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NOVEMBER BABY

Trustworthy and loyal. Very passionate and dangerous. Wild at times. Knows how to have fun. Sexy and mysterious. Everyone is drawn towards your inner and outer beauty and independent personality. Playful, but secretive. Very emotional and temperamental sometimes. Meets new people easily and very social in a group. Fearless and independent. Can hold their own. Stands out in a crowd. Essentially very smart. Usually, the greatest men are born in this month. If you ever begin a relationship with someone from this month, hold on to them because their one of a kind.

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On a crowded Greyhound Bus

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In high school in stair case while cutting class and caught by the teacher of the class i was cutting lol. Also in the the middle of a apartment complex on a bench. another in a parking lot with her in doggy style leaned into the backseat as i stood outside the car fucking her

love women of all races I don't limit myself to one race

I love eating pussy tasting her sweetness her juices

Foreplay always

either way is fine with me. I like the way they both feel at times like to play in the little hairs that she does have

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Added 08 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 7 | Avg Score 5 | Views 1,966 | 3 Comments

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Added 08 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 5 | Avg Score 4 | Views 1,157 | 2 Comments

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Added 08 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4.75 | Views 1,777

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Added 08 Aug 2012 | Category Oral Sex | Votes 15 | Avg Score 4.87 | Views 5,178 | 4 Comments

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Added 08 Aug 2012 | Category Masturbation | Votes 9 | Avg Score 4.78 | Views 3,296 | 3 Comments

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