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A Private Party

By Invitation Only!
I went to my first private party last night

Hosted right here on the Lush site

The host is a writer like most of the guests

Whose work is outstanding and some say the best

The room had a bar with bright neon lights

With shades of purples, reds and whites

We were laughing and chatting just having a ball

Smoking, drinking and dancing, we did it all

The music he played last night there was stellar

And his date for the night, well let’s just say, “Lucky fella”

They did an erotic dance that couldn’t get any hotter

I think it was that forbidden dance called, The Lambada

Their grinding and swaying couldn’t get any better

And as I studied them, I felt even wetter

When she arched her back and he leaned in for more

There were gasps and moans and orgasms galore

On that note I left, with a smile on my face

Omg! Holy shit! I want more of this place

Now that the party is over and once is never enough

Please send all future invitations to me, Hotstuff!

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Banes1
Posted 18 Mar 2013 16:57
Another great poem Joan.

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frogprince
Posted 27 Sep 2012 17:36
What a wonderful piece of whimsy. You have lovely way with words. You assist us in seeing through the haze. Here you made us view what we may have missed. I loved it.

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racking
Posted 02 Sep 2012 02:21
So this is what goes on at the corner of the bar... I'll have to pay more attention! Love it hunni 5
ramrod32784
Posted 22 Aug 2012 05:53
invite me as well lol good work
Isca
Posted 09 Aug 2012 09:39
I enjoyed your poem Joan....could just feel the atmosphere.
velvety
Posted 06 Aug 2012 09:14
Well written poem...with vivid imagery you can almost visualize the party and very entertaining too.
curious3045
Posted 01 Aug 2012 18:14
Enjoyable, not normally a poetry reader, but this was good.
Gramps
Posted 26 Jul 2012 06:59
wonderful how "Hots" can always put her thoughts into poetry; wish i had been there too

ShyVixen
Posted 25 Jul 2012 18:51
Fun and creative, the ending was classic! Well done!
playsit
Posted 25 Jul 2012 13:25
Sounds like I missed a great time. Fun poem... love your attitude.
sexymlee520
Posted 24 Jul 2012 09:46
wow very nice!! In a privet chat room now huh?? lol
etairay
Posted 23 Jul 2012 20:34
thank you love it ..fun honest & real ..beautiful
oldergentleman49
Posted 23 Jul 2012 17:11
Sounds like you had a fun time!
Makavelli
Posted 22 Jul 2012 14:22
I love the rhyme scheme, the tone, and the playfulness of your poem. As a reader, I can visualize the hot party scene! Thanks for sharing a nice poem, Joan!

midnightraider61
Posted 22 Jul 2012 11:56
OMG Joan, you think you were excited, I so so wish I could have been there with you! You made the party real for me from more than a thousand miles away. I don't drink but a good party loosens me and makes me fun like I'd put one of the best of everything away. I would have done whatever you wanted, up to and including being the designated driver ;-) I hope you tell more about all the parties you go to and that someday I can go with you!
slickman
Posted 21 Jul 2012 23:53
good to see you having fun, hot stuff! Your poetry is very wicked,I hope you got well liquored!!! Slicky

Buz
Posted 21 Jul 2012 21:25
Excellent poem. I very much enjoyed it!
bat
Posted 21 Jul 2012 18:28
Great poem... I'm so glad you had a good time It was fun!! maybe we can keep them happening ? Thank for coming
tnblue
Posted 21 Jul 2012 17:17
hey Hot stuff can you get the bouncer to let me in as well. great poem.
PhilAnders
Posted 21 Jul 2012 16:59
Joan, I think you may have been transformed into a lovely female clone of Robert Frost. This is a great piece of poetry, Roberta Frost. :-)
HK4167
Posted 21 Jul 2012 16:05
wow a fun and hot poem! I wonder what should I do to get invited to such parties, it sure sounds fun!
seemywowzza
Posted 21 Jul 2012 12:51
ahhhhhhhhh... I didn't see you there..... lol
sxaddited60
Posted 21 Jul 2012 12:21
More hot stuff from.....hotstuff. Your invite is in the mail
nazhinaz
Posted 21 Jul 2012 10:23
Hotstuff, I do want to invite you, really. 5
asleep
Posted 21 Jul 2012 10:21
You did NOT take me, therefore I'm only giving a "5" instead of my usual "10" (where I vote twice!!)

Rick
 

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