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Hi everyone,
I'm kit and new to the sight! I would some feedback on any of my writes! I will do the same for you!! Thank you so much!!
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Well you can start by not using "write" as a noun Welcome to Lush
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Welcome to Lush, Mayza1. 
Ut incepit fidelis, sic permanet.
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I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are:)
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Mayza1 wrote:I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are:) You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections...
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LiquidMatthew wrote:You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections... You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind?  lol
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Poppet wrote:You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind? lol If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities...
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Poppet wrote:You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind? lol that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :)
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sprite wrote:that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :)  You said... those three specific words - together!
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next to rousing his conscience, is - not to give him things
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to make him think things for himself - George MacDonald
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LiquidMatthew wrote:If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities... Ha, Now now.. Don't go making me blush Matthew. ^-^ sprite wrote:that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something! :) I knew it.. It screamed Sprite... xP You can stay.. You tickle my fancy.. ;) WellMadeMale wrote:You said... those three specific words - together! This IS Sprite we're talking about! XP
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