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nigelsnaughty
Posted: Tuesday, November 05, 2013 11:57:31 AM

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Joined: 10/30/2010
Posts: 34
Location: West Midlands, United Kingdom
Hi all,
I'm finding that I very much like to think up, and in turn write erotic stories.
I put my first attempt up a few weeks ago with the help of Lisa.
I do though have a serious problem with my grammar and layout.
I've spent time going through the various help resources available in the forum.
But more often than not end up confusing myself.

So I thought I would ask you guys, I would like to show someone my stories,
and get there help to show were I’m going wrong.

Many thanks in advance Nigel.

Mazza
Posted: Tuesday, November 05, 2013 2:30:15 PM

Rank: Mazztastic

Joined: 9/20/2012
Posts: 3,026
Location: Scotland, United Kingdom
nigelsnaughty wrote:
Hi all,
I'm finding that I very much like to think up, and in turn write erotic stories.
I put my first attempt up a few weeks ago with the help of Lisa.
I do though have a serious problem with my grammar and layout.
I've spent time going through the various help resources available in the forum.
But more often than not end up confusing myself.

So I thought I would ask you guys, I would like to show someone my stories,
and get there help to show were I’m going wrong.

Many thanks in advance Nigel.



If you're not in a hurry, I'd be happy to take a look for you - PM me, if you're interested?
XblueX
Posted: Tuesday, November 05, 2013 9:33:54 PM

Rank: Active Ink Slinger

Joined: 9/9/2013
Posts: 32
Location: United States
Im In the same situation...I have approximately 6 stories one that has several chapters. I'm nervous to submit them.. Any advise?
Haineko
Posted: Tuesday, November 05, 2013 10:53:31 PM

Rank: Forum Guru

Joined: 2/8/2013
Posts: 777
Location: my heart & soul is with my Mistress in, Greece
XblueX wrote:
Im In the same situation...I have approximately 6 stories one that has several chapters. I'm nervous to submit them.. Any advise?

have a friend proof read them and go for it. If it gets rejected the mods are awesome about being nice and helping fix it.

My latest one got rejected twice and they were very polite & helpful both times.

latest comp story: Lilith versus Ursula

most likely to get me my famous story badge back
His & Hers secrets Ch1

Under construction (back in business)
Editing: Aphrodite's Gift ch1 (Fantasy/Sci-fi)
On deck: His & Hers Secret CHs 2 & 3 (Trans)

my latest
My Dark Lover ch1 (supernatural)
XblueX
Posted: Wednesday, November 06, 2013 5:26:29 AM

Rank: Active Ink Slinger

Joined: 9/9/2013
Posts: 32
Location: United States
I don't have any friends on here yet. What's exactly are mods?
sprite
Posted: Thursday, November 07, 2013 9:45:17 AM

Rank: Her Royal Spriteness

Joined: 6/18/2010
Posts: 14,414
Location: My Tower, United States
XblueX wrote:
I don't have any friends on here yet. What's exactly are mods?


mods are Story mods, the people who read and verify stories here. :)

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/west-coast-games-part-one-the-beach.aspx
buttercup2u
Posted: Sunday, November 10, 2013 8:38:48 PM

Rank: Forum Guru

Joined: 10/13/2012
Posts: 406
Location: lost in paradise, United States
I have found that reading the story out loud to myself at least a few hours helps me to find many of my errors. Still a few will slip by and the mods are helpful about helping me to correct them.

Good Luck!
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