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My Christmas Wish

Sara's first Christmas without her whole family proves to be her best....

I had always had a very close knit family. I grew up in a warm home with 2 sisters and 3 brothers. My mom and dad were very happy together and never can I ever remember them fighting. We did everything as a family and we stood up for each other. I had never met another family like my own. We spend every holiday together.

I was the second oldest of the children. My brother Justin was older than me by only 10 months. I had been born 2 months early. He and I were closer to each other than any of our other siblings. He was my best friend and had been since I was a little girl.

Justin graduated from high school a year before I did. He didn't go to college, because he went straight into the family construction business. I selfishly was glad that he didn't leave, even though I had every intention of going off to college. I just couldn't stand the thoughts of living at home without him there. He had always been my shoulder to cry on and my protector. Sometimes he was a little too good of a protector, considering all of the guys in my town were afraid to go out with me because they were afraid of Justin. I didn't really mind though. I really just couldn't see myself with any of them anyway.

The year came that I graduated from high school. Over that summer my brother grew more and more distant from me. It broke my heart, because he stopped spending time with me. He wouldn't sit and watch movies with me and he no longer sat in my room until real late at night talking to me. I didn't understand why he was doing this and every time I tried to talk to him he would just blow me off.

I had been excepted into a college in another state. The day finally came for me to leave. My whole family gathered in the lobby of our family home. Everyone but Justin. I looked around and asked "Where is Justin?"

Mom and Dad gave each other a wary look. "Sara, your brother had to go into work. He was really upset that he couldn't be here."

I was so upset. I knew he could have been there. He was his own boss and I knew he just didn't want to be there. I fought back my tears and gave all of my brothers and sisters hugs. I hugged my parents and said my goodbyes. I got in my car and drove the 9 hours to college.

Most of the students at the college lived on campus, but my scholarship didn't pay for boarding and it was cheaper for me to rent an apartment. I got a job at a local coffee shop that barely paid over minimum wage. I struggled to pay my bills, but it was the only place that would work with my school schedule.

I had made several friends in a very short period of time, but none of them could take my mind off of my family. Especially my brother Justin. I had called home almost every night and every time I called I would ask to speak to him. He would always give Mom and Dad some excuse as to why he couldn't get on the phone with me. Every time it broke my heart even more. I didn't understand why all of a sudden Justin hated me.

Thanksgiving came and went. I didn't have enough money to go home for the holiday, but a friend of mine let me go with her to her family’s house. They lived 3 hours away and the only reason I could even afford to go there was because she drove and wouldn't let me help her with the gas money.

It was a nice dinner, but it was nothing like the huge Thanksgiving dinner my family always had. My whole family would be involved in fixing the food. Justin and I would always be in charge of the turkey, because he and I both would sit up almost all night while it baked in the oven. I missed him so bad.

After Thanksgiving, I got back into my daily routine of going to class, then to work. I tried to keep myself busy to keep my mind off of Justin. Nothing seemed to work. No matter how busy I was at work or how involved I was with my studies, my thoughts would always trail back to Justin. I felt more alone than I ever had and Christmas was quickly approaching.

I didn't have any money to buy Christmas gifts, much less decorations, but my landlord was kind enough to give me an old Christmas tree. The poor little thing was pitiful, but it was better than nothing. I made little paper ornaments for it and took pictures of my family and hung them on the tree too. I would stare at the pictures every night before I went to bed. I would get so homesick. I had the picture of Justin on the very top of the tree where the star would usually go. I would cry every time I looked at the picture.

It started snowing a week before Christmas. I had saved all the money I could save to be able to go home for Christmas. I had planned on leaving the day before Christmas Eve. I couldn't wait to go home to see my family. I was nervous about seeing Justin. I wasn't sure how he would react and I really didn't think I could stand it if he was still upset with me, for whatever reason.

I sat in my tiny living room watching the snow fall outside. I worried that if the snow didn't let up, I wouldn't be able to go home. My poor little car wasn't safe to drive on wet roads, much less roads covered with snow and ice.

It was the day before I was suppose to leave and there was a foot of snow on the ground. The weather man said that there was a blizzard coming and we were expecting at least nine more inches. My heart sank as I realized that I wouldn't be able to go home for Christmas.

With tears in my eyes I dialed the number to my family’s home. "Hello?" It was my little brother Joe.

"Hey JoJo, is mom around?"

"Yeah hold on a second." He held the phone away from his mouth and yelled. "Mom, Sara is on the phone."

A few seconds later my mom picked up the phone. "Hey sweetie. I just watched the news. You aren't going to be able to make it are you?"

I couldn't help but sob. I was crying so hard I could barely talk. "No, I'm not. The weather is too bad and they say it will be like this for a few weeks." I sobbed and tried to get a hold on myself. "Mom I miss you guys so bad and I am so homesick. I can't stand the thoughts of not being home for Christmas. We have never had a Christmas without everyone being there."

"I know sweetie, but you can't chance getting out on the road in that car. It's too dangerous. I would rather see you next summer and know that you are safe than for you to chance that drive and get yourself killed."

I heard the phone click on the other end. I thought Mom had hung up on me. "Mom, are you there?"

"Yes honey I'm here. It must have been JoJo hanging up the other phone. Listen baby, I am going to have to go because I'm right in the middle of fixing diner and our cordless phone tore up. I'll call you back here in a little while."

"Okay Mom." I sniffed. "I'll talk to you in a little while."

Mom took a deep breath. "Sweetie please calm down. Crying isn't going to fix anything."

"I know mom. I'll talk to you later."

I hung up the phone and buried my face in my pillow and cried. I must have cried myself to sleep, because I woke up to my phone ringing.

"Hello?" I said with sleep heavy in my voice.

"Hey sweetie, did I wake you up?" It was mom.

"Yeah, but that's okay. I didn't mean to fall asleep."

"Well it started snowing here now. We already had about 4 inches and they say it's just going to keep snowing until after Christmas. Your father just got home a little while ago and Justin took the truck. I have no idea where he was going, but he told your father that he needed the truck because it has 4 wheel drive."

I felt a strike of panic. "Mom he doesn't need to be out driving on the roads if they are bad. He could get himself killed."

"Sara, your brother has more experience driving in the snow than anyone. He's a big boy and I can't tell him what to do. Besides he's the one who bought that truck so I'm sure you can imagine what all it has on it. He has snow tires with chains on them so I'm pretty sure he will be alright."

After I was satisfied that my brother would be alright, Mom and I talked about random things until she started getting sleepy. She got off the phone and I walked into my living room and stared out the window with tears in my eyes.

I had always loved the snow. I remembered when I was little, Justin and I would go out and play for hours in the snow. Mom and Dad would have to make us come in to warm up. As soon as we were warm we would head right back out into it. We would build boy and girl snow people and we would make snow angels. He and I both would look forward to winter every year, but this year I hated the winter. I hated the snow. I hated Christmas.


I was miserable for the next few days. I watched the snow build and build outside. I missed my family so bad, but most of all I missed my brother, Justin.

It was Christmas Eve. The day had passed with everyone calling me to console me. They all tried to be sympathetic, but I couldn’t help but hear that Christmas Joy in their tone. I didn’t want anyone to be sad on Christmas, but it wasn’t helping me to hear all of them in their jolly good moods while I sat at home without my family, with barely a Christmas tree, no gifts under it and worse of all I didn’t have my brother. He hadn’t even called me today. I figured he would have at least called me to make sure I was alright. I guess he was really upset with me. I just wish I knew why.

I sat by my window watching the snow fall. I hated it. I would look up at my poor Christmas Tree and cry. I got up and got the picture of my brother and held it while I cried myself to sleep. Wishing on everything that I could at least have him with me for Christmas.

I had the strangest dream. In my dream I was sitting at my window and my brother walked in my front door and scooped me up and kissed me. Only he didn’t kiss me the way a brother should kiss a sister. He kissed me like I was a long lost lover. I woke up with a start and realized that my panties were wet. I couldn’t believe that I had just had a wet dream about my brother. I felt so ashamed and dirty, but I realized then why it had bothered me so much that my brother was upset with me. It hadn’t seemed like a fight between a brother and a sister. It has always felt like the love of my life had broken up with me. I realized that I felt like he had left me and not as my brother, but as my lover. I couldn’t believe what I was feeling. I have been in love with him this whole time. It was so wrong. How could I feel that way about my brother. I realized that all the signs were there. I never dated anyone because I didn’t need to. I had him. I never had sex with anyone, because no one ever measured up to him.

What if that was why he was so upset with me? Had he realized before I did what my true feelings for him were? Was he disgusted with me because he knew I was in love with him?

I felt tears come to my eyes. I stood up and looked out my window. I watched as a black truck pulled up outside. Who would be crazy enough to get out in this weather? Then I seen the family business name on the side of the truck. OH MY GOD. I had to be dreaming. That is what it was. I was just dreaming. This was all a dream. I didn’t really feel that way for my brother. It was just a dream.

I stood up and started to go put some clothes on, convinced that I was dreaming anyway. I hit my shin on my coffee table and it hurt really bad. I realized that I wasn’t dreaming. I walked back over to the window and I watched Justin get out of the truck and look around. He had a piece of paper in his hand and he was scanning the neighborhood. I assumed he was trying to find my apartment. I wanted to run to him and jump in his arms, but I couldn’t. I was frozen at my window looking down on him in the street. I couldn’t believe he was actually here on Christmas.

He turned around and looked up at the second story window of my apartment. Our eyes met and for a moment we just stood there staring at each other. Then he smiled at me. I smiled back and ran for my door. I ran down the stairs and out into the snow. I didn’t even feel the cold nor did I realize what I was wearing.

I ran straight to him and jumped in his arms. “Whoa! Sis, you are going to get sick out here dressed like that.” He picked me up and carried me into the house.

I was only wearing a t-shirt that was just long enough to cover my belly button and a pair of bikini cut black cotton panties. He sat me down on the couch and sat down with me. He stared at me then he smiled. “Marry Christmas Sara.”

I couldn’t believe he was here. I just stared at him and then I became aware of what I was wearing. I felt that my nipples were hard under my shirt. I knew they were showing through. I couldn’t decide if they were hard from the cold or if it was from they way he was looking at me. I was shivering all over. I went to grab the blanket from the back of the couch and he quickly grabbed my wrist. “Hey, it’s not like it’s something I’ve never seen before. We use to take baths together, remember?” I let go of the blanket.

He smiled at me. “Oh I have something for you.” He dug around in his pockets for a minute and then pulled out a colorful box. “I stopped at every store from home to here looking for this and wouldn’t you know it, the store right down the road here was the only one that had it.” He turned the box around and I could see the green mistletoe through the clear cellophane window of the box. He opened the box and pulled out the mistletoe and held it up. “Well Sara, how about a Christmas kiss for your brother?”

I couldn’t help but notice the desire in his eyes. He was scanning my whole body. I slowly leaned up and he held the mistletoe above our heads. I still hadn’t spoke a word. He leaned in and he kissed me on the lips. He lingered a little longer than what would be appropriate for a brother. I pulled away from him, because I could feel my pussy getting wet again. I felt the tingling sensation I feel when I get turned on. “Is that all I get after driving for over 2 days in the snow? That nine hour drive takes a bit longer when you are only able to drive 20 miles an hour you know.”

I smiled at him. I leaned over and kissed him again. Just planning to give him another peck on the lips, but he wrapped his hand around my head and full on kissed me. I felt his tongue teasing my lips and even though there was a part of me telling me it was wrong, I accepted his tongue in my mouth.

He broke the kiss this time. “Sara, I am so sorry I have been so mean to you. I know you are probably going to hate me after this and you are going to think I’m some sick bastard, but when you graduated high school and decided that you were leaving for college I realized that I was in love with you and I don’t mean I love you like a sister, which I do, but I love you so much more than that. I tried to fight the feelings away and I was so angry because you were leaving. I decided it would be best for us both if I just stopped hanging around you. I didn’t want to do something and you end up hating me for it, but after I realized how I felt, it was too hard for me to not touch you and I had to fight the urge to kiss you every time you were around me. God Sara it broke my heart to see that confused look on your face every time I pushed you away. I hated to see you hurt. When you called and talked to Mom the other night and you were so upset I decided then that I was coming to see you. There was nothing that was going to stop me from getting here by Christmas. I’ll understand if you hate me, but I can’t keep my feelings for you hidden anymore.”

I sat there and stared at him. I don’t know what emotions played on my face, but I was overjoyed. He felt the same for me as I did him. He loved me. He came all this way to be with me on Christmas. He was my Christmas wish and it came true. I smiled up at him and leaned over and kissed him.

He pulled back and looked at me. “Sara, what are you thinking?”

“I’m thinking this is the best Christmas of my life.”

He grabbed me and pulled me over to him and he started kissing me hard and urgently. I ran my fingers through his hair and fought his thick heavy coat off of him. He pulled my t-shirt off of me and pushed me down on the couch. He stood up and took off his shirt and his pants. We were both in our underwear now. He came over to me and leaned over top of me and whispered. “You don’t know how bad I have wanted this.” He picked me up and carried me into the bedroom. He softly lay me on the bed and climbed on top of me. I could feel his hard cock pressing against my panty clad pussy. He started kissing on my neck and around my ears, sending shivers all through my body. I could feel the goose flesh rising up on my skin as he licked and sucked at my earlobes.

My panties were so wet they were leaving little wet spots on the front of his boxers. He kissed down to my nipples and sucked my left one into his mouth. I ran my fingers through his hair and pressed my pussy against his side. He ran his hand down my belly and started rubbing my pussy through my panties. He pulled the crotch of my panties to the side and started rubbing on my clit. I instinctively raised my hips in a humping motion. He put his finger in my pussy. “God Sara you are so tight. Don’t tell me you haven’t let any of the college ass-holes get in your panties.”

I smiled at him. “I think I was always saving myself for the man I really loved.”

He looked at me bewildered. “Are you telling me that you are a virgin too?”

“You mean you are?”

He smiled at me. “I’ve done everything but have sex. I never could bring myself to do it. It just never felt right.”

I kissed him again. He pulled away from me and started licking down my belly. He hooked his fingers under the band of my panties and slowly pulled them off of me. His cock was pitching a good sized tent in his boxers. I couldn’t wait to see it and feel it.

He knelt down on the floor and pulled me to the edge of the bed where my legs were hanging over and my pussy was right on the edge and he started licking my pussy. He put two fingers in my cunt and licked my clit. I was raising and dropping my hips with each thrust of his fingers. I had never felt something so magical in all my life. He took his free hand and spread my pussy lips apart with his thumb and middle finger and he started flicking my clit with his tongue. I clinched my pussy tight around his fingers and it only encouraged him to go faster. He was pumping his fingers in and out of my pussy and flicking my clit with his tongue and I knew there was nothing in the world that could ever feel better than this. The he pulled his fingers out of my pussy and stuck his tongue in it. He tongue fucked me for a few minutes while he took his finger and massaged my clit. I couldn’t hold off anymore. “Oh, god Justin, I’m going to cum.” He put his fingers back in my pussy and took his other hand and started rubbing my clit.

“Yeah baby. I want to watch you cum. Look at me Sara baby. I want you to look in my eyes when you have your orgasm.” I forced my eyes open and looked him right in the eyes and just seeing the desire in his eyes pushed me over the edge. I started bucking in ecstasy. My pussy was contracting around his fingers and he was vigorously rubbing my clit. I kept eye contact with him. “That’s right baby. Ride it out. Let it take over.”

I couldn’t stand anymore and I pushed his hand away from my clit. He came down on me and kissed me. His tongue and lips tasted like my pussy and it turned me on even more. He kept his fingers in my pussy the whole time, but now he was just slowly pushing them in and out. “How did that feel? How did it feel to have your pussy eaten by your big loving brother?”

I smiled at him. “I don’t think it would have felt good if it had been anyone else.”

“I always told you that I would take care of you. I meant that in any way possible.”

I kissed him again. I loved him so much. He was my brother, my lover and my protector. “Now, I need to take care of you.” I could feel his huge cock against my thigh. He was so hard I knew it had to be painful for him.

“You don’t have to Sara. I can take care of it myself. This was your Christmas present from me.”

I cocked my eyebrows. “Well I’m greedy and I want more than just that.” I pushed him off of me and forced him to lay on his back. I straddled him and started kissing him. I kissed down his body while he ran his fingers through my hair. I got to his boxers and I pulled on them. He wouldn’t lift his hips. “I can’t get to your cock through your shorts Justin.”

“Sara, I’m a little large and I’m afraid …..”

“It’s my decision, now lift your hips before you lose that beautiful erection.” He obeyed. I pulled his shorts down and was shocked at what I saw. His cock was at least nine inches long and as big around as my wrist. I didn’t have huge wrist, but it was big around for a cock. I tried to act like I wasn’t afraid. I took the head of his cock in my mouth and that was really all that would fit. I used my hand to stroke his cock as I made love with my mouth to the head of it. I had never sucked a cock before, but I had watched enough porn to have a vague idea of what to do. He didn’t seem mind what I was doing so I kept on. I ran my mouth down the sides of his cock and licked his balls. Then as I came back up I ran the tip of my tongue alone the underside of his cock. He was so large in my hand I honestly wondered if I could actually fuck him.

“Oh Sara, that feels so good.”

Hearing his encouragement got me even more turned on. I started stoking him faster and sucking on his cock harder. “Oh Sara if you don’t slow down I’m going to cum in your mouth.”

I had always been grossed out by watching a porn where a guy would shoot cum in a girls mouth. I had always swore I would never let a guy cum in my mouth. But having Justin’s cock in my mouth and tasting the little drizzles of pre-cum that would seep out of the head of his cock it really turned me on to think about him Cuming in my mouth. I started stroking him even faster and moving my mouth in rhythm with my hand up and down his cock. I was able to get a little more of him in my mouth now. I felt his cock get harder in my hand and start to throb.

“Sara, baby I’m going to cum. I’m going to cum in your mouth if you don’t move.”

I sucked him in harder to tell him that I wanted him to cum in my mouth. He took both of his hands and grabbed my head and thrust his cock further in my mouth and I felt the first string of cum shoot into my mouth. I took my free hand and started rubbing my clit. It was making me so wet to have his cum in my mouth. He shot at least six more shots in my mouth and I swallowed all of it. I sucked the head of his cock to get any that was left behind. I felt him shudder as I licked my tongue around his sensitive cock head.

He pulled me up on top of him and kissed me. I thought for sure that his cock would go soft after that, but it didn’t. At least not completely. It wasn’t as hard as it had been, but it was hard enough. He rolled me over. “Are you sure you want to do this?”

I smiled at him. “It’s my Christmas present.”

He took his cock and lined it up with my cunt. “Sara you know this is going to hurt.”

“I suspect it will, but we all have to lose our virginity somehow. I will never have sex with anyone else so it’s either right now or later. Either way you are going to be the one to take my cherry.”

He smiled at me and leaned down and started kissing me. I could feel the head of his huge cock pressing against my opening. While he kissed me he took his cock and started rubbing the head up and down my slit, getting it nice and wet for easier entry. Then he lined it back up and kissed me hard as he shoved the head of his cock inside of me. I moaned in pain and he raised up a little and panted “Okay baby. I’m going to break your cherry now. It will hurt, but it will go away fast. Just take a deep breath.”

It felt like my pussy was stretched to it’s limits. I took a deep breath and again he leaned down and kissed me hard and pushed his cock on through my cherry. I screamed in his mouth and he just kissed me harder. As he kissed me and pushed his cock deeper inside of me the pain slowly went away and melted into pleasure. My moans of agony turned to moans of desire and I started raising my hips to meet his thrusts.

I couldn’t believe how wonderful he felt inside of me. I could feel the defining difference of his shaft and the head of his cock. I could feel his cock head ripple across the ridges inside my pussy walls. I idly wondered how this felt for him, but just as the thought crossed my mind he panted in my ear. “This feels so good. I can’t stand it. You are so tight it is almost painful.”

This made me realize that I was wrong when I thought that him eating my pussy was the most wonderful feeling in the world. This was. That was the greatest feeling I had ever felt. I started pushing my hips up faster, forcing him to go faster too. He was now going at a pretty fast pace. His balls were slapping my ass every time he thrust his huge cock into my pussy. The contact of our bodies were making loud slapping noises. I felt like I was in a dream. Everything was perfect now.

“Sara, I’m getting close to cumming. Are you on anything?”

I knew what he was asking. He was asking me if I was on any kind of birth control. I wasn’t, but I couldn’t stand the thoughts of him taking his cock away from me. The thoughts of him cumming inside of me just made me that much wetter and it made me start fucking him faster and harder.

“Sara, you have to tell me what to do, because we only have seconds here.”

“Cum inside me.”

“Are you on anything?”

“No, and I don’t care. Don’t you dare pull your cock out of me.”

This sent him over the edge and I felt his cock harden even more. It had my pussy stretched further than it had ever been. I felt the first surge rip through his cock and I felt his cum release in my pussy. This brought me to an orgasm and my pussy tried to contract around his cock, but it had no where to go. It was completely filled with is cock. I could feel every throb and every spurt of cum. I came so hard I couldn’t breathe. “Oh my god, Justin.”

He rolled over and pulled me on top of him. I had no idea how he could still be hard. This was the second time he had came in less than two hours, but his cock was still as hard as a rock. I started pumping myself up and down on his cock. My orgasm has subsided by now and I could already feel another one coming on. I started fucking him faster and harder. I was amazed at how easily his cock was now sliding in and out of my pussy. He was thrusting up as I was coming down and this was doing wonderful things to my clit. I tried to hold it off, but I couldn’t. I came again. I could actually see my juices running down his cock.

He pushed me up and slammed me back down on his cock and held me there as he came again inside my pussy. Again I felt each shot of cum his cock shot out. I could see it running out of my over filled pussy as his cock softened inside of me. There was so much cum I wondered how he had produced so much. His soft cock slit the rest of the way out of me and he pulled me forward and kissed me softly.

“I love you so much Sara. I can’t stand the thoughts of going back home without you.”

“I don’t want you to either, but what if I told you I would be home in a few months.”

He raised up and looked me in the eye. “Sara what are you saying?”

“I have tried to make it here without my family and even harder without you and I am miserable Justin. I am so homesick I just can’t stand the thoughts of spending another semester here. I went before Christmas break and applied for financial aid so I can go to the community college back home. They told me that I would have to wait a semester before I could start, but I didn’t care. I was planning on telling Mom and Dad after Christmas. I didn’t want them to try to hold onto money to try to help me. I wanted everyone at home to have a good Christmas. My lease on this apartment is up in February and I have already talked to a few people back home about getting another apartment. I don’t really want to move back into the house.”

Justin smiled at me. He leaned over and kissed me. “Well I think all this furniture will fit in the truck. We can go and get some plastic to cover it and you can ride home with me.”

I frowned at him. I didn’t really want to leave right away. I was hoping to have him to myself for a couple of days. I also didn’t have a place yet and I really didn’t want to move back in with Mom and Dad. “Justin, I don’t really want to go until I have an apartment and I was really hoping you would stay here a few days with me. I don’t want you to leave yet.”

He smiled at me. “Silly Sara. I plan on staying here with you for a few days. I took two weeks off of work.” He pulled me closer to him. “And didn’t Mom tell you? I got an apartment of my own. You can move in with me and we can tell Mom and Dad that you decided to just split the bills with me. You won’t have to work and you can focus on your studies. And more importantly, we can be together whenever we want to.”

I smiled up at him and wrapped my arms around him. We made love several more times that day. As we lay in my bed that night, curled up in each others arms, with his steady breathing beside me as he slept, I couldn’t help but think of what a turn around this Christmas had been. I was expecting to spend Christmas alone and depressed, instead I learned that the man I loved, my brother, loved me in return. He came to spend Christmas with me. He was what I had wished for. I had gotten my Christmas Wish!

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Posted 20 May 2012 10:54
A very sweet story
Posted 04 Sep 2010 16:21
Wow, girl, this was seriously terrific. You're an excellent writer.
Posted 07 Jul 2010 20:28
that was great, please write a sequel
Posted 16 Dec 2009 14:14
I love Christmas - Don't you?
Posted 25 Nov 2009 07:02
Wonderful! I don't know if I can say more. Just wonderful! What sister wouldn't love to have her brother for a Christmas prezzie!
Posted 03 Nov 2009 23:14
WOW I think you just gave me an xmas present. Well mabe I wont wait that Well told very emotional Slow buildup to a great climax. Good stories are just like great sex. Thanks
Posted 21 Oct 2009 20:33
Excellent story luv. I gave you a solid "5"! Thanks, Reeb
Posted 15 Oct 2009 03:53
wonderfull great storielove you waiting for an other one
Posted 10 Oct 2009 20:58
really good story...
Posted 10 Oct 2009 19:16
wonder way that you draw your readers into there world nice buildup love the story
Posted 10 Oct 2009 13:01
Beautiful Story. Very good build up to the sex. Just not bam bam thank you mam. Little bit unusual for not going to home on chrismas. Very natural sex scene for the first time sex. Keep up the good work. Well done. Definitely a Five. Professor.
Posted 10 Oct 2009 07:54
Damn girl. That is a fucking hot story. Would you like to be MY Christmas wish? I'd jingle every bell on your body.
Posted 09 Oct 2009 23:37
slow start but worth the wait... loved it
Posted 09 Oct 2009 10:59
Outstanding !!! Well done
Posted 09 Oct 2009 00:02
It's so vivid, should define more details in the sex scenes. How the girl moans in each strokes, etc. These would give all readers "a video in written form"
Posted 08 Oct 2009 20:54
Aww Shucks. You write such great stories! I love them! Definitely a 5!

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