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101 Words: Missing You
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sweet_as_candy

101 Words: Missing You

Fading promises,

A dying rose,

Clouded silhouettes’,

Of grieving woes.

Distant memories.

Love and laughter.

Sorrow drowning,

Of ever after.

Passionate skins,

An addictive heat,

A wanting heart.

A darkened beat.

The touch of silk,

Frayed and rough,

Unfilled arms,

So raw and tough.

The scent of you,

So close to me,

The empty space,

Of love so free.

Silence deafening,

Once lust-fuelled words,

The empty sound

Of the humming birds.

Their song to share,

To fuel our love,

Your presence is here,

An angel above.

Whispered smiles,

And watchful eyes,

Bathes around,

From cotton skies.

Gone

But

Never

Forgotten.
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Comments(14)


Buz
Posted 08 Jul 2013 19:52
Gorgeous writing, this is really excellent!

Milik_Redman
Posted 01 Jul 2013 23:14
I really enjoyed this one. Very well done
HK4167
Posted 01 Jul 2013 21:56
It's so beautifully written and the emotion is so intense...well done.
cumonmesweetpuss
Posted 01 Jul 2013 17:56
you know i love every thing you do
well done sweet candy

Tashtego
Posted 01 Jul 2013 16:59
Beautifully composed and understated, yet so strong emotionally.

ShyVixen
Posted 01 Jul 2013 16:59
Emotional and powerful. Beautifully done.

Saga
Posted 01 Jul 2013 15:34
Oh sweets, this is hauntingly beautiful and sad...
Alphamagus
Posted 01 Jul 2013 10:34
This was just gobsmackingly beautiful. Wow. Xxx

tarnishedknight
Posted 01 Jul 2013 04:26
Very beautiful... emotional... longing... sad. So much in so few of words.
nazhinaz
Posted 01 Jul 2013 03:24
What a beauty. 5

Naughtygrl73
Posted 01 Jul 2013 02:51
so sweet and touching, it shows just how versatile a writer you are that you can express so much in only so few words
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 01 Jul 2013 01:44
so lovely but how sad. wonderfully done!

SydneySider
Posted 01 Jul 2013 01:16
Another brilliant passage. Raw, emotional, beautiful...as always

Liz
Posted 01 Jul 2013 01:10
Beautiful. How much emotion and feeling can you express in 101 words? This much. Well done!
 

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