I am still new to writing erotica but I do have two stories on here. I enjoy writing it but I do know that good and honest feedback is always helpful. I've asked for a beta reader before and unfortunately she got a little busy and was then able to read a story I was writing which is totally understandable. I was just hoping for a little more help if somebody has time and is willing to be honest with constructive criticism.

Sassywheels

I am still new to writing erotica and I enjoy writing it but I do know that good and honest feedback is always helpful. I've asked for a beta reader before and unfortunately she got a little busy and was then able to read a story I was writing which is totally understandable. I was just hoping for a little more help if somebody has time and is willing to be honest with constructive criticism.

Sassywheels

I enjoy getting feedback on stories I am writing or am thinking about publishing on here. I would like to find somebody who would be a beta reader for me. If you are willing to be a beta reader please send me a private message and let me know I would really appreciate it.

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I cannot believe how I have been awaiting Steve’s arrival home. I have been home getting our evening ready and anticipating his reaction, when he walks in the door. The candles are lit and the house smells of sweet seduction. I am wearing his favorite white dress shirt and favorite tie; I have the first three buttons undone showing off my red lace bra that he loves so much. I have put on my...

Added 06 May 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 4 | Avg Score 5 | Views 1,470 | 4 Comments

One Hell of a Way to Unwind after an Exam Coming home after taking my exam all I want is a beer and a nice hot bubble bath to relax. When I reach the door there is a note that reads, “I am here for whatever you desire tonight.” I open the door; I hear Robert Plant’s voice coming from the stereo, which brings a smile to my face. TJ knows how much Robert Plant's voice turns me on and...

Added 05 Sep 2011 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 12 | Avg Score 4.83 | Views 3,056 | 8 Comments

I cannot believe the dreams I have been having of me and another woman. I have never been with a woman but I have always wondered what it would be like. I see attractive women every day and I can appreciate a good-looking woman. There is a woman in my office, Caitlin, who is gorgeous. She has long red hair and the most amazing body I have ever seen. There is an office party coming up at the...

Added 22 Jul 2011 | Category Bisexual | Votes 25 | Avg Score 4.74 | Views 7,240 | 9 Comments