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A Pantoum Poem
It all started with a glance from across the room,
A gentle smile and pink blush of my cheek.
Your smile widens when you smell my perfume.
We make our way to the stairway - to speak.

A gentle smile and pink blush of my cheek,
My heart rate increases as you approach.
We make our way to the stairway - to speak,
I down a glass of wine meant for a toast.

My heart rate increases as you approach.
Whispers are required as we eliminate space.
I down another glass of wine meant for a toast.
Its agreed to go straight to your place.

Whispers are required as we eliminate space.
Our bodies align perfectly, it feels so right.
It's agreed to go straight to your place.
I’m usually apprehensive but not tonight!

Our bodies align perfectly, it feels so right..
The cab arrives, its only a 10 minute ride.
I’m usually apprehensive but not tonight!
No, tonight I have a personal sensual guide.

The cab arrives, its only a 10 minute ride,
Your hands replace mine, high on my thigh.
No, tonight I have a personal sensual guide.
I playfully suck your bottom lip and sigh.

Your hands replace mine, high on my thigh,
Somehow you know just how to touch.
I playfully suck your bottom lip and sigh,
Waves of satisfaction - moaning and such.

Somehow you know just how to touch,
The world stops and the heavens begin.
Waves of satisfaction - moaning and such,
Passion so intense, it simply had to be sin.

The world stops and heaven begins,
Your smile widens as you smell my perfume.
Passion so intense, it simply had to be sin...
It all started with a glance from across the room
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Comments(21)

lightheart
Posted 13 Jan 2012 23:28
"Passion: There are some things in life that catch your eye, and then, there are those that capture your heart. Pursue those."
Ianthomas
Posted 15 Dec 2011 15:13
clever stuff and nicely done!
nazhinaz
Posted 11 Nov 2011 21:58
"Passion so intense, it had to be sin" Great. What a beautiful descriptive of sin you gave. Love that. 5++
beinggood
Posted 10 Sep 2011 10:25
lovely my friend
Espresso
Posted 12 Mar 2011 20:00
Sensual, sexy....loved it.
kinkygirl
Posted 11 Feb 2011 16:16
very great start
2706ali
Posted 28 Jan 2011 05:36
sincere,tempting.sensual......like eating a chocolate ecclair....when its finished you want more !!!!
lovely_lady
Posted 27 Jan 2011 00:09
Great Poem Really loved it

AngelHeart01
Posted 23 Jan 2011 17:26
Love how you keep it simple, yet passionate. THE BEST KIND.

Sandrine
Posted 23 Jan 2011 05:15
Very beautiful!!!! Great work!
TonyT
Posted 20 Jan 2011 22:36
Passion .... is very very very important
Iszofia
Posted 20 Jan 2011 19:16
I learnt something new today.. what a pantoum poem is.. on a sex site too LOL. It was great writing, imagery and repetition. Well Done!!
SatinBatty
Posted 20 Jan 2011 15:04
very nicely done
ParMach
Posted 20 Jan 2011 14:24
Go girl what a great start I know there is more to come.
Buddybear
Posted 20 Jan 2011 09:59
Excellent! Good rhyming scheme, good rhythm! The repetition is novel and works wonders, creates intense visual transitions. Hurray, pantoum! Way to go!
dantheman69
Posted 20 Jan 2011 09:51
mmm very erotic i love it!
stuart1975
Posted 20 Jan 2011 09:20
great poem, wish I had that kind of talent for poetry

ByronLord
Posted 20 Jan 2011 07:51
The pantoum form is perfectly suited to the subject matter.
ddubya
Posted 20 Jan 2011 04:52
Excellent

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DirtyMartini
Posted 20 Jan 2011 03:06
Wow, a genuine pontoon poem...I had heard of a pontoon boat before, but never a poem...nice poem btw, but I kept losing my place thinking I read this before...let's see, one type of poem down, 49 more to go by my count...I bet you have the only pontoon poem on Lush...
magnificent1rascal
Posted 20 Jan 2011 00:02
Very well done indeed!
 

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