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I know most stories are written in the past tense. I'm curious what most of you think of stories written in present tense, especially from the first person view?I wrote my first story here, Chloe's first spanking, in the present tense. My idea was since I was the narrator, I wanted the story told as if it was happening real time. I wanted the story to unfold simultaneously for my characters and the readers to give it a sense of unknown and suspense.But after I published the first two parts, I'm beginning to regret my choice. I feel like it's somewhat awkward to write in the present tense at all times. I've been considering going back and change them to the past tense so it'll be easier for me to continue.Do you guys think it's worth the effort? What do you prefer or if you don't care either way?
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She answered the door. She's an astonishingly beautiful woman, even though she's in her late 30's. Her deep cleavage peeking through from the bright red sundress, and red high heels. Her long wavy blond hair framing her heart-shaped face, her blue eyes sparkling in the sunlight. No, Joe thought. It's not that her eyes were sparkling. She was crying, and the sparkles were tears in her eyes. ...
Added 07 May 2010 | Category Incest
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Pleaseread parts I - III first in order to fully enjoy the story; otherwise it's hard to fully appreciate Chloe's humiliation and Beth's desperation. Enjoy! Long story short, Chloe caught my father spanking my bare ass, tried to stop but only to find herself on top of my father's lap, skirt up and panties down. * * * I can't help but admiring...
Added 04 Mar 2010 | Category Spanking
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Shortly after school started, Chloe became THE most popular girl, possibly in our entire school history. I mean, a popular Asian girl? Her resume doesn't fit a stereotypical popular high school girl in this part of the country. Her slender physique and pale skin are surprisingly deceiving--she's one of the most athletic girls in school. Chloe shows her strength in volleyball, being...
Added 06 Jan 2010 | Category Spanking
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Chloe cries, "Oh my god, Beth!" She raises her voice. "What are you doing to her, you pervert!" I am silent, my blistering red bottom stares right back at her. I don't dare to move as my father's hand is still on the small of my back. He says, "Ah, so you're the neighbor girl, huh?" "Get your hands off of her, or I'll call the police right away." Chloe ignores the rhetorical question....
Added 23 Nov 2009 | Category Spanking
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I'm sitting on the lawn chair on the back porch reading a second hand paper back romance novel. It's early in the afternoon, the scorching sun seems almost able to pierce through our decades old leaky roof above the porch. The porch opens to a fence-less backyard, with its long, burned golden grasses, that it's not hard for one to figure the house owner doesn't care too much for it. ...
Added 01 Nov 2009 | Category Spanking
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