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Summer Love Part 1

SUMMER LOVE PART 1

(this is my first attempt at a story... tell me what you think please and be honest)

I walk past him, giggling to myself. This isn’t the first time while we were at the beach I had walked past him in what our dad called my underwear. I was wearing my favourite, skimpy red bikini that covered almost nothing. My brother Will smiled in appreciation at my almost naked body.

Let me introduce myself. My name is Katalina... my friends call me Kat. I was 18 when this happened. My brother Will was 16. I know what we did is classed as wrong but we are in love, you can’t help who you fall for.

As I was saying, it was summer and we were at the beach. Normally I’m all covered up but I was feeling daring and was finally happy with how I looked this summer. I walked into the ocean and watched as Will followed me. I knew he was up to something. I was stood waist deep in the water by the time he reached me. He stood behind me, pressing his rock hard 11” cock into my ass and I smiled. I knew I had won. He wrapped his arms around my waist and slipped his hand inside my bikini bottoms, slowly teasing my pussy with his fingers. I leaned against him for a little support as he played with my clit with his thumb while he slid two fingers in and out of my pussy. After a while I turn to face him, he slides my bikini bottoms off and dives under the water. As he gently pushes my legs open I gasp, realising what he is about to do. As he sticks his tongue into my pussy I moan. He comes back up for air and starts pulling me towards the beach and towards our hotel.

Since our parents didn’t want to pay for three rooms we are sharing a room with two single beds. Will pushes them together and pushes me onto the bed and starts to lick my pussy again... I moan his name, forgetting that he is my brother. I pull away from his tongue and smile, moving towards him as he pulls off his shorts. I gasp as I see all 11” of him standing proud to attention. I take as much of his cock into my mouth as I possibly can, I manage about 5” sucking, licking and teasing. “Suck me sis” will whispers “make me cum” as he is about to cum I stop and make him lay on the bed.

I take off my bikini top smiling at him as I do. Then I slowly start running my hands over my body as he watches me. Playing with my nipples, my clit and fingering my pussy. In the end Will cant take much more and he comes over to me, spreads my legs and pushes his cock deep into my pussy, pounding as hard as possible as he fucks me over and over in several positions, against the wall, bent over the bed doggy style, on hands and knees doggy style, up the ass, in my mouth... Cumming over and over and bringing me to orgasm more times than any other man ever has before. After several hours we are laying in 'our' bed, falling asleep as he kisses me softly but passionately, gently caressing my body as our lingering kisses come to a sudden stop. Will whispers he loves me as I fall asleep in his arms, knowing that I can’t hear him

TO BE CONTINUED.........
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Comments(15)

katalina
Posted 17 Aug 2011 06:35
hey all... sorry i havent been around much lately. mega busy being a mom. hope you all forgive me and as soon as i get chance i will write more for you and even do the backing story as to how all this came about
K1NGMAA
Posted 12 Apr 2011 17:42
Whoa! Slow down. Good ideas and great potential, but way too pacey.
irornman
Posted 12 Apr 2011 11:08
a good start and keep it up you are doing great.
dirtyoldguy
Posted 12 Apr 2011 09:29
Really liked your first effort, would have been better if it was longer.
grassmanross
Posted 12 Apr 2011 07:54
Good start Kat. Love to hear more, and soon.
katalina
Posted 12 Apr 2011 07:21
lonelyand57 if you read previous comments you will see why there is no background
lonelyand57
Posted 12 Apr 2011 07:17
a bit rushed..back ground would have helped.. maybe re write it from when the sister and brother first developed feelings for one another..
katalina
Posted 12 Apr 2011 06:31
this is based on my feelings for my best friends brother. they have an incestuous relationship so all i have done is taken her story about them and put me in her place
Harleyman
Posted 12 Apr 2011 06:28
Nice Start...would love to read more. How did this all start?
katalina
Posted 12 Apr 2011 05:13
to be fair i did write it while horny at 4 in the morning. so much was going through my mind i had to find some way to get a release
XplosiV
Posted 12 Apr 2011 05:09
A good effort, as said, maybe a bit quick. Take your time with it, and add more detail, I'm sure you will progress to be a great writer.
chreese1
Posted 12 Apr 2011 05:04
Great first time, you have the makings of a great writer. Please keep up the good work and am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
davie
Posted 12 Apr 2011 04:55
For a first story it was good if a little short.Some more detail would be good. However, it did give me a hardon.
katalina
Posted 12 Apr 2011 04:42
thanks for the advice... the next one is oing to be slower
harrylime
Posted 12 Apr 2011 04:12
I loved your first story. My suggestion is to slow down. The action is frenzied....kind of like uncontrollable sex when You cant stop until it is all over and you have spilled all your juices. Stroke your words....make them tantalize and torment and hold the reader immobile as the orgasm racks their body.
 

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