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My Sister, My Domme

A continuation of my story My Sister, My Mistress
My brother followed my orders to him. He never spoke to me about what we had done. That was the way I liked it. My relationship with my brother would remain unchanged. That is, until we were alone with each other.

While Jack never talked to me about the sexual relationship we were forging, he did talk to his LushStories Mistress at great length about it. Jack never suspected that I had discovered his predilection for BDSM by snooping through his computer. Nor did he suspect I had discovered his Lush Stories persona, Submale287, and had become his “Mistress Leta.”

I was becoming obsessed with thoughts about dominating my big brother sexually after 18 years of being his normal, socially acceptable, little sister. Now all day long, all I could think about were all the sexy things I wanted to do to him. I couldn’t wait until bedtime, when I would retire to my room and become Mistress Leta.

Laying naked in my bed, I cruised numerous BDSM web sites, becoming more and more aroused by this new world I had entered. While I waited for Jack to log on to Lush, I developed plans to further sexually dominate my big brother.

“Hello Mistress,” Jack had finally logged in.

“Good evening worm,” I typed, “how did your evening go with your sister. I expect a full detailed report.”

Jack delivered a good report, in delicious detail, of what we had done the night before.

“You said you were blindfolded worm. How can you be sure she was naked?” I questioned him.

“I could feel her nudity against my skin mistress,” Jack answered.

“But you did see her nude when I had you sneak into her bedroom while she was asleep,” I asked.

“Yes Mistress,” Jack quickly replied.

“Tell me again,” I ordered, “I don’t remember what she looked like. Be clear in your description.”

“Yes Mistress,” Jack continued, “Jenny is beautiful at 5’ 7”, 133 pounds, with long black hair streaked with red. She has stunning light blue eyes and 34A breasts. That night I saw she shaves her pussy, but couldn’t see much more in the light I had, Mistress.”

“Small tits,” I criticized, “don’t you wish they were bigger, you little worm?”

“Mistress, I think they are perfect. I almost came when she rubbed them over my thighs last night,” Jack defended.

“Is your little cock hard now worm,” I wondered, “as you tell me about your sister?”

“Yes Mistress,” Jack answered.

“You are not to touch it,” I ordered, “Is that clear?”

“Yes Mistress,” Jack typed, but I could almost detect a little whimper in his message.

“I have new orders for you worm,” I directed, “you are to buy a leather cock sling for yourself and a three piece leather sleeved bikini for your sister.”

“But Mistress,” Jack responded, “I don’t know where I could get these.”

“Be a man, you little worm, their are sex shops everywhere and places on line,” I told him and added, “Maybe I should end our relationship you worm.”

“No, please, I will get them somehow Mistress,” Jack pleaded.

“Very well.” I continued, “When you have them, ask your sister to wear the bikini for you and in return you will model the sling for her. If she agrees, you are to obey her as you would me. Is that clear?”

“Yes, Mistress,” Jack obeyed.

“I want a full report from you when you have done this you little worm,” I demanded.

“Yes, Mistress,” Jack replied, “but what should I do if she refuses?”

A few moments later, the screen only showed, Mistress Leta seems to have left the conversation.

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I had become fascinated and excited by items I had seen online. I wanted to buy some to use with my brother but, I was afraid my parents would discover them if I had them shipped to my house. Therefore, I decided I would visit, for the first time in my life, a sex shop.

I had seen some shops downtown, but they weren’t in very nice areas. Luckily, I found one online way across town in a suburb I had never heard of. That was fine by me, because I sure didn’t want any one I knew to see me shopping there.

I wasn’t quite sure what to expect as I pulled into the parking lot of Delicious Pleasures. I was a little frightened, but also more than a little excited. I don’t know what I expected would happen inside but by the way my pussy was feeling, I was ready for anything.

I took a deep breath, for courage, and pulled open the door. I was overcome by a flood of very pleasant orders. The smell of new leather, some kind of jasmine oil, and a flood of fragrant candles of many varieties filled the air. As I took it all in, an older woman with graying hair and looking remarkably like Mrs. Butterworth stepped forward.

“Hello my dear, may I help you?” she asked, sensing my embarrassment, she added, “First time visiting our little pleasure palace?”

“Yes, it is.” I softly mumbled still looking around and seeing things I had never seen before.

“Is there anything specifically you are looking for dear?” she sweetly asked.

I was ready for this, “My boyfriend and I have been talking about, well wondering about, a small flogging whip that we had seen online. I thought it would be fun to get him one for his birthday next week.”

“Of course,” she said with a twinkle in her eye, “I have just the thing for you over here.”

I followed her over to a display full of a variety of little whips similar to what I had seen online. She offered one to me.

“This is the style I started with when I was about your age,” she said with a wink and a smile. “The handle is handmade with a soft goat skin and the whips are made of soft suede, don’t you just love the smell?”

I had to admit the smell was intoxicating and she had picked one for me that was black and red to match my hair color. It was soft to the touch but I could feel its painful potential. It was just what I wanted.

“How much is this, ma-am?” I asked.

“Oh please call me Deloris, sweetheart,” she sweetly responded. “This one sells for $59.99.” She saw my disappointment, and quickly added, “But since you are a new customer, I can offer you a 33% discount if you purchase over $100 worth of merchandise.”

“Why thank you Deloris, my name is ... Leta,” I countered, “what would you suggest to someone who is new to all this?”

“May I ask who will be using the flogger, dear?” she asked with such a sweet and innocent demeanor I couldn’t resist her.

“I will,” I said with a boldness that surprised me.

Deloris sweetly smiled as she said, “Oh my dear, you are a girl after my own heart, I have been keeping that hubby of mine in check for almost fifty years with my little flogger! Men are so easily keep in line with a little leather and a flash of skin.”

I found her absolutely delightful. She was like the grandmother I had never known, only a kinkier version. I was completely at ease with her and asked, “What would you recommend?”

She stared at me for a few moments, and said, “You promise not to be shocked Leta?”

“I can’t promise that, there are things in here I can’t even begin to imagine, but I promise you I won’t be offended.” I told her, “What is it?”

“Follow me,” she said with that twinkle again in her eye, “This is the most wonderful thing, Leta. It has been the key to my happiness and his for years.”

Deloris reached under a counter and set it in front of me.

“A rubber penis?” I asked, disappointed and amused. “Deloris, I know what a dildo is...”

“Oh, this is more than that,” she interrupted, “look more carefully.” She held it up for me to examine. “This is a silicon ball gag with a dildo for him. This strap holds it in place, this end goes in his mouth, and this wonderful end can go anywhere you wish it to go. Best of all, it shuts him up. He won’t be able to say a single word.”

I started to laugh as I imagined this large silicon penis growing out of my brother’s mouth.

“How much?” I asked.

“This sells for $49.99,” she quickly added, “I will sell both this Ball Gag and the Flogger to you for $75, as an introductory price.” She picked up a felt blindfold and added, “I’d make him wear this when you play Leta. It is my gift to you!”

How could I refuse? As she wrapped up my purchases, she held the gag and looked at it for a moment, “Oh Leta, my dear, this will soon be your best friend. I promise you!”

With a wink, she handed me my purchases. I left the store happy the bag was a simple blue plastic without a screaming ad for Sex-toys-r-us written all over the outside.

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Later that night in my room, I carefully examined my purchases. I fondled the flogger’s handle like it was a cock, stroking it’s soft leather handle. The handle was also stiff, like an erection. I noticed my face in the mirror of the dresser next to my bed. My face was flushed and I could see my erect nipples stretching the cotton of my shirt.

I ran the handle down my shirt, across my breasts, teasing my hard nipples and then down my body along the inner thighs of my jeans. I unbuttoned my shirt and moved the handle across my exposed nipples exciting them even more. I moved the handle back down to my jeans and pushed the handle firmly against my denim covered pussy. Using a familiar rocking motion against its stiffness I was becoming incredibly excited.

I quickly undressed and in the full light from my bed side lamps, I laid back on my bedspread and slowly and gently dragged the soft suede tails of the flogger across my body.

Slowly sweeping the tails across my neck, I spent some time running the tails back and forth across my breasts, and then down my stomach. I ran the strips of suede down one thigh, with some of them sliding down to my inner thighs and brushing against my pussy. I moved to the other thigh and repeated the motions up and down my body over and over again.

I continued this heavenly exercise until I found my body rising and falling the meet these sensuous suede strings of pleasure caressing my body. I then started to run the handle along the swollen lips of my pussy. Teasing myself and feeling its stiffness at my entrance.

The feeling was unlike any I had ever experienced with a simple dildo. The long tails rubbing across my thighs as the handle began to slowly enter me was beyond description.

I decided, if I was going to do this, I would go all the way. I gently slapped the tails against my breasts. It felt good. I slapped them a little harder. It felt a little better.

I slapped my pussy. It felt even better. I raised my knees up and let my legs fall open fully exposing my swollen cunt to the increasing force of the flogger. My hips pushed forward meeting each lashing until I couldn’t stand it anymore. I pushed the handle inside me.

I was so close to a powerful orgasm that only a few thrusts and pressure against my enlarged clit sent me over the edge.

I lay panting on my bedspread. I looked at my flogger. I was beginning to understand.

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At breakfast the next morning, Jack and I got the news of another date night set for that evening by our parents.

Outside, as we walked our dog Tobie, Jack asked if I was going out tonight.

“I was thinking about going to a movie with Jill (my lifelong bff),” I told Jack. “Why?”

“I bought you a gift and I would like to give it to you tonight,” Jack added. “When we are alone.”

“Well, we are alone now, why don’t you give it to me here,” I teased him, knowing full well he probably had purchased the leather bikini Leta had ordered him to get me. “What did you get me a gift for anyway? It’s not my birthday.”

“Does a brother need a reason to give his little sister a gift?” Jack defended.

“You do. What did you do Jack, hit my bike with the car?” I egged.

“Look, if you want to stay home tonight,” Jack explained, “you will get a present. It is up to you.”

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“Have a good time,” we both shouted to our parents as they closed the front door heading out on their date.

“Okay, where is it? Give me! Give me!” I squealed, mimicking the excitement of Tobie about to get his doggy treat.

Jack went to his room and retrieved a nicely gift-wrapped box. I was impressed.

I quickly ripped open the box, just like I had always attacked presents since I was a little girl on Christmas morning.

I faked angry annoyance as I held up the tiny leather bikini bottom saying, “What the hell is this Jack? A pirate’s eye-patch?”

I enjoyed watching my squirming brother. He was either flushed with excitement or embarrassment - probably both.

“Please, won’t you wear this for me?” he pleaded.

“Are you out of your mind big brother? Why not just ask me to get bare naked?” I teased.

“Would you?” he said with slight embarrassment.

“No!” I faked disgusted anger. I should be an actress, I thought proudly to myself.

“I’ll wear this for you, if you wear that for me,” he begged as he pulled the little leather and metal cock sling out of his pocket.

“And just what the hell is that thing?” I half laughed and screamed. I was thinking a Tony Award would now be appropriate for this performance.

“It’s a cock sling,” he sheepishly stated.

“A what?” I voiced, with tempering anger and a hint of curiosity. Definitely an Oscar would also be in order, I thought.

“It’s a cock sling Jenny,” Jack quietly restated with a voice filled with embarrassment and near defeat.

It was time to reestablish my new sibling superiority over my brother. “Take off your clothes and let me see.”

“Will you put on the bikini for me if I do?” he asked.

“You are trying to bargain with me? You little bitch! Take off your clothes now and show me your new cock sling!” I shouted at him, physically right up in his face, though his face was a head higher than mine.

I watched as my brother slowly undressed for me. I enjoyed his nervousness and his obvious arousal when his cock bounced up and out of his boxers as he pulled them off. I watched in fascination as he put on the cock sling.

I had to admit, it really displayed his package nicely.

I ordered him to go to his room and wait for me spread open on his bed.

I stopped off at my parents room and grabbed four of my Dad’s old ties from the back of his closest. I entered my brother’s room and saw his disappointment that I had not changed into the bikini. Without a word, I tied him spread-eagled, to his bed and left.

I took the leather bikini to my room. I watched myself in my mirror as I slipped the little leather bra over my breasts and adjusted the bikini bottom over my pussy. I slipped on the sleeves and picked up my flogger. Pretty damned hott, I thought to myself as I slapped the tails across my hand. Pretty damned hott.

I picked up the gag ball dildo and hid it behind me in the leather strap around my waist. I walked into Jack’s room. His eyes almost popped out of his head when he saw me and my little flogger friend.

“Good god Jenny...” he started to say.

I cut him off, “Not one word out of you bitch! Nod, if you understand.”

He nodded as I slowly started to run the soft tails of the flogger over his body. I whirled them around his erect cock that was displayed so nicely to me. I watched it twitch with each touch of the flogger.

I continued this for a few minutes and then started to slap his cock with the flogger. Each slap a little stronger than the last. Jack started moaning in ecstasy.

“I said to be quiet bitch!” I reminded as I pulled the gag out from behind me.

Jack’s eyes opened as wide as saucers at the sight of it.

“Open your mouth bitch,” I ordered as I fixed the gag in his mouth and set the strap. I watched Jack’s eyes stare down the length of the silicon penis now sticking out of his mouth. I started to lick it and suck on its head, giving it the best blow job I had ever given any cock, as he silently watched with his eyes only inches away. All the while, I was lightly whipping Jack’s erection with my flogger.

I gently lifted his head and whispered in his ear, “You don’t want to see what I am going to do next.” I slipped the blindfold Deloris had given me over his eyes.

Knowing he couldn’t see me, I took off the leather bikini. Wearing only the leather sleeves, I felt powerful and sexy as I looked at my older brother laying helpless and exposed in front of me.

Kneeling between his open legs, I carefully examined his body. I admired the way his cock looked, presented to me in leather and metal. Using the flogger, I moved it from side to side as I examined it. I spoke, “Is this what you like bitch? Do you want to be your little sister’s bitch?”

I increased the strength of the flogging of his chest, stomach, and penis. With each increase in intensity, his hips raised his exposed genitals to meet the oncoming shower of suede. The pleasure he was experiencing was evident in his moans and whimpering.

Changing my position slightly, I straddled his leg and began to grind my soaked pussy into his knee. All the while alternating between gently stroking his body with the tails of the flogger to snapping the whips against him leaving faint pink steaks across his flesh.

Tossing the flogger aside, I began to rub my body against his. I teased his cock with my breasts as I slowly pushed down on him. I slid myself slowly up his body feeling his hard penis pushing against my tummy as my tits rubbed against his nipples. “Don’t you dare cum yet you little bitch,” I warned him.

I straddled his hips, sliding further up his body. His erection glided along the wetness between my legs so tantalizingly close to entering me. Oh god, just a slight shift and he would slide right inside me. I wanted it so badly, but I was in control! I slide further up his hard body, leaving that wonderful pleasure pole behind.

My face by his, I started to fondle and suck the silicon cock sticking out of Jack’s mouth as Jack’s moans and hip thrusts increased. All the while slowly sliding up his body until I straddled his head.

I slowly lowered myself onto that solid silicon shaft. Holding onto the headboard, I started fucking my brother’s face like a woman possessed. Close to cumming, I rotated my position with my back now to the headboard. I picked up the flogger and began to alternate slapping my brother’s throbbing erection and slapping my little tits that were now bouncing up and down as I humped the cock in my brother’s mouth.

As I came I cried out, “Cum with me now you little bitch!” I slapped his cock as it erupted with rope after rope of creamy cum shooting everywhere.

Fully satisfied now, I collapsed across his body. Sliding down his cum soaked torso until my face rested along side his slowly pulsing penis, I watched as the last few drops of cum came out his helmet and slowly dripped down his shaft. Our bodies slowly recovering as we finally caught our breath.

I moved up along side him and gave him my final orders of the night, “Do not move for five minutes after I untie you. Clean up everything and put my things in the bottom drawer of my dresser. This never happened and if you ever speak of this to anyone you be very sorry bitch.”

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The next evening, I was up in my room listening to music, when my best friend Jill popped in. This was usual for her, my mom always let her in and sent her up - just like her mom did with me. We chatted for a while until Jill caught a glimpse of suede fringe sticking out the bottom drawer of my dresser.

“Did you get that hippie purse we saw at the store?” she asked as she pulled open the drawer to examine the new find.

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Comments(117)

barebear4u
Posted 13 May 2013 12:14
What a fabulos story and great second shapter - write more! Chapter 3 I only wish I had thisfor reference when my sister was around!
barebear4u
Posted 13 May 2013 12:14
What a fabulos story and great second shapter - write more! Chapter 3 I only wish I had thisfor reference when my sister was around!
KaraB
Posted 02 Apr 2013 11:18
Awesome read, thank you for writing for us!

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LOVES4PLAY
Posted 08 Mar 2013 18:44
Jess; This was the 2nd time reading your Fem. Dom. story.And its still as erotic & entertain g as it was the first time..

I was hoping to find that you had blessed us with chapter, THREE
Only thing different ; I'm not voting..... If I could, It would be a score of five again... PLS. ANOTHER CHAPTER..
Keala
Posted 02 Mar 2013 10:15
Absolutely brilliant! I loved the mix of genre. Very well written. When will we see more? Five all the way!
oleharleydude
Posted 17 Feb 2013 14:06
a fantastic, well written story. the first story of this type I've read. but not the last.
JakeT
Posted 01 Feb 2013 11:08
Very sexy
Halle
Posted 10 Jan 2013 13:28
Absolutely brilliant blending of several genres!
cunnilinguist
Posted 04 Jan 2013 13:32
The story is awesome. God, how I envy your writing right now. Once again, amazing.
cunnilinguist
Posted 04 Jan 2013 13:24
The story is awesome. God, how I envy your writing right now. Once again, amazing.
Annette
Posted 23 Dec 2012 21:45
Absolutely super eroticism for this girl. Scoring this a five any day. Well done Jessica.
Cal
Posted 08 Dec 2012 14:37
You know exactly what this story inspired don't you? I really enjoyed it.
Reese
Posted 01 Dec 2012 11:23
Absolutely love your work
RandiM
Posted 27 Nov 2012 13:42
Oh my, oh my, that was so very hot, sexy, and arousing!

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LOVES4PLAY
Posted 23 Nov 2012 10:07
Wow great ideal of combining BD SM,& incest all under FEM DOM..
LOVED IT
Jared31
Posted 19 Nov 2012 10:35
Very hot and arousing story, thanks Jessica!
Paula19
Posted 15 Nov 2012 22:21
Fabulous story, very sexy hot. I loved every turn.
ChadJ
Posted 01 Nov 2012 17:07
I thoroughly enjoyed your story Ms. Jessica.
sceneme2006
Posted 29 Oct 2012 15:16
Awesome story. Love the way you play.
Trace
Posted 25 Oct 2012 07:25
Excellent
Ashleyjo
Posted 25 Oct 2012 07:19
Whoa, what a fabulous ride and I mean that in several ways. ;-)
Talentedtongue
Posted 25 Oct 2012 06:58
Didn't pull me in like Brooke, but not bad.
Brooke
Posted 24 Oct 2012 21:50
This story really pulled me in. Very well written and love the characters.
Teri
Posted 24 Oct 2012 06:47
I thoroughly enjoyed this excellent story. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.
Sally4172
Posted 23 Oct 2012 21:45
Outstanding intro into BDSM. I loved every word and all the characters, especially Mrs. Butterworth!
subside
Posted 23 Oct 2012 09:26
Excellent story. I was excited throughout. An area of play that I enjoy. Well written and very erotic!Highest score!
Rocy
Posted 23 Oct 2012 07:39
Great story, loved every sexy sexy word. I love the characters. "5" every day.
Ginnifer
Posted 22 Oct 2012 21:54
Well worth the wait. I loved this chapter even more, wish I could score it a six.
GeorgeD
Posted 21 Oct 2012 22:23
Excellent, I can't wait for part three.
Tk87
Posted 21 Oct 2012 17:16
Wow, Fantastic! Every bit a five or more!
Fredafucks
Posted 21 Oct 2012 08:52
Kudos to you indeed.
Iamtempted
Posted 20 Oct 2012 08:20
Jenny is a great character.
KayleeMN
Posted 19 Oct 2012 07:00
Well written and sexy, I wish I had your talent and imagination.
April84
Posted 18 Oct 2012 22:57
Very hot story. I love the characters. 5+
Perfectbodyforsex
Posted 18 Oct 2012 22:55
Jenny is quite devious isn't she.
KOJA
Posted 14 Oct 2012 18:40
YOU SHOULD KNOW MY FANTASIES!
Hotabs
Posted 13 Oct 2012 00:12
Naughty sisters is a good theme.
Betz
Posted 12 Oct 2012 00:02
Absolutely delicious, when will we see part three?
AshleyX
Posted 10 Oct 2012 22:11
Great story, I loved it. 5++
Tammy84
Posted 07 Oct 2012 05:43
Kudos to you, excellent story.
KathyT
Posted 01 Oct 2012 21:49
Absolutely thrilling and very sexy.
chr1890191
Posted 26 Sep 2012 08:57
wonderful, sexy story....got me hard immediately! Thanks. Chris
Thomas198915
Posted 26 Sep 2012 05:37
Good story
assassin
Posted 25 Sep 2012 22:25
Remarkable story, deserving 5+++
Fishfly
Posted 25 Sep 2012 14:27
Very hot story and definitely a big 5-0!
Jon1987
Posted 25 Sep 2012 14:10
Excellent
Turtledove
Posted 24 Sep 2012 04:33
I loved the combination. Flows so well, a most definite 5.
Happyx
Posted 23 Sep 2012 21:38
Terrific story, very descriptive, and I can't wait for more.
Ritae
Posted 22 Sep 2012 22:44
I really enjoyed this story ;-)
JulieW
Posted 21 Sep 2012 06:09
Eagerly awaiting part three.
SandraDeeisHorny
Posted 21 Sep 2012 02:37
Pretty good story.
MiniApple
Posted 19 Sep 2012 23:54
You made me very very wet. Is this what you wanted Jessica?
Pammy
Posted 18 Sep 2012 05:13
Excellent and well written story.
wellsuited
Posted 17 Sep 2012 22:13
Well done Jessica.
Mysterio
Posted 16 Sep 2012 22:04
Enjoyable adventure of a very naughty sister.
MissX
Posted 16 Sep 2012 13:55
I really enjoyed this awesome story, well done Jessica.
Shoes
Posted 16 Sep 2012 08:02
5
Tom88
Posted 15 Sep 2012 22:32
Incredible, awesome, and very arousing.
ChristyJ
Posted 15 Sep 2012 07:32
Super sexy story, very hot, and a big 5
Mirra
Posted 14 Sep 2012 23:21
Excellent
TJL
Posted 14 Sep 2012 21:02
Absolutely awesome story, looking for part 3, wish I could give you a higher score than a five.
Michonne
Posted 14 Sep 2012 16:18
Sharply written and very erotic.
Jamie200
Posted 14 Sep 2012 07:12
Well written, enjoyable bit of sisterly BDSM.
MataHari
Posted 13 Sep 2012 21:51
Very lovely story thanks for sharing.
Milady
Posted 13 Sep 2012 21:31
Very good intro into bdsm, very sweet and sexy
LordHaHa
Posted 13 Sep 2012 16:20
Excellent story my dear.
steve6ft2atyahoo
Posted 11 Sep 2012 18:05
So HOT!!! I Loved it wish I had a sister like her!!!
Shelby
Posted 11 Sep 2012 07:23
Adored this one
msX
Posted 11 Sep 2012 03:36
Fabulous story
BarryY
Posted 10 Sep 2012 22:27
Excellent
AWeiner
Posted 10 Sep 2012 21:31
Wonderful story Jessica, congratulations on the series.
MustangGT
Posted 10 Sep 2012 15:59
Go Jessica go! This was awesome!!
goofygirl
Posted 10 Sep 2012 15:13
Very hot--loved it. 5 all the way
spygirl
Posted 10 Sep 2012 13:25
What a rush! The beginning of a real adventure. Can't wait for more.
Bad
Posted 10 Sep 2012 06:55
Oh wow that was really hot. I can't wait to read what happens next.
alush
Posted 10 Sep 2012 06:09
Excellent story of sisterly domination over her brother, keep up the good work Ms. Jessica
vamp
Posted 09 Sep 2012 21:56
Very sexy story, bravo!
SwingerCouple
Posted 09 Sep 2012 06:39
Beautiful story, please continue. We loved it! Top score all the way.
Campergirl
Posted 08 Sep 2012 21:39
Brilliant piece of writing.
Ross
Posted 08 Sep 2012 06:29
Congratulations on beginning this series. I really appreciate how they can stand alone as individual stories too. Well done you talented lady.
anaughtymommy
Posted 07 Sep 2012 22:56
Super hot story filled with some nice things, 5.
dasher7470
Posted 07 Sep 2012 09:08
Great story!
asoldiergirl
Posted 07 Sep 2012 07:25
Very exciting
Annet
Posted 06 Sep 2012 22:36
I don't understand how anyone could give you less than a five like I did. Great romp.
Amygirl
Posted 06 Sep 2012 14:06
Terrific story filled with great sexual energy, bravo to you.
Jon24
Posted 06 Sep 2012 06:34
Great story of a very naughty sister. Well done Jessica.
Stargirl2012
Posted 05 Sep 2012 22:30
Love the tease, very hot, and nicely written. I hope the wait isn't to long for part 3.
LynnP
Posted 05 Sep 2012 16:16
Super story
Alita
Posted 05 Sep 2012 09:52
Loved the kinky story you have spun and also your story poster is cool, truth in advertising.
Goldie
Posted 04 Sep 2012 22:40
I really loved reading this story. You write very well.
KelseyJ
Posted 04 Sep 2012 22:33
Marvelous story idea, mixing the two genres. Great job writing it.
Gia
Posted 04 Sep 2012 09:44
Great story Jessica, well worth the wait. 5+++

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mashman
Posted 04 Sep 2012 03:22
Really terrific story and especially now on mp3 great to listen to during the niht.

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olderthandirt
Posted 04 Sep 2012 01:40
Getting hotter ....................
Garth
Posted 03 Sep 2012 22:19
This is a very well done story with great style and just the right amount of kink.
Aerin
Posted 03 Sep 2012 22:09
Kudos on a very naughty story, just the way I like them!

Buz
Posted 03 Sep 2012 20:19
Wow this is kinky Jessica! Very hot! Very well written, it's an excellent story!
Sallly
Posted 03 Sep 2012 14:49
So many little subplots going on...I love it. Great story definitely a big 5.
Arya
Posted 03 Sep 2012 07:21
Awesome
PhilAnders
Posted 02 Sep 2012 23:56
Bravo, Jessica!

Jenny is such a devious she-devil!
BabyBlueEyes23
Posted 02 Sep 2012 23:45
I love incest, I LOVE this story
Carrie22
Posted 02 Sep 2012 21:41
Wow, so very nice.
Adina
Posted 02 Sep 2012 21:33
Excellent characters and plot. I love the little sister with the upper hand over her big dumb brother, lol.
Kristin
Posted 02 Sep 2012 15:56
Sexy, erotic, fun, well developed, and well written.
kalelez_girl
Posted 02 Sep 2012 15:12
ooo this was a great story
MikeT
Posted 02 Sep 2012 12:30
Can't wait to see how you weave Jill into all this. I love the way you write and can't imagine the time you must put in to writing these for us. Thank you and don't let those low scorers get you down, they are just jealous of your talent and fans!
ElleTC
Posted 02 Sep 2012 12:13
I adored this sexy story, it was so well written. Keep these hot stories coming.
Jenny19
Posted 02 Sep 2012 06:56
This story is most definitely a great big 5!! Please give us more just like this.
Ayasha
Posted 02 Sep 2012 06:41
Love waking up or falling asleep with the naughty characters you create for us, thank you for doing this.
Alexis92
Posted 01 Sep 2012 23:51
Mrs. Butterworth as a domme, who would have ever guessed? Would love to meet the woman behind that kind of humor. What a fun read. Thank you.
BrittanyM
Posted 01 Sep 2012 23:42
Loved the gag ball, I have to find one of those. I loved the look on the brothers face when he saw it.
MontanaMike
Posted 01 Sep 2012 23:19
Loved the continuation and the poster you made, both are very well done. You are most talented.
David1980
Posted 01 Sep 2012 23:04
Damn, that was hot babe!

frogprince
Posted 01 Sep 2012 21:35
His sister is so bad, she's good. Loved the story. It is abig tease. The poor brother is dumb. He can be so molded. Keep it going include Jill into it as well.
AshleyMN
Posted 01 Sep 2012 17:55
I think I am beginning to understand this kinky little world, thank you. I would love to feel that suede flogger on my body too.
Sarah84
Posted 01 Sep 2012 17:54
Well written as usual, but not my thing at all. Couldn't identify with the story
Bethany
Posted 01 Sep 2012 17:52
Oh wow! This is a fantastic story, I absolutely loved it! Can't wait for further adventures.
 

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