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I think it would be fair to assume that quite a few of the men that read Lush stories masturbate at the same time. But do the women do the same? If so, what in a storyline is guaranteed to get you going?
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Flawless spelling and grammar gets me a bit hot and bothered. Sadly, I'm not joking!
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Lisa wrote:Flawless spelling and grammar gets me a bit hot and bothered.
Sadly, I'm not joking! So you dont get off that much
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DBarclay wrote:Lisa wrote:Flawless spelling and grammar gets me a bit hot and bothered.
Sadly, I'm not joking! So you dont get off that much 
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You know what really turns me on in stories, DB?
Ellipsis's by the ton....:-)
"A black cat crossing your path signifies that the animal is going somewhere." - Groucho Marx
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Lisa wrote:DBarclay wrote:Lisa wrote:Flawless spelling and grammar gets me a bit hot and bothered.
Sadly, I'm not joking! So you dont get off that much ROTFLMFAO!!
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Charley wrote:I think it would be fair to assume that quite a few of the men that read Lush stories masturbate at the same time. But do the women do the same? If so, what in a storyline is guaranteed to get you going? Incredibly poor spelling and grammar derail me to the point that I want to punish the writer, which of course, would lead to an incredibly hot erotic story, well edited, formatted and presented. So yes, those things, rather than the subject matter would get me going to the point where I wouldn't stop until someone would be screaming for mercy. And it would not be me. Wait, what is in the storyline, rather than the deficiencies of the story line and presentation that get me going? Oh, well, that's somewhat personal, don't you think?
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castlequeen wrote:You know what really turns me on in stories, DB?
Ellipsis's by the ton....:-)
you got a top accolade the other day, you listened to me at last...shame very few others do
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DBarclay wrote:
you listened to me at last...shame very few others do
What? Did you actually say something? Or was that a hypersonic elliptical buzzing sound I heard?
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gypsymoth wrote:DBarclay wrote:
you listened to me at last...shame very few others do
What? Did you actually say something? Or was that a hypersonic elliptical buzzing sound I heard? LOL .. I am now off to savage your stories Update ..... Well I would if you had written any ....
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 You should see what doesn't make it to the "published on Lush" stage DB, I think those are in danger of dulling my sex drive permanently 
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I been trying to make mine better each time thats why i like the comments it helps :)
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is the pope Catholic??
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I think the pope is Jewish.
Forget who you thought I was, I'm The Chris J bitch!
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TheChrisJ wrote:I think the pope is Jewish. No - that was Jesus.
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That's right, the Pope Buddhist.
Forget who you thought I was, I'm The Chris J bitch!
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MilfBeauty wrote:I been trying to make mine better each time thats why i like the comments it helps :) milfbeauty can I smell your ass?
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Yes, I do... Too bad the steamy stories end too fast. (or maybe it''s just my glasses getting steamed)
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Blowboy wrote:MilfBeauty wrote:I been trying to make mine better each time thats why i like the comments it helps :) milfbeauty can I smell your ass? 
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Indeed ALi... I wonder...
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MilfBeauty wrote:I been trying to make mine better each time thats why i like the comments it helps :) And you have imporoved with every story ...very well done ..
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DBarclay wrote:MilfBeauty wrote:I been trying to make mine better each time thats why i like the comments it helps :) And you have imporoved with every story ...very well done .. Wow that's high praise coming from The Sanctimonious Critic.
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Lisa wrote:Flawless spelling and grammar gets me a bit hot and bothered.
Sadly, I'm not joking! I have $10 for any pictures of you...looking at proper punctuation? 
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Nope not while reading phone sex with my special someone is so much better!!!
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 Bunny Rabbits cute and fuzzy they want to love you but they have razor sharp teeth - don't piss them off!
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Charley (you not-so-subtle dog you)  Why do I sense your motives for starting this thread are suspect?Yes, spelling/grammer issues do pose a minor distraction but them the show must go on..  I just wish more of then went on and on.
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Gypsy, Gypsy, Gypsy, what on earth are you implying? Are you suggesting that I have some salacious motive? Could it be that you think I come to this site simply for titillation and cheap thrills? Well, okay, yes, it's mainly that, but I also have an inquiring mind! PM me anytime, so I can inquire further. Cx
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Picking up on what others have touched upon, I must say that I find it tiring, even boring, when I try to read a story that has spelling, grammatical, and especially punctuation errors. I sometimes think that the little country schools that I attended in rural America taught these things better than any school of the last 20-30 years. So many of those stories, no matter their storyline, end up being boring and only partially read by me, simply due to having so many errors.
I'm not expecting completely error-free work from everyone--I'm sure I have some errors that my proofreading didn't catch. Buy a book from a book store on story writing, in general. They would be a big help.
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Charley wrote:I think it would be fair to assume that quite a few of the men that read Lush stories masturbate at the same time. But do the women do the same? If so, what in a storyline is guaranteed to get you going? An honest answer....hell yeah I get myself going while reading LS...at this moment I have my vibrator deep in my cunt pulsing around it from a rather exciting orgasm....and as to what storyline I like...it vary's from day to day but anal, gay male, lesbian, incest.....I'm rather curious about all types of stories so I don't cut my choices short! 
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Infact, I do. 
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If a story has spelling and grammar mistakes that distract from my reading it, I stop. However, a mistake here or there doesn't stop me from bringing out the vibrator...So yes, I do.
Wishing you well,
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