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A Hand On Pleasure

The pleasurable things I do with my hands.

I hold in my fist,
My girlfriends’ wrists,
As I trap her beneath my weight

Her tit in my mouth,
My other hand travels south,
Directing my dick to its fate


My guitar in one hand,
I give a nod to my band,
Then I go to town on the strings

With a touch that’s just right,
Sweet melody fills the night,
And I love the high that sound brings


Now I’ve got in my grip,
My raging hard dick,
Cause I need to unload before bed

I stroke till I blow,
But I want you to know,
I ache to touch you instead

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ArtAngel
Posted 18 Jul 2011 20:09
I'd say you did a good job here..just needs a 'lil more expression on your feelings for her I think..makes why you're doing this right now a bit easier for us to feel your story and relate to you as a writer
techgoddess
Posted 19 Jan 2009 08:06
Interesting...you have some content there that could work, it's just a little choppy in the delivery. I did like the last stanza very much. It was the best part of the poem in my opinion.
Oberon
Posted 13 Jan 2009 18:20
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