About Raven_Star
Biography

I found my imaginative side at a very early age and have been interested in the written word my entire life. I believe that the sexiest part of the human body is that network of nerves and synapses in our heads. I can transport myself anywhere in the world (or out of the world) with a well-written paragraph.

I like to write descriptively rich scenes, where the background pulls you into the world I am creating. My characters are only real in my head, often a conglomeration of people I know or movie and TV performers. Well, most of them.

I enjoy the act of editing a story. I have found myself many times unconsciously inserting commas or fixing grammar mistakes that I find in some of the stories I have enjoyed here.
I, however, am by no means a master of this craft. I welcome your comments and constructive criticism on any submissions.

I'm not here to cyber. Been there, done that, don't really want the t-shirt. This is an imaginative reading/writing thing for me. I'll gladly enjoy a conversation about the progression of a story, editing, plot, or anything else related to the writing. I'll even discuss the particulars of a juicy sex scene. I won't sit here and tell you I'm wearing a leather thong and wouldn't I just want you to rip it off. The only one who gets to hear that is my hubby.

All that aside, I would like to say that the stories on this site have made my sex life at home a whole lot more interesting. So, thanks all, and keep the stories coming!

Name:
evie
Date Joined:
22 Feb 2013
Last Visit:
21 Apr 2014
Sex:
Female 
Sign:
Scorpio
Relationship Status:
Married
Location:
Interests:
Letting my imagination run wild is my favorite thing. Ever.
Favorite Books:
I don't have one. There are books that I've read several times, but I can't really say that any one book is my favorite. The most honest statement I can make about a favorite book is that any book that I am reading and enjoying is my favorite at the time.
Favorite Authors:
I'll give you three. Taken together, they're a pretty good representation of the things I enjoy the most in my reading.

Jim Butcher
Nora Roberts/ J.D. Robb
J.R. Ward
Favorite Movies:
Movies are such passing fancies for me that I can't really hold on to one for more than a day or two after watching. I enjoy movies for their (mostly) mindless entertainment. Many are just pretty eye candy that will feed the imagination dragon in my head. So, genres instead?

Action / Adventure
Mystery (not horror, no)
Science Fiction
Fantasy
Brain-Benders / Thinking Movies
et cetera.
Favorite Music:
It depends on my mood. I'm pretty eclectic.
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Latest Forum Posts
Topic: Incest stories all removed
Posted: 20 Apr 2014 08:28

I'm not happy with the removal of my 4 stories, but what must be is what must be...I can understand if there were an advance warning, there will be a great hue and cry, like there is now from fellow story lovers. But I will abide by their decision. I am aware a number of other sites has also stopped accepting such stories and some, like Lush, have also removed/deleted them too. There is one site that is completely closed down in recent weeks, due to political and social motivations.

I do understand this category has a very thin line between legal and illegal activities, and many are taking steps to ensure they will not be caught up in the witch hunt of the illegalities. But in time we will become used to it, as with other social norms and activities of recent years.

Your stories have not been deleted. They are still available under your My Stories link. They are just hidden. Access them by clicking the 'Edit' link. If you wish to rework these to fit in another category, please note they must be submitted as New Submissions.

Hope that helped clear up any confusion regarding the status of your stories.

Topic: Incest stories all removed
Posted: 20 Apr 2014 08:27

I don't mind incest stories being banned at all, but to find out by having a story removed, with a terse note about the new policy, I found rather disrespectful.

I would have thought a friendly memo explaining the change, with time to make edits, would have been the way to go about it.


You can make edits to your stories. They are still there, just hidden. Edit from your My Stories list. Please note, all stories that were previously Incest stories and have been reworked to fit in other categories must be submitted as New Submissions.

Hope that helped clear up any confusion.

Topic: Getting Slapped During Sex
Posted: 18 Apr 2014 06:38

Nope. No face slapping. Slap anything else, not the face. It brings out the 'Grrr' in me.

Topic: Have you ever masturbated when you weren’t horny?
Posted: 16 Apr 2014 04:28

Yes. It's relaxing. Sometimes, in the middle of the night, I'll be wide awake in bed and a sure way to get back to sleep is to make myself come. Works every time. :-)

Topic: Are-all-moderators-professional-writers-What-do-you-expect-from-me
Posted: 12 Apr 2014 07:27



Evidently, I can't express my opinions either unless it's in the form of stories. I didn't intend for so much hate in this thread which is why I asked (not commanded) this to be deleted.

Tom,

Your opinions are not the problem. You made this into a public matter when you posted into this forum. Your original post called us out as overzealous nazi grammarians (not your words, but the meaning is close enough). We work very hard to keep the stories on this site of a quality that you will rarely find elsewhere. We take pride in that work. We try to help you by suggesting changes that will make your story better. We go out of our way to indulge your tantrums (yes, that's what they are, don't kid yourself) over things that we are trying to help you with.

Your opinion is noted. You don't want to write grammatically correct stories. You think we're too rigid with our coherence checks and tense change requests. You think you should be able to write whatever you want in whatever manner you want and just have us post it without changes.

That's not how it works here. If you want that sort of laissez faire attitude from the moderators at the site you post your stories, we are happy to have you post them somewhere else.

If, however, you would like to continue posting your work here, we will be more than happy to work with you in getting your stories to the standard at which we prefer stories to be at. Most of us are amateur writers and need the help. Most of us welcome it. Please let us work with you.

Regards,
--Raven_Star

Topic: Are-all-moderators-professional-writers-What-do-you-expect-from-me
Posted: 11 Apr 2014 09:13

Tom,

I'm a story moderator. I'm not a professional writer. I don't have a degree in English. I volunteer here.

I've taken a look at your story list. You've had one story returned for grammar, punctuation and dialogue and one returned for tense shifts. The rest have passed on the first go. I will tell you that all of your stories that have passed have been edited by the verifying moderator for small things like commas and typos.

We have a quality standard here. We like for our stories to be as grammatically correct as possible. We return stories every day for tense shifts and request that the author repair the mistake. Unless the tense shift works into the plot as a flashback or reference to a past event, the tense shift is wrong.

We urge slow, careful proofreading. We like for the stories that are posted here to reflect the best of what Lush has to offer. Our authors are our ambassadors. It would be exceedingly embarrassing to have an ambassador write in poor English when we're in the business of writing. As such, we do reserve the right to return work that doesn't meet our quality standards, and to suggest ways in which the author may make changes to allow the story to post.

We strive for our authors to improve in their writing skill. It's the only way we can ensure that we'll continue to get quality writing that will represent the site in its best light. When we return your work, we aren't trying to make fun of you or criticize unjustly. We are simply trying to do what will benefit both you and us. A better story for you will increase your readership and get you better scores. It will also add one more great story to our site. When our authors work with us, it's a win win situation.

Please consider all of this when writing, proofreading and submitting a story to our site.

Thank you.

Regards,
--Raven_Star

Topic: do you believe in God?
Posted: 09 Apr 2014 15:03

Sorry I don't belive in god

Why sorry? It's nothing to apologize for. It's your belief, or lack there of. :-) Own it!

Topic: What's Your Greatest Fear In Life?
Posted: 09 Apr 2014 10:12

I'd have to say sudden death. Not just death, because that happens to everyone. Dying suddenly just leaves so much unfinished, so many things unsaid. I probably won't care after I'm dead, but immediately before that I can honestly say I'll be scared out of my fucking mind.

Topic: do you believe in God?
Posted: 09 Apr 2014 09:02



//www.youtube.com/embed/-_IlNbsILLE

The irony is not lost on me. kekekegay

Topic: do you believe in God?
Posted: 09 Apr 2014 08:59

the bible says so much and everything its foretelling is happening as we speak.

There's no doubt God is real

If you wait long enough, just about anything that's been written will happen.

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My throat relaxed as my Master's stiff, demanding cock thrust firmly in. Lying supine and restrained to the padded table, I could do little more than wallow in the erotic sensation of having my throat thoroughly fucked. His powerful hands gripped the column of my neck firmly, thumbs caressing my skin as his stiff meat had its wicked way inside. I couldn't breathe when he pressed all the way in;...

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Posted: 20 Apr 2014 12:23

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Posted: 19 Apr 2014 16:42
Thanks hon!!!


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Posted: 18 Apr 2014 21:47
Evie! Thanks for reading my poem!!!


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A belated thank you for reading and commenting on my little story. I'm glad you liked it!

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