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The Bikini Bash (Part I)

Sister and her friends enter a crazy party and decide to have a little after-party of their own.
Hey guys this is my first story so please go easy on me. Let me know where to improve and please follow me, because I want to constantly keep putting out more and more erotica stories like this one.

I had just moved to United States from Australia, with my brother and my father. My mother stayed back after the divorce with my father. My father is constantly working, and he's almost never at home.

This gave me a lot of alone time with my brother, and we both really had a very good relationship as brothers and sisters. After my first day at my new college, I instantly became very popular, and I already got asked out twice, I said yes to both, because I thought they weren't going to make our relationship exclusive. But they thought that I was double dating and cheating on them. I instantly got branded as a slut. No body wanted to talk to me.

"Kate", shouted Jade, the most popular girl in school.

I looked back and saw her running towards me. "Hey, thank god I caught you here. I just wanted to ask you if you and Ryan are free tonight, we're having a party at my place, and I just thought I should invite you.

"That sounds great, I'll be there, what kind of party is it?"

"It's a pool party, so make sure you get your bikini on." she said while giggling

"That's perfect, I just got a new bikini and it looks great, I'll get Ryan to come too."

"I promise, we'll have so much fun!"

"All right, see you then" I smiled, feeling good about myself. Little did I know how much fun we really were going to have that night.

The rest of the day went by pretty fast with nothing exciting happening. I got onto the bus from school and got back home.

"Ryan!", I shouted to let him know I was home. There was no response. I went up to his room to find his door half closed and him lying on his bed, with a hard on and porn on his TV.

"Oh my god, Ryan what are you doing", just as I said those words he shot a whole load of cum into the air, while subsequently turning towards the door and getting some of his cum on me too.

I noticed his penis, and by god, it was so much better than I had imagined. It was perfectly "banana" shaped with a perfect mushroom like head and his shaft being at least 6 and a half inches long. His cum had splattered on my nose a bit and it was dripping down to my lip and I instinctively licked some. It tasted so good and sweet.

Then I realised that he was still looking at me while I was looking at his shaft while licking some of his cum. "Ryan what in the world are you doing, can you keep your door shut the next time"

Ryan hurriedly tried to put on some pants that were lying but really failed because his shaft was erect and was pointing towards me like an arrow.

"I am so sorry, I didn't think you were going to be back home so quickly" He looked very embarrassed. "It's just that I broke up with Amanda, and I needed to blow of some steam"

"It's okay, you have nothing to be embarrassed about anyways, thats a very impressive size you have there, which reminds me, Jade invited us to a pool party at her place today, you want to come?

"I really don't think this is the best time to ask questions, but yeah sure, lets leave around 9:30?"

"All right, and for goodness sakes put some pants on and come haha"

"Good one hahah"

I shut his door and let him finish off his business and went to my room. I was feeling very icky, so I went into the hot tub for a hot shower. I knew it was wrong, but I could't stop thinking about my brother's long dick. I made it a little more steamier, and got removed my clothes and got into the tub. My hand instinctively started massaging my breasts. I shut my eyes and pictured my brother in so many sexual scenarios. My hand slowly crept down to my sweet little pussy and started massaging it. I imagined my brothers cock inside of me and how sexy and kinky it would be, and with that I started fingering myself. I continued this for about another 20 minutes after which I could take no more and screamed out in pleasure as I climaxed.

I got out of the tub, put on my red and white striped bikini, on which I wore some torn jeans and went out to call my brother.

To my surprise, he was right outside my door with one eyebrow arched.

"What was that noise? Why did you scream?"

"Oh umm.. I thought there was a spider on my breast so I screamed out, turns out it was just my imagination"

As I said that, his eyes immediately fell towards my breasts which were barely covered by my sexy little bikini top.

"So, uhm, we should get going if we're going to make it to the party."

"Yeah, we should"

Both of us awkwardly got outside and got into a taxi and went to Jade's house.

TO BE CONTINUED.

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Comments(22)

psychiee
Posted 22 Mar 2013 20:59
Agood start.. well writen hope the party turns out to be HOT
Aerolimited17
Posted 29 Sep 2012 04:39
Like what you started, did search for "bikini" and your story showed up first. Please continue

jpmb
Posted 27 Sep 2012 05:54
i like it,and hope you keep up the good work
firewalker69
Posted 24 Sep 2012 20:52
Good start, lets hear more...
yesplease1
Posted 16 Sep 2012 13:30
good start. I can't wait for the next one!
CuriouslyAnonymous
Posted 09 Sep 2012 14:56
Very good start, I can't wait until the next installment comes out.
Issaquah
Posted 04 Sep 2012 22:25
Great start - you can slow down the pace with additional details. Really looking forward to your next story.
asleep
Posted 04 Sep 2012 19:14
S-l-o-w d-o-w-n when you do your proof reading ... look at each word grouping to make sure it is smooth and easy reading. I think you have the makings to be a good writer and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Rick
wjd53
Posted 04 Sep 2012 15:47
Great start, looking forward to next one
mik59
Posted 04 Sep 2012 15:23
GREAT START hop to see more
Budlee
Posted 04 Sep 2012 08:00
Off to a good start. Lots of possibilities for further adventures.
issac
Posted 03 Sep 2012 02:03
so erotic, so pleasurable... please write more...
squirrel_bignut
Posted 02 Sep 2012 22:37
good start......good introduction....i feek a good all around. cant wait for part ll.
johny5
Posted 02 Sep 2012 14:42
nice start to it i hope there is a lot more fun between the two of them
and maybe a friend can't wait for (part 2)
WhiskeyTango
Posted 02 Sep 2012 12:20
more??

Princesscrazy
Posted 02 Sep 2012 07:18
Think this is going to be fun to follow...thought you did a good job and am looking forward to more entries....
Alexis92
Posted 02 Sep 2012 00:20
Don't be discouraged, you have the makings to be a very good writer of erotica. Take heed of the advice and you will get to be a better author with more experience. Good luck.
xXKate_CameronXx
Posted 01 Sep 2012 16:54
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys and Ill be sure to work on it next story, which will come out tomorrow
thunderhawk
Posted 01 Sep 2012 15:55
It's a very good start, you might want to pay close atteention to wording and I agree with Tank about character description and Frogprince about proof reading, It's very important to the development of the story line
xXshunikaXx
Posted 01 Sep 2012 15:02
It's average. You need to add a lot more description, and more background detail. Basically more development. I'll be sure to read the next one!
Tank134
Posted 01 Sep 2012 13:55
good introduction. a little more description of the characters would be good. very good for a first time

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frogprince
Posted 01 Sep 2012 13:41
Good first time. I liked the story setting the stage for what is to come. You set it up and pulled us in. One thing you need to do is proofread better. There were a few spots that made me stop and figure out what was going on. Keep up the goos stuff and I will follow you anywhere.
 

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