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Jamie (Part II)

My first attempt at a story for public consumption
I have written a few “stories” for friends, based largely on fact with a judicial slice of fantasy thrown in to add spice to the tale. I have never published these for a critical public, so I hope this does not fall too flat for a first attempt. Why I have written part two before part one? I don’t know. Call it author’s prerogative.

We had been friends for some time, Jamie and me. We shared dreams and fears and celebrations; we shared ideas and fantasies and bodies. Yes, we were lovers, yet in some weird twist of circumstance, we were not an “item” in that we had never dated as a couple. That’s not to say we didn’t go out together, we simply hadn’t made an issue of “going out” together.

To me, Jamie is beautiful. Not in the classic sense I suppose, but there is a beauty which transcends classic, good looks. She is blonde, of medium height and weight I suppose, and with a dusting of freckles across her nose and cheeks. Her azure blue eyes twinkle and sparkle, but when angered, become dark bottomless pits. Like me, she has small breasts, topped by the most delightful pink raisin-like nipples. She rarely encases her breasts in the restrictions of a bra commenting “who needs body armour for these little sweeties?”

She is one of those rare creatures equally happy in clothes, or not at all. One was as likely to find her walking around the house nude, as fully dressed in heels and a cocktail dress. Jamie is entirely comfortable in her body and in her space on this planet. Some find this quite threatening, and others find it enchanting. Clearly, I fall into the latter category

It was a Saturday afternoon. We had been to lunch at a local pub, where yes, we had had too much wine I suppose, but it was a gorgeous summer day and friends fun and good conversation were abundant. We were flirting, teasing each other and those around us. Neither of us is ashamed of our sexuality, but nor are we “out there”. Our close friends know and accept us as we are, and those who are not close, well who cares what they think?

I was wearing a flowing summer dress (mum would have tut-tutted that in the sunlight one could see my panties through it) and white straw hat and sandals. Jamie was wearing shorts and halter top and inevitably, no bra. This attracted all sorts of rather uncouth comments from some of the guys, and a few stares from some of the girls. We were sitting at an outside table, when I looked up and caught Jamie looking intently at me. Then I felt her bare foot rubbing up my leg, pushing my knees apart, and exploring my inner thighs.

Whilst I am not into public display, I am enormously turned on by such provocative acts knowing that at any time we could be “caught”. I lose resistance and so involuntarily opened my legs to receiver her. The wine, the warm sun, the friends and laughter all contributed to my brazen acceptance of her. It wasn’t long until the progressing from mild tingling to wet panties had gone beyond my capacity to disguise my feelings.

Jamie delighted in teasing me in this way. She was not immune to the effect she was having on me, as I could hear how here breathing had changed, and she got a distant look in her eyes. More than once, somebody in the conversation had to nudge her, bring her back to earth. The point was rapidly approaching where I knew that I was not going to prevent my on-coming ecstasy from being noticed. Jamie was merciless, alternately rubbing lightly and pushing her toes between my now swollen and eager folds. Somehow, she had managed to push my panties to one side (God girl, such dexterity with only your toes), and now I was fucking her foot.

Jill sitting next to me became aware and whispered “Sarah, stop it. I know what you are doing”. I mumbled incoherently and took her hand in mine, squeezing it for all I was worth, as Jamie took me to silent ecstasy, took me up beyond the clouds and the rain. When I returned, Jill leaned in and kissed me lightly on the cheek whispering “can we do coffee in the week?” Then she got up and headed to the ladies rest room.

Jamie came and sat alongside me as if nothing had happened. I knew however that she was now unstoppable, but also, that she loved to prolong the moment. Her real pleasure was and is in seeing me as she had, spent, flushed, excited and pretending all was normal. We re-joined the conversation and the fun until Jamie told me she needed to “go to the ladies”.

We were in deep conversation so I followed and stood at the door of her little stall to continue the conversation. She sat, and opened her legs ever so slightly, one hand on her knee, the other on the wall as if bracing herself. I was transfixed; whilst I had often watched her pee I had never "seen" her. I watched her red and swollen labia twitch, and then a little trickle of nectar...... and then a gentle stream sort of splashing her upper thighs before splashing into the water below.

I have no idea what got into me or why I did it, but I went to her and put my hand between her legs into her stream and then started to finger her. She looked at me with amazing serenity, eyes open, staring into mine. At first her stream stuttered, and then continued as she fucked my fingers. I say she fucked my fingers, because her hips thrust onto my hand, which was trapped between her legs against the front of the toilet bowl. Within what seemed like seconds (realistically it must have been longer), she started to moan, her eyes rolled back, and she reached delicious ecstasy. I never saw anybody cum so hard or so fast. When she had stopped, I took my 2 middle fingers from her and sucked them clean.

Before she could get up I lifted my dress over my head and sat straddling her, facing her. My breasts were in line with her face. We kissed and I told her how beautiful she is; how much I loved being with her. We looked into each other’s eyes, and she nodded imperceptibly. How did she do this? How did she know the rude and forbidden thoughts that were going through my mind? She opened her legs a little, and I started to pee. In all this time not a word had been spoken between us. I felt my pee against her tummy – warm and scented and intimate, her pubic hair wet and tickling my pussy. I heard the tinkle of it into the water below where it mixed with her own.

When I had finished, I simply sat there staring at her beautiful face, serene, loving and somehow lost in thought. Was she contemplating the dirtiness of my body waste or simply reflecting on the intimacy of a spontaneous expression of something entirely new and untested; something shared between lovers? We immediately left and went home where we showered and then lay together in bed relishing each other's body warmth and sensuality. We never really talked about what happened, but my eyes had been opened to something new and exciting; a new dimension to sexual experience. Her pee in some way had become an extension, a new and extremely intimate dimension to what we shared.

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Posted 22 Feb 2014 08:00
Babe you have such talent! This one really open up and allows women to see there is more about sex than just sex, you make it sound more intment and beautiful. 5 all the way xx
Posted 18 Nov 2013 13:31
As per chapter 1, an excellent piece of work

Posted 06 Oct 2013 11:15
Delicious! I love the emotion-charged descriptions mixed with the outright naughtiness, and it's hard not lick one's lips in the hope to taste a bit of the essence of the story after reading it
Posted 08 May 2013 20:49
Oh my Sarah! That was fabulous!
Posted 05 Sep 2012 20:20
very very good. This ones my favorite.
Posted 19 Aug 2012 08:08
What a delightfully written tale. Loved all of it, expecially the pee; so hot. No pun intended! Many more please.

P x
Posted 16 Aug 2012 01:23
That is quite stunning! It is hard to define the difference between erotica and simple, coarse porn but you have walked the line and not stepped across it - fantastic, thank you
Posted 03 Aug 2012 07:16
oh hun, your writing style is excellent and unique...just love to read it....
Posted 25 Jul 2012 15:51
Wow , great story
Posted 25 Jul 2012 09:20
Was a great story, I enjoyed it. The pee isn't something I'm into but like it was mentioned in another comment you made it acceptable, I'm looking forward to see how far you take this, as well as seeing what other stories you have up your sleeve. Great job, 5 all the way x
Posted 20 Jul 2012 23:44
Not really my cup of tea.
Posted 14 Jul 2012 18:27
wow nice first story,you have a talent for writing
Posted 14 Jul 2012 07:50
very, very sexy.....I could not help but touch myself while I read it.
Posted 13 Jul 2012 23:00
Great so sensual and exciting mmmmmmmmmmmmm write more
Posted 09 Jul 2012 18:48
very erotic. loved it.
Posted 09 Jul 2012 16:06
Sarah, this was very well written. the description and movement of the story had great pacing. Loved it. An enlightening story of a new experience.
Posted 08 Jul 2012 17:01
Wonderful job! So glad you shared with everyone. Loved it and I'm really looking forward to more.

H x
Posted 08 Jul 2012 01:57
Sensual, sweet and take your pace, I like the way you make your story flow. Great story and totally worth a 5.
Posted 07 Jul 2012 20:45
I am humbled by the generous comments from you all. Thank you
Posted 07 Jul 2012 16:55
You have a unique and very enjoyable style of writing. Your subject matter was presented perfectly. It was a turn on and I look to read mre from a very talented girl
Posted 07 Jul 2012 13:58
A really nicely written tale of love and lust. Enjoy sharing your words with Lush coz it looks like we will if you do!

Posted 07 Jul 2012 13:06
A wonderfully written erotic story! I love the calmness that you bring to your story, which somehow makes it even more erotic. When the peeing came it was so natural. Truly beautiful writing

Danielle xxx
Posted 07 Jul 2012 09:09
loved loved the way you described jamie...beautiful
Posted 07 Jul 2012 06:38
How deliciously sensual...

Posted 07 Jul 2012 03:33
This is an excellant story !! I love pee stories and the eroticsm of your story was just fantastic !! You are no more a hidden talent, I can hardly wait for the next installment !!!

Posted 07 Jul 2012 01:59
You can imagine how much of a turn-on I found this story! Hit so many spots for me! You have a sweet natural style that I enjoy reading.

Posted 06 Jul 2012 23:04
Now longer a hidden treasure, all of the lushworld will now discover you. Very impressive first story.
Posted 06 Jul 2012 23:00
Congratulations on your first lush story. I wish I had been able to watch.
Posted 06 Jul 2012 21:57
You opened up a new dimension of girly sex. 5
Posted 06 Jul 2012 21:45
Eh, very well written..
Posted 06 Jul 2012 20:49
A great job. I am not a big fan of pee but you made it acceptable and in fact quite erotic. You have a great writing style. It is nice to read a story which is well written. Keep writing.
Posted 06 Jul 2012 20:28
Very good hon.

Posted 06 Jul 2012 19:47
You did a good job!

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