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A Poetic Tale: The Beautiful Musician

Soothing sounds of her playing her guitar led meto her

Entering her home, her inner sanctum

She glared angrily, wondering why and how I made it to her

It was the last time I'd see her and we both knew...

So I craved this last day to see it with her through

In her bedtime attire, she played and inspired this short poetic prize

"And I rise

In spite of my fear inside...

...Caused by those who have burned me with their lies

But there shall be no tears in my eyes

No sobs or cries...because I rise...

And I rise"

I wrote in a small black book...

From in which my dreams lay and from it my dreams I took

To my feet I rose as the light of day faded

And soon would turn sapphire shaded

I left her to allow her to get dressed

Taking the musician to a place she would've never guessed

A most serene of places...

Where the Moon is larger and the stars have faces

Into each other's eyes we glared

As the the passion between us burned and flared

Our lips lips embraceed as we kissed

But before the kiss could be finished

The beautiful musician vanished

Suddenly...I let out a howling cry

As the rays of the Sun blazes in my eye

Reality struck me me hard and so it seemed...

My day with the beautiful musician ...was dreamed.

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Catnip
Posted 07 Feb 2012 21:43
A nice poem you have there. I had a bit of trouble finding the rythm of it during my first read but getting through to the end and starting over again I sort of found it.

Me personally would have put it in a slightly different format so that it was easier to pick up the pace and shifts.

I like your rhymes. They sound good and ring nicely. I like the lyrics bit.
 

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