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nigelsnaughty
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Hi all,
I'm finding that I very much like to think up, and in turn write erotic stories.
I put my first attempt up a few weeks ago with the help of Lisa.
I do though have a serious problem with my grammar and layout.
I've spent time going through the various help resources available in the forum.
But more often than not end up confusing myself.

So I thought I would ask you guys, I would like to show someone my stories,
and get there help to show were I’m going wrong.

Many thanks in advance Nigel.
Mazza
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Quote by nigelsnaughty
Hi all,
I'm finding that I very much like to think up, and in turn write erotic stories.
I put my first attempt up a few weeks ago with the help of Lisa.
I do though have a serious problem with my grammar and layout.
I've spent time going through the various help resources available in the forum.
But more often than not end up confusing myself.

So I thought I would ask you guys, I would like to show someone my stories,
and get there help to show were I’m going wrong.

Many thanks in advance Nigel.



If you're not in a hurry, I'd be happy to take a look for you - PM me, if you're interested?
XblueX
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Im In the same situation...I have approximately 6 stories one that has several chapters. I'm nervous to submit them.. Any advise?
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Quote by XblueX
Im In the same situation...I have approximately 6 stories one that has several chapters. I'm nervous to submit them.. Any advise?

have a friend proof read them and go for it. If it gets rejected the mods are awesome about being nice and helping fix it.

My latest one got rejected twice and they were very polite & helpful both times.
XblueX
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I don't have any friends on here yet. What's exactly are mods?
sprite
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Quote by XblueX
I don't have any friends on here yet. What's exactly are mods?


mods are Story mods, the people who read and verify stories here. smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

buttercup2u
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I have found that reading the story out loud to myself at least a few hours helps me to find many of my errors. Still a few will slip by and the mods are helpful about helping me to correct them.

Good Luck!
charlessmythe
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Quote by nigelsnaughty
Hi all,
I'm finding that I very much like to think up, and in turn write erotic stories.
I put my first attempt up a few weeks ago with the help of Lisa.
I do though have a serious problem with my grammar and layout.
I've spent time going through the various help resources available in the forum.
But more often than not end up confusing myself.

So I thought I would ask you guys, I would like to show someone my stories,
and get there help to show were I’m going wrong.

Many thanks in advance Nigel.


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...I would be glad to help...