I am, in fact, JefferyB. I'm not nearly smart enough to think of a clever name or come up with a sexy photo ... mostly because I'm not very clever or sexy. I'm just an old guy that has wanted to write erotic stories for many years. In fact I've been writing them more or less secretly for a few years. Now that I've found this site I'm hoping to get some feedback on my writing and my stories. So I hope that you'll pass along your comments. I'm not looking to find a sex partner, but for good advice on how to improve my writing. Many thanks to those of you that have already shared your thoughts with me.
I read most of the entries into the "Quickie" competition and I'd have to say that there were some excellent stories submitted within the guidelines given. The winning story was obviously the best ... Well Done! But we saw some new writers that many of us had not seen/read previously. In particular I want to single out Greeneyedkitty (who has previously written poetry) for an excellent story that deserved recognition.Congratulations to all who submitted their work.
And then ... let someone take the other side. I love it when my woman let's me know that she is pantiless and waiting for my attention. Especially when we are out in public. She says, "It's here for you when you want it."OR ... she takes them off and hands them to me ... she says, "I won't be needing these."Sweet!
Interesting topic. My "significant other" does know that I'm here. She doesn't really like it, but she doesn't really disapprove either. I don't ask for her approval, but wait to see how it works out.
Without a traditional happy ending ... easily, Saving Private Ryan .One of the best movies I've ever seen.
Bald is beautiful
Because this is an international group, I would have to say that its use depends on your location. It is not a "PC" term in the US, but appears to be totally acceptable in the UK. But as someone said earlier, it depends on its use as describing a body part or using it as profanity.Personally I use it very, very rarely and only then to describe a woman that is beyond hateful.
Single Malt Scotch
Princess Bride, Monty Python & The Holy Grail, Dirty Harry and many more
Seduced at 36,000’ The voice overhead said, “American Airlines flight 84 to Washington Dulles is now boarding at gate 55.” It was 10:30 on Sunday night and Spencer was taking the Red Eye to the East Coast. He never liked taking these flights, but getting in early on Monday morning was certainly better than arriving in the afternoon and being totally out of it for the week ahead....
Added 04 Feb 2014 | Category First Time
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He sat at his desk, holding his business card in his hand. “Mitchell B. Edwards,” it read. Below his name it said, “Director of Corporate Development.” “Should I be impressed?” he thought to himself. “I’m pretty young to be a Director of anything, but I’m not especially impressed myself,” he thought. “At thirty-two I am a director in this large and growing company. My Mom is impressed at...
Added 23 Nov 2013 | Category First Time
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It had been a very busy day. I started early with a client and ran full throttle until I dropped him at the airport around 2:30. For a while I considered going by the office, but knew that you would have been very busy wrapping up your business for the week and I would only slow you down causing you to have to work later. So with that thought in mind I left the airport and drove home...
Added 02 Oct 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
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At the request of a fan ... “Are you ready to go?” Evan looked up from his desk to see his assistant standing in the doorway of his office. She was leaning against the door and smiling at him. “I am ready,” he answered. “Just let me send this email to our idiot client and then we can go.” “Maybe I’ll just stand here until you finish. I know that you tend to stress over messages...
Added 19 Sep 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
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Sitting at his desk and reading what must have been his 500 th email of the day, Spencer heard a light knock at his office door. Looking up he was greeting by a lovely, smiling face attached to much better than average body on a woman he didn’t think he knew. More than happy for the interruption and pleased that it came from a female he said, “Hi. Come in, please.” She stepped inside...
Added 22 Jun 2013 | Category Straight Sex
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Nine weeks had passed since Spencer had made the audition film with Kate and she had started her 90-day program with the directors of Zander Corporation. He had seen her in the office a couple of times at a distance, but they hadn’t spoken. Once he had considered going to her office just to see how she was doing, but changed his mind deciding that it would be best to avoid her until her...
Added 16 Aug 2013 | Category Straight Sex
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They were in the car driving to meet some friends for dinner. This meeting had been planned for several weeks for tonight. They had both come home from work in time to change clothes and head back out the door. As they drove, Ted was quiet and Terri asked, “What’s wrong, baby?” “Nothing’s wrong, why do you say that?” he responded. Terri touched him on his leg and said, “I ask what’s...
Added 18 Jul 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
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It was the second Friday of the month and that meant the marketing staff would be spending the better part of their afternoon in the company’s conference room. Originally this meeting had been a good idea. Staff members sat around the large table, had lunch and discussed the various things that each of them was working on with their varied clients. The monthly meeting had seen the...
Added 05 Jul 2013 | Category Straight Sex
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We were about an hour from home and had not spoken for about fifteen minutes. I knew that I had been thinking about how I wanted to entertain you when we got home and I was hoping that you were considering the same things. You broke the silence and said, “I really enjoyed being with Joe and Laurie. They are so very nice and wanted us to enjoy ourselves and relax. They gave us lots of time to...
Added 04 Sep 2013 | Category Love Stories
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We lay in the grass for another hour, kissing and touching until it became a little to cool to stay any longer. We had enjoyed being under the stars as much as we had loved being together under the sun on that blanket just a few hours before. The only difference was, other than the obvious darkness, was that I actually loved you more than I thought possible about ten hours previously. But as...
Added 01 Sep 2013 | Category Love Stories
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