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A father and daughter play a very interesting game.
I guess you could say everything that happened was my older brother’s fault.

In April of 2010, my then 18-year old brother got his girlfriend pregnant. Instead of going to college like he was supposed to, he went and joined the army. Three months later, he shipped off to basic training. That same month I turned sixteen. For my birthday, he gave me his MacBook; the same one my parents gave him for getting into to Arizona State. When I first opened it, I found something I didn’t expect, porn.

I was shocked that my older brother would even look at such things. He was a member of the Young Republicans and actually thought that porn should be made illegal. His goal in life was (and still is) to get rid of all the vices that plague America. He also believed in no sex until marriage, but like any right-winger, his actions didn’t match his beliefs.

After my brother made my parents expectant grandparents, at the young age of 40, my mom went even more batshit crazy, especially towards me. She developed a list of rules, dictating how I was supposed to live my life; including violations of my teenage civil rights like: No dating until I was eighteen, no boys allowed in the house, an eleven o’clock curfew (even on weekends), no sleeping over at friend’s houses, must go to church every Sunday, and joining the church abstinence group. My mom worked the night shift at a hospital, so she left the majority of her rules for my dad to enforce, even though he thought she was overreacting.

Since I was basically a prisoner in my own home, I had to make the best of the situation. That involved spending every night pleasuring myself to the porn, on my brother’s laptop. I made sure I wasn’t interrupted, by developing a new nightly routine. After putting on my pajamas, I’d brush my teeth and then go downstairs to give my dad a peck on the cheek and say goodnight. I then went back to my room, got naked and climbed into bed with my MacBook. Putting my ear buds in, I watched porn and played with my pussy until I passed out from cumming. Of course, the routine differed on the nights my mom wasn’t working.

One night in late July, right before I was about to get ready for my nightly ritual, there was a knock on my bedroom door.

“Come in, Daddy,” I said.

“It’s Dad,” he said from the other side of the door.

“I know,” I replied, laughing, “We’re the only ones home.”

He opened the door with his eyes covered and said, “Are you decent?”

“Yes, Daddy,” I said laughing, as I watched him remove his hand from his face.

He stood in the doorway, with a nervous look on his face and made small talk. Dad covered a number of boring topics like the weather, America’s Got Talent, the weather again and a joke he heard at the warehouse he manages.

Fifteen minutes later, he finally said, “Your mom was snooping on your computer today and didn’t like what she found.”

I turned white as a ghost.

“She was trying to find your Facebook password, so she could read your private e-mails, to find out if you’re breaking her rules,” he said, “Instead; she found the movies on your computer.”

“They belonged to Steven,” I cried. “I didn’t put them on there. You have to believe me.”

“I believe you, baby,” he said. “According to your mom, the second she opened the computer she saw the movie on pause.”

“I just watched it for a second,” I said.

The nervous look on my dad’s face disappeared and it looked like he was about to crack-up as he said, “Sure you were, baby.”

“It’s the truth,” I said, trying not to laugh at the goofy face my dad was making, as he tried to hold back his laughter.

We both couldn’t hold it any longer. He busted out laughing first and seconds later, I joined him. For at least fifteen minutes, the only thing you could hear in the house was the sound of laughter.

After we let it all out, he once again got serious, as he said, “Your mom thinks that sort of material might give you bad ideas and wants it gone. She wants me to supervise you deleting every movie and picture.”

I looked devastated as he told me that.

“But, I’m not going to do that,” he said. “When I was your age, I had hundreds of magazines that I hid under my mattress, that is until my mom found them and made me throw them out. As I walked back into the house, my pops told me that I should’ve hidden them better.”

My dad bent down and picked-up a Best Buy bag. He, then, walked into my room, reached into the bag, pulled out an external hard drive and said, “Hide it better.”

I jumped out of my chair, gave him a hug and grabbed the present, said, “Thank you.”

“Make sure everything is off the computer, because she is going to check on it tomorrow and hide the hard drive in a place she’ll never look,” he said, as he pointed to my bookshelf of graphic novels and manga.

I spent the rest of the night transferring everything to the device before starting my evening ritual.

A few nights later, we were having a very rare family dinner. During the course of it, my mom was yelling at my dad over various topics. If I were in his position, I would’ve yelled back, but because he loved her so much, he just sat there and took it. Other men would yell back at their wives or do something worse. Not my dad. He would take out his frustrations at the gym. While other men his age were getting fat, he was bulking-up and getting looks from other women and by a few of my friends. Not that that mattered, because I thought he still only had eyes for one woman, my mom. However, I hated the way she treated him. I felt that it was my duty to do something. The second I opened my mouth both of them yelled at me and sent me to my room.

As soon as I heard her leave, I went downstairs to say goodnight to dad.

After giving him a kiss on his cheek, he said, “Baby, I’m sorry I yelled at you, but I didn’t want you getting involved in our problems.”

“Okay, Daddy,” I said, before giving him another peck on his cheek and going up to my room.

As I got naked and climbed into bed with my laptop and hard drive, I heard something strange from downstairs. I crept down the steps, walked past the TV room, past the family room, and straight into my father’s workroom.

Before my daddy married my mother, he had a dream to be a Hollywood monster maker. Instead, he got my mom pregnant with big bro, then got hitched and finally gave-up his dream by taking a job at a warehouse. When we moved into this house, ten years ago, the previous owners had built this large hideous extension in the back and after several arguments, my mom relented and let my dad build a studio, so he could still have an outlet for his passion. As a kid, his workroom was beyond awesome. He would design the coolest looking monster masks and make-up games for my brother and I to play as we wore them.

Every night, he would go into his studio to work, or that’s just what I thought. Instead, I found my dad sitting naked on a couch, stroking his cock, while watching porn on his private TV. He had no idea I was there. I stood behind him watching him masturbate, as I played with my pussy. This was the first time I’ve ever seen a man’s penis live and in person. While his wasn’t as long as the men in the movies, it was certainly as thick, if not thicker. As the woman on the screen was getting a load in her face, my daddy shot his into the air. I gasped, as I saw that.

He turned around looking startled, as he yelled, “Get the fuck out of here!”

I ran my naked ass out of his workshop and back into my room. All I could think about was what my father was dong. I put my fingers in my pussy and started rubbing as I revisited the image of my father cumming. I fantasized that I had the courage to join him on the couch and let him explore my body like the couple in the movie he was watching.

Thirty minutes later, there was a knock at my door. I was torn on what I wanted to do. Based on the conversation I was dreading we were going to have, I didn’t want to let him in. However I wanted to see him and tell him how much his actions turned me on. While I decided on what to do he kept on knocking.

Finally I relented and said, “Come in.”

As the door creaked open I got under my covers.

He walked into my room completely naked and stroking his hard cock. He had a crazed look on his face. He looked straight at me and said, “Did you like what you saw?”

“Yes daddy,” I replied.

“Will you do everything daddy says?” he asked.

“Yes daddy,” I answered.

“Good,” he said.

“I’m going to ask you this one more time,” he said, “Did you enjoy watching daddy jerk-off?”

“Yes,” I answered.

He grabbed my computer off my desk and brought to my bed as he said, “You watched me. It’s only fair that I watch you.”

I’ll admit that this turned me on.

He then opened my laptop, typed in the wireless password (which I wasn’t allowed to have), went to an adult website, typed in another password and an orgy scene popped up on the screen.

I reached under the blanket, spread my legs and started rubbing my pussy.

My daddy walked over, hit pause and then sat in the chair next to my bed, as he said, “I want to see your naked body.

I slowly removed my blanket. I then jumped off the bed and stood directly in front of him. My dad continued stroking, as he studied my naked 79lb, 32A-22-26 figure up close and personal. After making me turn around several times he said, “Baby, you look so beautiful.”

“Daddy, don’t call me baby, call me your little slut,” I demanded.

He smiled and said, "I like your new nickname."

He then had me sit on the bed, hit play on the computer and masturbate, as I watched the orgy unfold.

He watched me intently, as I pleasured myself. Every few seconds, he would order me to do something like taste my juices after making myself cum, stick a finger in my ass and call myself by my new self given nickname. After fifteen minutes or so of watching me, he got off the chair, walked to my bed, and started stroking faster, until he shot his load all over my body.

He said, “Like a good little slut, I want you to use your fingers, scoop up my cum and eat every last drop.”

After making sure I did just that, he grabbed my laptop, put it back on my desk and walked out of my room. Instead of putting my pajamas back on, I remained naked and continued playing with myself, as I replayed the incident in my head over and over again.

The next morning, after showering, I went downstairs for breakfast. Dad was already down there eating his oatmeal and fruit. As I joined him at the table, he acted like last night never happened. He was back to his old self by making small talk, cracking bad jokes and concluding by asking me if I needed a ride to work. Just as we were about to leave, my mom came home. They had a little fight. We left with daddy slamming the door.

As we started driving, he turned to me, and asked, “Did my little whore like last night?”

“Yes, Daddy,” I replied.

“Good,” he said.

He then dropped me off at work and left. During my lunch hour he called and talked dirty to me, as I masturbated in the bathroom. That night was complete torture, because I knew nothing was going to happen, since mom wasn’t working. Later that night, my mom came into my room to inspect my computer.

After making sure I wasn’t hiding smut, she sat down next to me, and said, “Your dad told me that what I found on your computer belonged to Steven.”

“Yes, ma’am,” I replied.

“He also told me that you only watched it, because you were curious,” she said.

“Yes ma’am,” I once again replied.

“Have you ever heard the phrase curiosity killed the cat?” she asked.

“Of course,” I answered.

“Then don’t let curiosity kill your future, like it did your brother's or mine,” she said, “Fifteen minutes can change your life forever. Do you promise you won’t have sex until you’re married?”

“I promise,” I said, with my fingers crossed.

“That’s just what I wanted to hear,” she said, as she hugged me. “After church on Sunday, we’ll go sign your abstinence pledge.”

“Okay,” I said.

The next morning daddy made breakfast. As he drove me to work, he made me play with myself while he talked dirty. At lunch, he’d called me and brought me to orgasm with his voice. That night after mom left, he came to my room, watched me strip and then grabbed me by the hand, taking me to his studio; where we’d watch porn and watch each other cum. For the next several days, as long as we were alone, we played my new favorite game.

That Sunday I signed my abstinence pledge. My mom went totally overboard. She got it framed and hung it up in the kitchen. Then called all of her friends to brag about how proud she was that I made a promise to God to keep myself pure until marriage. While we were out celebrating, she got a call from the hospital saying they needed her to come to work. Not one to turn down overtime, she left us after dinner.

I sat in my room waiting for daddy to come up and start. He never showed-up, and I fell asleep as I waited. At some point in the middle of the night, I could feel someone watching me. I opened my eyes and saw daddy standing over me stroking his hard penis.

Once he saw that I was awake, he said, “Get naked and get on your knees."

I happily did just as he ordered.

As he masturbated away, he said, “I didn’t realize my little slut was a liar.”

“I’m not a liar,” I said.

“I didn’t say you could talk,” he said, “You are a liar, because you signed that pledge. Little slut, what does that pledge say?”

“That I won’t have sex until I get married,” I answered.

“Do you want to have sex?” he asked, as he started stroking faster.

“Yes, Daddy,” I cried.

“Do you want my cock?” he said.

“Yes, Daddy,” I cried.

“Good,” he said, “Now, say you’re a liar.”

“I’m a liar,” I cried.

“Now say you love daddy’s cock,” he ordered.

“I love daddy’s cock,” I moaned.

“Say it again,” he ordered.

“I love daddy’s cock,” I moaned.

“Again,” he ordered, as he began stroking even faster.

“I love daddy’s cock,” I moaned.

“Now keep your mouth open,” he ordered, as he shot most of his load directly into it, “Now swallow it.”

I did.

“Does my little slut like the way daddy’s cum tastes?” he asked.

“Yes daddy,” I said, as I used my fingers to scoop up the jizz that missed my mouth.

“Now get dressed and go to bed,” he ordered.

The next morning, I got up hoping I’d see daddy before he left for work, but he was long gone before I even got out of bed. I rushed down to the bus stop, so I could make it to work. At lunchtime, I waited for him to call. He didn’t. After work, I got home as fast as I could. He wasn’t there. Mom said he had an inventory issue and would be home late.

After she left, I went into his studio. Usually the door was locked, but to my surprise this time it wasn’t. I explored every inch of it to find his porn collection. In a closet behind the masks he made for my brother and me, I found his stash. There were hundreds of VHS tapes and DVD’s. I grabbed a few. After putting one in the player, I got naked, sat on his couch, and started playing with my wet pussy.

As the DVD reached the 90-minute mark and as I watched the actress take two dicks in her ass, I heard my dad yell, “What do you think you’re doing?”

I turned around and tried to act all innocent, as I said, “Nothing.”

My dad then started taking off his clothes. The only thing he left on was his boxers. As he walked toward me, he said, “Doesn’t my little slut know she’s not allowed in here?”

“But, the door was open,” I whimpered.

“I left it open to test your obedience and you failed,” he said, as he sat on the couch, “I want you to now come here and lay across my legs.”

I did as he said.

“This is going to hurt you more than it’s going to hurt me,” he said, right before slapping my ass over and over again.

After his hands colored my butt red, he spread my legs, spit on his fingers and put them in my pussy. As he finger fucked me, he asked, “Has a boy ever done this to you before?”

“No, Daddy,” I screamed, as his fingers brought me orgasm after orgasm.

“Good,” he said, as he slapped my pussy before reinserting his fingers.

After making me cum again and again, he said, “Your turn.”

He had me get on the floor. After he spread his legs, he had me get between them and pull down his boxers. He, then, had me spit on his hard cock and start stroking. As soon as my hands touched his penis, he started shaking. I’ve never seen him like this before. As my hands moved faster, his breathing got heavier. Then without notice, he shot his load.

He sat there saying, “Oh my God,” repeatedly.

“Did you like that, Daddy?” I said, as I tasted the cum that landed on me.

“Yes, baby,” he said, “I have to tell that you were the first person, other than me, who’s touched me down there in over two years.”

“You and mom don’t, you know?” I asked.

“Not for over two years,” he answered.

“What happened?” I asked.

“She got pregnant,” he said. “There was no way we could afford another baby, so after weeks of arguments, she decided to have an abortion. I wanted to have the baby, but she didn’t. After the procedure, she changed. She could no longer stand to have me touch her. We stopped having sex. To keep my urges in check, I would come in here and do my thing, but it only made them worse.”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“You weren’t that clever when you masturbated while watching porn,” he said.

“Yes, I was,” I said.

“Because you wore ear buds, you never heard how loud you were,” he said.

My face turned red out of embarrassment.

“Every night, I would stand outside your door and jerk-off, while listening to your moans,” he said. “I could only imagine what you were fantasizing about. That’s when you became my little slut. Are you my little slut?”

“Yes, I am, Daddy,” I replied.

“Do you like playing our game?” he asked.

“God, yes, Daddy,” I replied.

“Me, too. Will you do everything daddy asks?” he asked.

“Yes, Daddy,” I answered.

“Play with your pussy,” he demanded.

I started rubbing my pussy, and he started stroking his cock. After several minutes of watching each other pleasure ourselves, daddy said, “Get on your knees, little slut.”

I did.

My mouth was parallel from his massive erection. He grabbed me by the back of my head and thrust his hard cock into my mouth. After making me gag, he took it out, ordered me to spit on it, grab it, kiss it and move it in and out of my mouth at my own pace. I looked over at the movie that was playing on the TV and watched, as the actress blew an actor. I mimicked every movement she made, until my daddy shot another load into my mouth. This time he got it all in.

He grabbed me by the hand, led me to my room, and had me climb onto my bed. He ordered me to get on my back and spread my legs. He climbed over me and kissed me. Daddy moved downward and kissed my breasts, stomach and stopped just short of my pussy. He, then, sniffed it and put his mouth on clit. His tongue felt different than my fingers. My body felt cold and hot at the same time. With every lick, it felt like the room was spinning and I was getting lost in pleasure. Soon, I started quivering. I tightly grabbed my blanket, as it felt like my body was about to explode, and seconds later, it felt like I did.

My dad looked up at me, and asked, “Did my little slut enjoy that?”

“Do it again,” I demanded.

He once again put his face into my pussy and let his magical tongue go at it. This time, however, he added his fingers. Once again, they brought me ecstatic bliss. Like earlier, I wouldn’t let him stop. I became addicted to the effect his mouth had on my cunt and I wanted to feel its effects all night long.

After giving me a marathon of orgasms, my father looked at me and said, “My mouth is tired. We will continue this tomorrow.”

He stood-up and started to walk out the door.

I didn’t want the night to end. To make sure he didn’t leave, I screamed, “Fuck me, Daddy.”

He stopped in the doorway and said, “You’re not ready for that, my little slut.”

“Please, Daddy,” I moaned, as I fingered myself.

“Beg,” he ordered.

“Please give me your cock,” I screamed.

“Again,” he ordered.

“Please fuck me,” I screamed with passion.

He turned around, walked to my bed, grabbed his hard cock and slowly slid it into my wet pussy. He studied my face, as if he were taking pictures of every reaction, as a penis entered my vagina for the very first time. After fully entering me, he let it sit in there, so I could get used to how it felt.

He then said, “You’re so tight.”

Seconds later, he moved his cock slowly in and out of me. He then took it out and used it to slap my pussy before reinserting to fuck me at a more frantic pace. Once again, he took it out. This time he ordered me to suck my juices off before putting it back in my wet cunt. Several minutes of fucking me, while I lay on my back, he ordered me to get on all fours. I assumed the position. He fingered my pussy, while licking my asshole for several minutes. The feeling was incredible. After making me cum several times, he put his cock back into my box and fucked me at fast and furiously. After getting tired of that position, he got on his back and ordered me to mount his rocket. As I bounced on it, he grabbed my nipples and started pinching them.

I yelled, “Owww!”

He pinched them harder and started thrusting faster. I came. He put a finger in my ass. The combination of that and the way he moved his junk, brought me to the most intense orgasm I had ever had.

After shaking, I collapsed onto his chest and quietly said, “I need a break, Daddy.”

He started thrusting faster and faster, as he said, “Little sluts don’t get breaks.”

He then stuck his finger deeper into my ass, causing me to cum even harder.

He ordered me to sit on his face. As he ate my pussy, I started sucking his cock. With the way he was making me feel, I found it difficult to pay attention to his unit. Every few minutes, he would stop and call me selfish and refuse to pleasure me, until my mouth gave his penis the attention he thought it deserved.

I then got back on all fours. Daddy grabbed my ass, as he moved his cock in and out of my pussy. He had me get on my back. For several glorious minutes, his tongue played in my vaginal playground. After making me cum for the umpteenth time, he put his missile back inside of me. With every thrust, I could feel his cock throb.

He looked at me and asked, “Can daddy fill his little slut up?”

I nodded yes right before he shot his load into my pussy. It felt amazing. His love filled my body.

He collapsed next to me, smiling and staring into my eyes.

As he moved some hair away from my eyes, he asked, “How does my little slut feel?”

“Mmmmmmm,” I said, as I kissed my daddy’s neck.

“Who does my little slut love more than anyone else in the world?” he asked.

“Daddy,” I answered.

“Who is the only man in my little slut’s life?” he asked.

“Daddy,” I answered.

“That’s right,” he said, as he put two fingers into my pussy.

“How much time before mom comes home?” I asked.

“Long enough for daddy to fuck his little slut one more time,” he said.

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Comments(65)

Phenney
Posted 15 Feb 2014 18:39
Great story! Loved it!!
veryoral_69
Posted 12 Jan 2014 00:42
Great story! Would like to see more of your work!
Gregminor1977
Posted 02 Jan 2014 22:55
Great writing. loved it.. and loved that it was their game every night.. mmmmm lots of cock stroking to this one. thanks for writing.
hunter_thomas
Posted 02 Jan 2014 11:04
wow - excellent, hot and amazing. Somebody has a lucky daddy lol
Petamarie
Posted 18 Dec 2013 08:09
Awesome story, incest is so hot!!!
Lbrowning6
Posted 18 Oct 2013 15:03
Really good story! You're a very good writer, and know how to get a man hot, and hard.
inferiormale
Posted 18 Sep 2013 10:18
What a beautiful piece of writing and what beautiful slut!
galanon35
Posted 26 Aug 2013 23:41
Hot story.
Perimedes
Posted 30 Jun 2013 15:14
Awesome. What a good little slut.
Odette
Posted 14 Jun 2013 03:13
Lovely.
barebear4u
Posted 11 Jun 2013 13:42
A wild time...and a hardening experience for me. Thanks for the fantasy
3102yuma
Posted 08 Jun 2013 18:56
Loved it, great story. Hopefully more will follow.
cumonmesweetpuss
Posted 26 May 2013 18:46
oh that's wild
AnLvr
Posted 07 May 2013 11:35
Great Story.
My favorite line is the last one.
Keep it up, you've got great "potential".
WEG,
A~
princessbella913
Posted 26 Mar 2013 00:39
looovvvve this story so hot and so true in so many ways great job
sexcapades
Posted 10 Mar 2013 07:52
Wow that was intense, erotic good work
michaelkanich
Posted 04 Feb 2013 16:50
I cant believe that was your first story it was very very good I cant waite for another

Californiaman
Posted 18 Jan 2013 18:12
Delightful. Hope to see more from you. Thanks for your effort.
Voortrekker
Posted 18 Jan 2013 18:02
WOW! What a lovely hot story. I am am your daddy right now watching you fingering yourself and me stroking myself ...
youngmommy
Posted 17 Jan 2013 13:27
Very hot and awesome!!!
triplel
Posted 23 Dec 2012 23:33
Sensational story, pure eroticism, from moment to moment you had me one the edge, fanfuckingtastic!
Buddybear
Posted 23 Dec 2012 21:13
GawwwwDAMMM that was so hot, so pornilicious. Made me sweat with lust. Made me touch myself. Made me wish I was that daddy. Well done!
tuffer3
Posted 08 Dec 2012 03:47
OMG SO HOT LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT
Daddy_Davey
Posted 25 Nov 2012 08:22
WOW great story. you should do a follow up with more anal
germanmtz
Posted 16 Nov 2012 19:06
your father is a lucky man
JPGR64
Posted 09 Nov 2012 08:09
Great Story! Very arousing!
fisherman6205
Posted 27 Oct 2012 17:58
Wonderfully written story... I love daddy-daughter... keep writing!! 5+
curious3045
Posted 19 Oct 2012 09:21
Wow, that was hot, definitely a talented writer. Looking forward to the next one
kputt6912
Posted 18 Oct 2012 22:39
Awesome story!!well written by a well educated woman lucky dad!!

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mashman
Posted 28 Sep 2012 02:40
Hot first story bodes very well for the future keep on you sexy little minx
raleighncguy69
Posted 18 Sep 2012 09:42
Your dad is a lucky man.
skip2951
Posted 21 Aug 2012 08:24
5+ well doe and hot hot hot...more soon plase
eric123
Posted 20 Aug 2012 02:09
Like the story. great job
mal0003
Posted 30 Jul 2012 04:04
Awesine story! Definitely had me stroking my cock while reading it! Look forward to more!
Budlee
Posted 29 Jul 2012 14:10
Great story of initiation into the world in family love and submission.
nephilim
Posted 25 Jul 2012 08:50
SO SEXY REALLY GOT ME HARD!
dik727
Posted 23 Jul 2012 15:02
Great story wish i had a daughter liek that so hot how old were you nad wern;t you afraid of getting pregnannt
philfree2bfree
Posted 17 Jul 2012 16:57
great story. Very well written.
Alisonbee483
Posted 15 Jul 2012 20:59
Wow amazing!
khlesas
Posted 12 Jul 2012 17:43
your are such a bad gal
dill67
Posted 12 Jul 2012 07:32
Part 2 soon?

Princesscrazy
Posted 11 Jul 2012 18:27
good god...beautiful and talented...a great combination!
magnus351
Posted 11 Jul 2012 09:42
very hot.

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ohioplayboy
Posted 10 Jul 2012 19:08
amazing story...look forward to reading more from you
swingking11
Posted 10 Jul 2012 18:06
excellent first story tons of detail. gave me great images in my mind as i read. hope you write some more very soon.
Koby
Posted 10 Jul 2012 15:43
Nice story - good detail
CrotchRocket
Posted 10 Jul 2012 14:33
It was amazing & well written. I like the storylines. Hope there is more
oldhotrodder
Posted 10 Jul 2012 12:37
Great Story! Good content and detail, good use of tension, suspense, guilt and situtation timing. Hard to believe it's your first write. When does Mom catch them and leave? Or does her brother catch them first?
pasmarine
Posted 10 Jul 2012 11:56
good story made me cum and gave me flashbacks

naughtyannie
Posted 10 Jul 2012 10:29
Very nicely written and structured: a good lead-up to set the scene, and then loads of very filthy hot sexual action!
hotyoung
Posted 10 Jul 2012 10:22
omg yes!!!! You made me cum
hotyoung
Posted 10 Jul 2012 10:21
omg yes!!!! You made me cum
analbitch01
Posted 10 Jul 2012 08:21
loved every word.... next
mrcomfy
Posted 10 Jul 2012 06:20
Very HOT story and instant hard........can't wait for more
olderthandirt
Posted 10 Jul 2012 01:34
wonderful story got me hard as hell
BizOwner45
Posted 10 Jul 2012 00:39
VERY hot story...nothing like that has ever happened in my life, but amazing to read the passion and just how well you write..very, very hot!
Windyman
Posted 10 Jul 2012 00:17
Great story, wish I could see pictures of you and daddy playing together.
brutus
Posted 09 Jul 2012 22:39
awesome story I really enjoyed it.
Issaquah
Posted 09 Jul 2012 21:53
Delicious story! Nicely constructed and written. Keep on writing as you are a true natural!
firewalker69
Posted 09 Jul 2012 21:22
Great Story...
Hoss7470
Posted 09 Jul 2012 20:28
Wow! Great story! Can't wait to read more!
ajpaul
Posted 09 Jul 2012 19:44
just so hott after seein your pics i can see you wid your daddy gettin fucked so damn sexy i came four times readin this story and im still hrd.
WomanPleaser63
Posted 09 Jul 2012 18:21
Very hot story kept me hard the whole time
Sarah84
Posted 09 Jul 2012 18:08
WOW! Very well written, hard to identify with the subject matter but cannot fault the eroticism and the writing style

gailxxx
Posted 09 Jul 2012 17:55
great first story. very hot. looking forward to your next one.
 

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