Forum posts made by nymphwriter

For me personally, it was a term used as a put-down toward another woman that was worse than being called a whore, slut, or even a skank. I don't use it in my writing as I find it crude, but I know that some authors love using it. I never bring an author's score down for using that word. That's just disrespectful.

And finally... after a wonderful night of partying at our favorite honky-tonk & cyber bar RUMPLATIONS... how I feel thanks to my good friend... Jose Cuervo!

http://www.youtube.com/embed/O0YEwXgiHww

Here's to partying too hard... and waking up to something wonderful & sexy in your bed!

How many of us have gone 10 Rounds with my old buddy with Jose Cuervo?


http://www.youtube.com/embed/_Z16jVKrk2s

I have to share some of my favorite "bar" songs here... as this seems like the right place for them.

So... why we come to the bar in the first place!

http://www.youtube.com/embed/P7gMkiOPSeA

BOTH!!!

It always turns me on and it it make my man happy. Even if he ends up cumming in my mouth, I know I'll be rewarded with an orgasm, it's so worth it.

Because we need a woman candidate that people can believe in, and not one who's so politically driven we can't trust. Hence why Hillary didn't get the nomination in 2008. I'm sure we'll see a woman president soon enough, once the old men who run the respective parties stop panicking when a woman refuses to take a seat in the "back." A woman who's willing to put up with their , call them on their , and still maintain her beliefs in putting the counties needs first.

I mean... the Congress is still pissing & moaning about Roe v. Wade & they had a hissy fit over giving women birth control. REALLY?!? How about the economy? Jobs? Defense? These are the real issues... not if a woman can have an abortion or get her birth control pills paid for (which is so much more than pregnancy prevention!)

It will happen. My dad never thought he'd see a black man as president in his lifetime, and he did. So why can't a woman be president? The constitution doesn't forbid it, so it's just finding the right woman.

We always talk it out first otherwise the make-up sex doesn't help. Thus... after we've talked... the make-up sex is so much better that we know all our issues have been settled.

50 Shades of Lipstick to stain your dipstick!

Today I'm wearing "Que Shiraz, Shiraz"

My favorite though, has a broken glass slipper, with blood pouring out the bottom with a red rose and on the back it says, "Clock Strikes Midnight" as it reminds me that the fairy tale doesn't always end the way we'd like.

I've always sucked the cock and a few times I've sucked the balls. If I don't suck his balls, I do fondle them with my hands. Some men are more sensitive about them than others. If my man asks, I will happily suck on them... as I'm all about pleasing my man.

If you want hot erotic steamy sex, The Sleeping Beauty Chronicles by Anne Rice, but I warn anyone not familiar with them... it has MF, FF, MM, BDSM, gangbangs, and much more. It starts hard & never stops. XXX and should really come with asbestos gloves as it's just so fucking hot. It's hotter than 50 Shades

A great series with a limited 3rd person POV is the Harry Potter Series .

Another great series is The Hunger Games .

If you want a good laugh, any of the Stephanie Plum books by Janet Evonavitch. I'm not ashamed when I burst out laughing and people wonder what I'm reading.

I'm also enjoy The Pretty Little Liars and The Lying Game series by Sara Sheppard (both have a TV show on ABC Family) Both series aren't much like the shows, but are great reads.

Well now I see my lack of education as I found out that 3rd person Omniscient is an actuall writing style... I Just keep learning, isn't it wonderful! My story was rejected due to gramatical errors. I turned to my wife for help. She has a BA in English Lit (A minor in dance...OMG!, I love that woman!). Shes working on he Masters in education and working as a teach full time. I tried not to bother her with this as I know hgow busy she is. With her usual loving care she spent three hours with me showing me all of the errors, making me correct them.

Sometimes I wonder what shes doing with an old high school dropout like me. Of couurse by the time we were done she was very, and I mean VERY! HOT!.
I felt I should thank her for all her help. So I did it multi-orgasmicly.... Don't stop till she begs me kind of night. Then I rembered why she's with me!

She missed work today, still sleeping. Thats why I try not to bother her.

Damn, writing can be so much fun!

Sounds like you've got a hell of a wife & I'm sure she knows how lucky she is to be your wife.

Oh yeah... 3rd person can be multi-leveled: 3rd person Omniscient, 3rd person limited Omniscient (the author focuses on the thoughts & feelings of 1 character), and 3rd person no Omniscient (you get none of the thoughts of any characters.)

Just thought I'd share & I'm sure your amazing wife told you the same thing.

Most likely not as he pushed me into losing mine before I was really ready. As it turned out... he wanted to lose his before his 19th birthday which meant I had to lose mine before I wanted. Since I'm not sure how my life would have been different. It might be the one change I would risk in my life. I won't admit my age as it will violate Lush rules.

I've fantasized about it... but I've never done it. I guess I'm just too shy in person... plus... what would he want from me later?

More fun to be a fantasy.

I had to read the posts to understand the thread. That being said........


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I selected the image because of my screen name. I chose not to use a real picture of me for personal reasons. I rarely assume anyone's picture is really them. Just easier that way

When I was dating after my 2nd divorce. I went to get my pictures taken and thus I was "extra" dressed up. A guy saw me & asked me out. I still dressed nice, classy blouse, slacks, styled my hair, make-up, and he questioned me about the "dress" I was wearing. When I explained it was for a picture our date went south really fast. Had he asked me to wear that dress... I probably would have. But to assume that's my "normal" attire was ridiculous. A few years later when my husband & I started dating, I did "dress-up" for him, but over time we did relax. Now we've been together for 5 years, happily married... and we still dress-up for a special night out. I love it when he puts a little effort in his appearance and I make a point of telling him how much I appreciate it by giving him genuine complements.

Maybe our men just need to be reminded that we like it when they look good.

I've haven't been on here long but have a simple question.
As a reader which do you prefer.

First person: "I took her into my arms I knew she could feel my hardness pressing against her"

or third person: "Frank took her in into His arms. She could feel his hardness pressing against her"

I ask this because I was reading a story the other day that was first person but read more like this:

"I took you into my arms I knew you could feel my hardness pressing against you"

These arn't the exact words it was more graphic. I'm trying to be polite.

It immediatly turned me off as I am a straight male. My only thought was something more like...

"You did what, I felt what! Like hell you did!"

I've only written two stories so far. The first two mostly teasers for the third which I submitted today.
Now I wait anxiously hoping it will get approved. So to kill time I thought I would throw this out there.

The example that you didn't like reads like a 2nd person POV. Those are difficult to write, and not something that everyone likes to read.

Now... I personally like either 1st or 3rd person as long as the story is well written. I've only found a tiny handful of authors that can write a good 2nd person story. So, I hope this answers your question. As an author... I've done both... and it really depends on how the story goes as if I write it in 1st or 3rd. 1st is harder as it limits what you can share, and 3rd allows you to share more, and is easier to share more information with the reader.

Good stories are just that... good stories.

Who brought the midget?!?

Since I lost my virginity in my mom's bed while she was out... I'd rather be in a nearby room. I mean... I'm a married woman now so really... if they are all that bothered by it... I'll just try to be quieter next time... lol.

Yes... I've had sex with one woman... two at once would be quite interesting experience.

Cotton thong. I wear the cotton because of how they breathe, and the thong because it makes me feel so sexy & are just so comfortable without the annoying panty lines.

The only time I don't wear my thongs is when that bitch "Aunt Flo" is in town. Then I wear hipsters.

I have started sex a bit dry, but I'm normally pretty wet, but I have experienced the sensation you described... and it doesn't last long but it is intense & amazing. The only down side for me is starting this way means I probably won't cum from vaginal sex. However, my hubby never leaves me without an orgasm as he'll just eat my pussy until I do cum.

I used to be a briefs fans... then there was the boxers and they were nice... but I must admit... the boxer briefs are by far my favorites! I like the slight form fit without it looking all saggy. However, I don't object a man going commando if that's how he's comfortable.

I have a huge unicorn collection http://www.youtube.com/embed/DuOS97_hPoU like this one, but my husband supports my habit.

I can remember lots of useless bits of trivia and I tend to quote movie lines.

I got into a lesbian relationship with a control freak of a woman who was a drug addict, physically & verbally abusive, and almost successfully put a permanent wedge between my son & I. She kept demanding money & wouldn't get a fucking job.

When I finally pulled my head out of my ass (seriously) I threw her out (as we were living together) and moved to a new apartment with my son & have never contacted her since (I even blocked her on Facebook so she can't cyber-stalk me)

From that moment on, I never let another person come between me & my son ever again. We refer to "her" as "She Who Shall Not Be Named" (yes... we stole that from Harry Potter) and now we are both much better.

I know not all lesbian women are like this... as I've seen my share of asshole men as well... but even now I shake my head and think, "WHAT THE FUCK WAS I THINKING?!?" as even the sex was't that good & I only started seeing her because I had been hurt by yet another jerk.

Who knew... just 2 years later I'd meet a wonderful man who has helped to build the bond between me & my son. And yes... I did marry him.

Looks and body will get you through the door... but if there is no personality... there is no relationship. However... I've found that personality can make or break looks real fast. A bad personality makes for an ugly person and a great personality enhances looks.

I have never worried about the length of a story... sometimes they are fairly short... others are pretty long. My longest on Lush had to be broken into 2 parts as it broke the 10,000 word limit. I didn't intend it to be that long... but it was. So... I reviewed and split the story at where I felt was a logical split point. Each part is clearly marked as part 1 and part 2, and both parts have scored well. Actually... that story was the first time I realized there was a "size" limit. This won't affect any future stories I write... just how I post them. And now that I'm aware of the word limit... I'll be mindful of how I post them.

Introduce the title of your story: Cala de Sirena & Return to Cala de Sirena (parts 1 & 2)

Genre/Category: Love Stories

Provide the link:
Cala de Sirena
Return to Cala de Sirena Part 1
Return to Cala de Sirena Part 2

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story? I have a large collection of unicorn pictures, and one of my favorites is called "If I Were a Mermaid & You Were a Unicorn" where a little girl is pretending to be a mermaid reaching up to touch the horn of a unicorn, that's really a horse.

2. How did you come up with these characters? The male lead, Don, was my first attempt at writing a story from a mostly male POV and was modeled after a few gentlemen I know. The female lead, Angel, is kinda me... but not... and her name was a pet name someone called me & I thought... that makes a great character name.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories? It's the first story with a sequel. Both were told in a 3rd person POV, with limited omission, from the male character. We hear his thoughts, we see his dreams, we learn things as he learns them. I've always written from a female POV in either 1st or 3rd person... but this was my first from a male... and I think I was pretty successful.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece? Writing a story that focused on the male, putting him in a positive light, while still keeping him somewhat realistic.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it? It's a sweet, romantic tale about love, heartbreak, and a touch of magic.

http://upload.lushstories.com/330-If I Were a Mermaid & You Were a Unicorn.jpg

I rarely don't vote unless I don't finish the story (and that's if it enters an area I'm personally not comfortable with or I have to leave before I can finish.)

I don't mind leaving a comment, but I don't like being "forced" to comment. I usually leave a comment if the story was really well written. However, I like the option. I'd rather leave a comment because I WANT to... and not because it's the only way I can vote.

I leave positive comments if I really like a story... if I don't or if I see some problems... I will send the writer a private message as the comments are public and can actually hurt a story's success if there are too many negative comments.

As my mother said, "If you can't say something nice... shut the hell up!"

she is a very good writer and has a beautiful avatar pic :)

Thanks Nikki!!!!