are required and should always relate to the story.

Titles Please adhere to the following standards: Titles should be in Title Case, not in ALL CAPS; do not place a period (full stop) at the end of the title; do not use any emoticons in the title; and check the spelling. "Untitled" is not an acceptable title.


Competitions, Editors' Picks, and Recommended Reads

Competitions are periodically held for all authors. You may submit any original work that satisfies the theme of the contest within the competition's entry date and closing date. In order for your story to place or win a competition, it must have received a minimum of ten votes. The results of the competition are announced a week to ten days after its closing and are final. There will be no public debate about the results.

Editors' Picks are awarded to select stories that have been nominated by story moderators and a group of Lush authors. After nomination, a story is considered by the EP panel and the award is either given or not given. These stories are the cream of the crop on Lush.

Recommended Reads are selected by our story moderators. Generally, these are high quality stories that meet a certain standard and stand out from the crowd.



Maggie Rascal
nicola
Posted: Wednesday, January 16, 2013 3:00:12 PM

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Joined: 12/6/2006
Posts: 24,841
Location: Sydney, Australia
Updated 16 January 2013.
Catnip
Posted: Monday, January 28, 2013 3:59:33 AM

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Posts: 3,972
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Bump

sprite
Posted: Thursday, September 19, 2013 3:00:22 AM

Rank: Her Royal Spriteness

Joined: 6/18/2010
Posts: 13,548
Location: My Tower, United States
bump fish
Coco
Posted: Sunday, October 06, 2013 9:47:38 AM

Rank: Story Lover

Joined: 7/22/2011
Posts: 4,074
Location: Fantasy City, United States
MHCR
Posted: Friday, October 18, 2013 1:03:37 PM

Rank: Rookie Scribe

Joined: 10/9/2013
Posts: 1
Location: Canada
There is a surprising amount of hypocracy in those rules. Do a search for Force and read any of the stories on the first page. The bulk are in blatant violation of some of the rules listed above. Yes I am a disgruntled member that has attempted to submit borderline stories however have, in my opinion, met the requirements of the site.
sprite
Posted: Friday, October 18, 2013 1:18:27 PM

Rank: Her Royal Spriteness

Joined: 6/18/2010
Posts: 13,548
Location: My Tower, United States
MHCR wrote:
There is a surprising amount of hypocracy in those rules. Do a search for Force and read any of the stories on the first page. The bulk are in blatant violation of some of the rules listed above. Yes I am a disgruntled member that has attempted to submit borderline stories however have, in my opinion, met the requirements of the site.


In order to pay back the loan she was presented with two options. Sign the Slave Contract that would put her up for auction or watch her family be thrown out on the street and left destitute.

***

Walking past the van the sliding door opens up suddenly. Catching her completely by surprise there is no time to react. The large hands wrap around her arms and mouth pulling her inside with barely a whimper. The door slides shut again and the van starts moving away slowly. Two strong hands grip her arms and hold her against the cold metal floor.

The hand over her mouth is quickly replaced by a gag. A large ball is shoved inside and forces her lips open. The leather strap digs into her flesh as it's wrapped around her head and buckled shut. All three men in the back are silent as they flip her over onto her stomach. Her hands are pulled back roughly and wrists placed together. They are bound tightly together as her legs are bent at the knees. A rope is wrapped around her ankles.

Now that she is fully hog tied on the floor the men's hands finally release her. The van comes to it's first stop just a block from her apartment.

Her eyes are running wild as the van moves along to it's destination. Every last scream is lost to the rubber ball.


***

She can't make out a single detail of the room except the large hands moving towards her. A terrified scream failing to escape her lips as the rope is untied from her ankles. Her arms are still behind her back as she is rolled over onto her stomach. The large hands gripping the cheap material of her work uniform. Yet another scream lost to the gag as the man rips the fabric open.

***

Suddenly her panties are around her ankles as the large man behind her pulls them down. She tries to squeeze her legs together fruitlessly. Her young trimmed pussy now on display for the entire room. Having no way to cover herself up she can only stand there completely humiliated. She is turned around by the strong hands controlling her to show off her tight and round ass.

The bidding continues as tears finally start to flow. The initial shock finally wearing off and the fear settling in. The realization that this is all about to happen and there is not a thing she can do to stop it.


***

Her eyes open abruptly as the kennel is jostled. Being lifted from the trunk of the limo she tries to look around but all she can see is darkness. Touching her cheeks when she realizes their wet. She must have been crying even in her sleep. Her naked body lying on the bottom of the steel cage as it's carried through the pitch black night.

***

Not really what the guidelines would consider borderline: Consent — Consent must be given prior to the act. We do not allow disguised rape, where the victim is forced at the outset but eventually gets into the swing of things. Initial reluctance may be overcome with persuasion, not force, and all participants must retain the ability to put a stop to the proceedings.

Prior knowledge of what may occur, in at least a general sense, is necessary in order for sex to be considered consensual. We do not accept stories in which someone signs away all rights to stop the sexual events without knowing what they may entail, and then finds out too late that some nasty stuff is involved but is powerless to do anything about it, having agreed earlier to do whatever the other party commanded.

just a reminder to authors. please read the guideline and, if you're not sure if something will pass or not, contact one of the story mods. we really do try our best to work with the writers and get your stories published. that said, the rules are posted in black and white and, if you can't adhere to them, we can't publish your stories, it's that simple. you may not agree with them, you may not like them, but this is what you've agreed to when joining the site.

for the record, the guidelines are constantly evolving - what might have been passable a few years may no longer adhere to the spirit of what will pass now, so please be aware of that when you comb thru past stories for examples of what is allowed.



LovingHer17
Posted: Friday, December 06, 2013 8:35:35 PM

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Location: Miami, United States
Bump


Coco
Posted: Wednesday, January 15, 2014 11:08:46 AM

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Posts: 4,074
Location: Fantasy City, United States
This guide has been updated to reflect the new categories.

1LovelyKinkyKitsune
Posted: Thursday, March 13, 2014 11:41:07 AM

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Location: w/my ONLY mate ♥ N/A ♥ plz do not ask
Is there a link or place for Lush formatting specifications?
(...besides the word count I just read)

REVISION: I found it! Lush Format

SuccubusDreams
Posted: Saturday, April 12, 2014 8:05:28 PM

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Location: SF bay area, United States
Question, I just wrote a scene where one participant starts to go too far The abuse in question consists of a rough bj followed by a single slap to the face when the recipient in my story refuses to continue. The character was not enjoying the situation and another character steps in to stop things. OK or out of bounds?

“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough."- Mae West


sprite
Posted: Saturday, April 12, 2014 8:37:51 PM

Rank: Her Royal Spriteness

Joined: 6/18/2010
Posts: 13,548
Location: My Tower, United States
SuccubusDreams wrote:
Question, I just wrote a scene where one participant starts to go too far The abuse in question consists of a rough bj followed by a single slap to the face when the recipient in my story refuses to continue. The character was not enjoying the situation and another character steps in to stop things. OK or out of bounds?


depends. does she consent to the BJ up until she asks him to stop, and then, does he stop? or is she resistant from the start? the second will get it sent back. i'd have to actually read the scene to make a call, honestly.
SuccubusDreams
Posted: Saturday, April 12, 2014 10:11:55 PM

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I guess I'll find out when i submit it, assuming the story stays as is. I didn't really mean to send it in such a dark direction and I'm not entirely sure I'll keep it but it did turn out to be a nice piece of writing.

“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough."- Mae West


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