happy birthday! maybe you should use this day and try to gamble, they might let you if not, go drink, thats always fun

Interesting idea. Our site isn't set up for it though.

You could start the story off, ask for feedback, and whichever way the most people comment, follow that direction?

Its actually set up great. They'll decide in the comment box or by telling me in a PM, online message or chat. I have the sites complete talk package to help me.

Isn't that what the embellishments were? Or did I completely miss the point of that?

Yea you completely missed the point of that. Embellishments lets them write the story how they wanted it to go, wherea I only let them pick which of the two outcomes occur, they have no influence on how the story goes after they pick, I'll write that. They pick by leaving a comment deciding which should happen.

I've been thinking about a new way to make stories interesting, since theres only so many fresh ideas because theres so many stories that almost every idea has been used. Anyway, I was thinking of letting the readers decide how a series I write plays out. How I would do it is I'll end the story on a cliffhanger type setting, and give the readers a choice of what happens. Example...

"My sis was waiting for me in her room, but my mom was waiting for me in hers, where do I go?"

The readers would pick which room he would go in, but I would write the story how I wanted to happen, they wouldn't influence how I wrote my story. I guess I'm looking for honest opinions on what people think of this idea, if its a good idea or not. Thanks for the feedback.

I feel that story will be dry and completely sexual as that's the way I view the man's perspective for the most part. This is my fear. I'm afraid I will completely misunderstand the male and offend someone. Oh well.




Not all of our stories are dry, but yea some are. If you think about offending someone, you might, because youll be too paranoid. Just be confident in your ability in knowing the opposite sex, if youre not, just ask the opposite sex for opinions. Im writing a love story from the female POV, itll be hard but I think I can capture all the emotion and essence of the female character, if I cant, I know where to go for help.

Im currently putting together a 3-part series for a story, and I plan on writing it from the female POV. Does anyone think its weird for a male to write a story from the female perspective or vice versa? Do you think they can capture what the other sex would say or do?

wow, a few haters on here. didnt think it was that serious. dont think we dont notice the ones who casually say where theyre from as if to make a point, youre not impressing anyone.

Yeppers. That's what I define the tag-line as.
ok, you got a deal. get your popcorn ready

Now the only part to uphold your end of the bet, is to post a little bit more here in the forums so people can see what I draped on your tagline.

Nice game today. Even better cuz my team won.


(sigh) its fine. im a good sport, except when it comes to shitsburgh. next time.

Being from Cleveland its natural im a die hard Browns fan. Im also a mad Chargers fan,Im glad one of my favorite teams could win the ship, but im still waiting on my Brownies to get it done. GO BROWNS!

Hey, Nivek...wanna make a friendly bet on this Sunday's game. Straight up, no points. If your Browns win...you can 'tag me' for a week...and I'll change/edit my forum signature to anything (within reason) that you want to 'tag me' with - for 1 week, til the next Sunday.

Similarly - if my Chiefs win...I get to hit your signature with some friendly graphitti !

Sound interesting?

That's a typical bet between I and 45 other fcktards on my other football-heavy forum I frequent. I thought I might try to introduce the custom - here.



ok sure, sounds friendly enough. but just to be sure you mean change your "i have not done it all" quote?

Yeppers. That's what I define the tag-line as.


ok, you got a deal. get your popcorn ready

Being from Cleveland its natural im a die hard Browns fan. Im also a mad Chargers fan,Im glad one of my favorite teams could win the ship, but im still waiting on my Brownies to get it done. GO BROWNS!

Hey, Nivek...wanna make a friendly bet on this Sunday's game. Straight up, no points. If your Browns win...you can 'tag me' for a week...and I'll change/edit my forum signature to anything (within reason) that you want to 'tag me' with - for 1 week, til the next Sunday.

Similarly - if my Chiefs win...I get to hit your signature with some friendly graphitti !

Sound interesting?

That's a typical bet between I and 45 other fcktards on my other football-heavy forum I frequent. I thought I might try to introduce the custom - here.



ok sure, sounds friendly enough. but just to be sure you mean change your "i have not done it all" quote?

We walked the rest of the way back to the car, turned on the gps from her phone so we could find the quickest way there and were off. The gps took us down streets we wouldn't normally go down but we seemed to be moving along fast so I was ok with it, not to mention we saw some more places we might wanna visit later, like the aquarium, or the mini-golf place, or comedy club, man this side of...

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I woke up at about 10:15 well rested and ready to start the day. I sat up and noticed Rita was still sleep next to me, a smile on her face but nonetheless still sleep, which is unusual because she almost always beats me out of bed. I kissed her on the forehead and rolled out of bed, excited for what the day was gonna bring. We had an actual planned day to ourselves, with no interruptions,...

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The ride home was quiet, but not out of boredom, but because Rita and I were too busy frisking one another, so mom and Aunt Lisa got a free pass that time. We pulled in the driveway and took all the groceries in and made it seem as if we were gonna leave them alone a little more, but no. “OK! Off with the dresses and into the kitchen, you two have dinner to make,” Rita said eagerly. “Umm,...

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An unfortunate accident kept me away from the computer for a long time, but I'm all healed up and ready to get back to writing. I just hope I am as close to where I was writing wise before my abrupt disappearance. So after over an 8 month absence, the story of Rita and Randy Stevens continues right here, hope you enjoy it. I stirred in my sleep, waking up when I felt something push at...

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I had to be in the shower for at least an hour trying to calm myself down. How could sex be in so much control over us? Its like the moment we see each other in a sexy or vulnerable position, we can't help ourselves. I don't wanna even consider mom and Aunt Lisa being right about all we do is have sex, but when you look at what we've done since that first night its kinda hard to dispute. Maybe...

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My whole life has been somewhat of a planned activity. Everyday I had the same routine; go to school, stay after for soccer, go home, clean up and do homework, hang out with friends, and sleep. I didn't have time much for anything else, let alone a girlfriend, hell I was too shy to even approach a girl I wasn't already friends with. Don't get me wrong I watch porn and masturbate a lot, so...

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Ever since I can remember, I and my twin sister were like best friends. We've done everything together since we were kids, go to the movies, play basketball, and go to the mall, anything fun we did it. We tell each other everything, there’s nothing we don’t know about each other, and at least, that’s what we thought... Let me start by describing us. My sister Rita is 5'2, blue eyes, blonde...

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If you didn't read the first part you should, it will make more sense if you do. I went back to my room and just laid there. Did that really just happen? Did I just screw my little sister? Are we really secretly dating now? I had so many questions, but they all had a positive answer. Before I knew it, there was light outside. I looked at the clock; it read 9:37, so I decided now’s as good...

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If you didn't read the first parts you should, it will make more sense if you do. Aunt Lisa, our mom’s younger sister, was staring us directly in the eye as we lay naked on my bed. What a way to get busted. We were so busy trying not no get caught by our parents that we forgot our aunt always comes to visit us the week of our birthday (only one day out of the week though, and its never...

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If you didn't read the first parts you should, it will make more sense if you do. “You had sex with mom?” Rita asked surprised. I was still in a state of shock. I couldn’t believe I was deceived like that, but at the same time, I was a little turned on at my mom’s boldness. Rita was the splitting image of mom, except mom was 35, 5’8, 120 pounds, and had a 36C bust. “I swear I thought it...

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