Hi everyone,
I'm kit and new to the sight! I would some feedback on any of my writes! I will do the same for you!! Thank you so much!!
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Well you can start by not using "write" as a noun
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Gingerbread Lover
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Welcome to Lush, Mayza1. 
Ut incepit fidelis, sic permanet.
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I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are
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I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are
Welcome!
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I didn't ask to be corrected thanks! But for your sake, I'll remember to care about what people think of me when I have no idea who they are
You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections...
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You're, uh, kinda making it unappealing to comment and critique your writes when this is how you react to basic grammatical corrections...
You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind?
lol
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You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind?
If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities...
Her Royal Spriteness
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Quote by Poppet
You stole what I was going to say... Are you invading my mind?
that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something!
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that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something!
You said... those three specific words - together!
The same GQP demanding we move on from January 6th, 2021 is still doing audits of the November 3rd, 2020 election.
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If I could do that, I'd have written a story about it already. Oh, the possibilities...
Ha, Now now.. Don't go making me blush Matthew. ^-^
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that was me, actually - sorry, but really, it's fun in here! like a crazy sexual circus or something!
I knew it.. It screamed Sprite... xP You can stay.. You tickle my fancy.. ;)
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You said... those three specific words - together!
This IS Sprite we're talking about! XP