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A Biting Desire

So Bite Me
We shared something, you and I...
The love of the feel of teeth on skin,
That and our love of each other,
A burning fire,
A sting,
A mark.

The bite, such a pure pain,
So filled with my desire for you and you for I,
The mark, a symbol of it,
There for sometimes the world,
Sometimes just us,
Secret things.

But you've gone,
You've taken your teeth with you,
Taken your passion,
Your love,
Your pain,
Your pride,
Your body, your mind and your soul
And left me with just me,
Just my teeth,
Just my passion, love, pain, pride, body, mind and soul.

Now I have nothing but the fading marks you've left on me.
Not that you can see them, because they're here in my heart,
And here in my head.

Please come back.
Please bite me once more.

Thank you to CuriousKitty for ckecking it for me
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Comments(11)

_Crystal_
Posted 27 Mar 2013 19:28
mysticlover
Posted 30 Nov 2012 18:51
liked the passion expressed here
SecretDesire
Posted 19 Jul 2012 22:57
Excellent writing! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing 5+++

ShyVixen
Posted 18 Jul 2012 13:00
"Now I have nothing but the fading marks you left on me."
Beautiful and painfull, I could feel the emotion. Well done.

playsit
Posted 18 Jul 2012 06:50
Marks left in your heart and head hurt the worst... well stated.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 17 Jul 2012 20:57
lovely....
HK4167
Posted 17 Jul 2012 20:32
Raw and intense emotions beautifully written in this poem. Nicely done.
etairay
Posted 17 Jul 2012 16:38
wow thank you love it ..deep raw & honest ..beautiful

Saga
Posted 17 Jul 2012 03:33
Love it!!!
nazhinaz
Posted 16 Jul 2012 22:15
Lovely desire and beautiful poem too. 5
sweetvictory
Posted 16 Jul 2012 15:54
hits close to home, love it.
 

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