Well, im definitly a new writer, my now fiance got me into it as well as this site, i have written a couple of stories for her and i thought i would share them with you guys. and if you cant tell my grammar sucks outside of a story.
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This is my first posted story, please critique it good or bad comments all are welcome, definitely need the criticism, thank you. It was a quarter to five, almost time for Rachel to get off work. I had been planning this all week. I finished tying the last rope to the bedpost when I heard the front door close. I rushed out of the bedroom and closed the door. I walked over to her and placed...
Added 02 Feb 2011 | Category Toys
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