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roccotool wrote:Mumbles, with writing like that, she's gonna wear me out before I even get there...  You love it and you know it!!
~~TechTwo wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
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Okay, don't laugh at me for this...
ECHO
My heart is just an echo
of another time and place.
I close my eyes and think of him,
try to see his face.
In my mind he's waiting
I fall into his arms.
I can no longer fight it,
I surrender to his warmth.
His eyes say to mine,
words he will not speak.
They fill my mind and suddenly
I feel my heart go weak.
My body begins to tremble
from his loving, gentle touch.
A touch I long for every night,
from a man I crave so much.
Once again I am alone,
as I awaken from my dreams.
My empty heart feels heavy inside,
like a bird without it's wings.
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Nice LB
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I had that feeling this summer LB. Never been away from her some much nor for so long at a time.
Very Nice
Bat
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That's a real nice poem, Birdie. Full of emotion.
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Thanks everyone. It's not exactly finished but it is a start, I guess... 
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I like it very much..... 
"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."
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Thanks Zaf! 
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Very good Birdie
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I liked it very much as well! Thanks for sharing it with us!
~~Tech
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Very heartfelt Lil_Birdie. Nobody is going to laugh at you, don't be afraid to write and submit anything in here 
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Thank you everyone!
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I found her smiling
When I reared my happy face
From between her thighs
I found her smiling
When, my tongue gliding upwards
I looked into her eyes
I found her smiling
A glazed look coming over her
And she came with such release
I found her smiling
When we kissed
She begged me continue with my feast
A bit rough, but I have this urge to eat breakfast. Gotta go!
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Smiles at the thought of what ASP had for breakfast!
~~Tech
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Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next.
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roccotool wrote:Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next. oh so many comebacks....but so little time.... 
~~TechTwo wrongs don't make a right, but three lefts do...
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I enjoy...
Kitty in the mornings.
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Darn, I set that joke up well, too.
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I don't know about everyone else but I am so ready for spring. Here's a new one I wrote hope you all like it.
Winter Cold
winter cold
chills me to
the bone
stuck inside
can not ride
wish the
cold would go
longing for
days gone by
warmer times
going on
a long
bike ride
several months
to go before
the cold will go
winter cold
chills me
to the bone
need to
ride to
stay warm
longing for
warm days
and cool nights
winter would
you please
go away?
give me
warm weather
anyday
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Man, that's cold.
But chilling to the bone.
Make for warm weather - it's coming.
Hang tough.
Bat
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Bat can't come fast enough for me
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Bikebum, this is for you: Quote:'WINTER'
A poem by Abigail Elizabeth McIntyre
SHIT, It's Cold!
The End Bat
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Right on Bat you couldn't have said it any better
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Quote:Bat can't come fast enough for me I'll bet Batgirl says that all the time, huh, Bat?
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Mentally Bent? You be the judgeForm the crazy biker Ride and be free Sitting at home in my chair warm in my chair got up to go for a ride on my bike in the cold winter air cold at first till the legs but as i ride and pedal the bike i start to feel alive. the wind in my face makes my heart race i feel so alive and free on my bike getting cold turning around heading back home is where i will be found back in my chair i sit here and write my bike is put away for the night till i feel blue again i think i will stay in warmed in my chair i sip on my tea so what do you think am i mentally bent? Let me know what ya'all think
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Nice post there BB. Short, descriptive lines help paint the picture.
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Thanks Tech
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Okay, I'm going to be brave and put one here... never showed any of my work to anyone, so be nice...  YOU AND ME Lying in a pool of tears I had cried Knowing I had truly tried But still wishing I had already died That is where you found me Still hurting, I went along Expecting nothing more than the same old song And in the end to be done wrong Then to your heart you bound me I still try to find the flaws I know I should leave it, but at me it gnaws Especially when you say you love me 'just because' Your behavior confounds me I can't see my life without you near I believe in you and I want you to hear That I love you and there's nothing you need to fear Your arms I want wrapped around me It came from out of the blue These feelings I have so right, so new I won't say it's perfect, but it's oh so true With your love, you astound me Be gentle dear readers... Ling
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Ling that was very good
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Ling, Im bad at gentle... so let me just sit here and purr as I reed it for a second time. And Little birdie I'll purr some for you aswell. (I'll post something aswell though I'm going to wait a tad so people get to really read Ling-lee's poem)
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