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A Top

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A Poem.
A Top

A snow covered
mountain top
resides a solitary
tree long abandoned.
 
Deep cuts that pierce
to its center
bleeding out sap,
that runs down to the snow.
 
Its needles slowly changing
from comforting green
to a dreary brown
in longing for the tree
that stood next to it.

Now, there is only a
deep frost coated hole
There is no more warmth,
 for this tree.

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Navin
Posted 15 Jun 2011 08:43
Nice metaphor. Good start. Keep writing.
icedcookies
Posted 14 Jun 2011 16:12
Please post comments because i want to get better
 

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