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techgoddess
Posted: Thursday, November 06, 2008 1:18:18 PM

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roccotool wrote:
Mumbles, with writing like that, she's gonna wear me out before I even get there...Whistle


You love it and you know it!!

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
Birdie
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 8:16:03 AM

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Okay, don't laugh at me for this...

ECHO

My heart is just an echo
of another time and place.
I close my eyes and think of him,
try to see his face.

In my mind he's waiting
I fall into his arms.
I can no longer fight it,
I surrender to his warmth.

His eyes say to mine,
words he will not speak.
They fill my mind and suddenly
I feel my heart go weak.

My body begins to tremble
from his loving, gentle touch.
A touch I long for every night,
from a man I crave so much.

Once again I am alone,
as I awaken from my dreams.
My empty heart feels heavy inside,
like a bird without it's wings.

Guest
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 9:22:20 AM

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Nice LB
Batman
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 9:28:35 AM

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I had that feeling this summer LB. Never been away from her some much nor for so long at a time.

Very Nice

Bat
Guest
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 11:34:53 AM

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That's a real nice poem, Birdie. Full of emotion.
Birdie
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 12:15:11 PM

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Thanks everyone. It's not exactly finished but it is a start, I guess...dontknow
Zafia
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 12:16:16 PM

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I like it very much.....hello2

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





Birdie
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 12:18:55 PM

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Thanks Zaf! hello1
Susan
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 5:04:13 PM

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Very good Birdie
techgoddess
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 5:14:34 PM

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I liked it very much as well! Thanks for sharing it with us!

~~Tech

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
nicola
Posted: Friday, November 07, 2008 7:06:13 PM

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Very heartfelt Lil_Birdie.

Nobody is going to laugh at you, don't be afraid to write and submit anything in here icon_smile
Birdie
Posted: Saturday, November 08, 2008 5:54:15 AM

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Thank you everyone!
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Saturday, November 08, 2008 10:02:18 AM

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I found her smiling
When I reared my happy face
From between her thighs
I found her smiling
When, my tongue gliding upwards
I looked into her eyes
I found her smiling
A glazed look coming over her
And she came with such release
I found her smiling
When we kissed
She begged me continue with my feast


A bit rough, but I have this urge to eat breakfast. Gotta go!
techgoddess
Posted: Saturday, November 08, 2008 11:24:27 AM

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Smiles at the thought of what ASP had for breakfast!

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
Guest
Posted: Sunday, November 09, 2008 7:02:41 PM

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Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next.
techgoddess
Posted: Monday, November 10, 2008 4:29:35 AM

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roccotool wrote:
Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next.


oh so many comebacks....but so little time....L16

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Monday, November 10, 2008 6:06:15 PM

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I enjoy...


Kitty in the mornings.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, November 11, 2008 3:39:54 PM

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Darn, I set that joke up well, too.
Guest
Posted: Saturday, January 17, 2009 7:02:10 PM

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I don't know about everyone else but I am so ready for spring. Here's a new one I wrote hope you all like it.

Winter Cold

winter cold
chills me to
the bone

stuck inside
can not ride
wish the
cold would go

longing for
days gone by
warmer times
going on
a long
bike ride

several months
to go before
the cold will go

winter cold
chills me
to the bone

need to
ride to
stay warm

longing for
warm days
and cool nights

winter would
you please
go away?
give me
warm weather
anyday
Batman
Posted: Saturday, January 17, 2009 9:38:14 PM

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Man, that's cold.

But chilling to the bone.
Make for warm weather - it's coming.
Hang tough.

Bat
Guest
Posted: Saturday, January 17, 2009 9:48:02 PM

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Bat can't come fast enough for me
Batman
Posted: Saturday, January 17, 2009 9:54:24 PM

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Bikebum, this is for you:

Quote:
'WINTER'

A poem by Abigail Elizabeth McIntyre


SHIT, It's Cold!



The End


Bat
Guest
Posted: Sunday, January 18, 2009 2:00:03 PM

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Right on Bat you couldn't have said it any better
Guest
Posted: Sunday, January 18, 2009 6:00:38 PM

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Quote:
Bat can't come fast enough for me


I'll bet Batgirl says that all the time, huh, Bat?
Guest
Posted: Sunday, January 25, 2009 12:19:50 PM

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Mentally Bent? You be the judge

Form the crazy biker Ride and be freeicon_smile

Sitting at home
in my chair
warm in my chair
got up to
go for a ride
on my bike
in the cold winter air

cold at first
till the legs
but as i ride
and pedal the bike
i start to feel
alive.

the wind in
my face makes
my heart race
i feel so alive
and free on
my bike

getting cold
turning around
heading back home
is where i
will be found

back in my chair
i sit here and write
my bike is
put away for the night

till i feel blue again
i think i will stay in
warmed in my chair
i sip on my tea
so what do you think
am i mentally bent?



Let me know what ya'all think
techgoddess
Posted: Sunday, January 25, 2009 12:30:55 PM

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Nice post there BB. Short, descriptive lines help paint the picture.

~~Tech
Two wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
Guest
Posted: Sunday, January 25, 2009 12:36:32 PM

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Thanks Tech
Guest
Posted: Wednesday, April 08, 2009 4:55:28 PM

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Okay, I'm going to be brave and put one here... never showed any of my work to anyone, so be nice... crybaby

YOU AND ME

Lying in a pool of tears I had cried
Knowing I had truly tried
But still wishing I had already died
That is where you found me

Still hurting, I went along
Expecting nothing more than the same old song
And in the end to be done wrong
Then to your heart you bound me

I still try to find the flaws
I know I should leave it, but at me it gnaws
Especially when you say you love me 'just because'
Your behavior confounds me

I can't see my life without you near
I believe in you and I want you to hear
That I love you and there's nothing you need to fear
Your arms I want wrapped around me

It came from out of the blue
These feelings I have so right, so new
I won't say it's perfect, but it's oh so true
With your love, you astound me



Be gentle dear readers...

Ling
Guest
Posted: Wednesday, April 08, 2009 5:40:57 PM

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Ling that was very good
Catnip
Posted: Thursday, April 09, 2009 7:56:49 AM

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Ling,
Im bad at gentle...
so let me just sit here and purr as I reed it for a second time.

And Little birdie I'll purr some for you aswell.

(I'll post something aswell though I'm going to wait a tad so people get to really read Ling-lee's poem)

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