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Accidentally

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The words were not malicious

That is what gave them their power...

The power to bruise,

To bloody,

To maim beyond reason.

Unreasoning hurt

Delivered by accident,

By thoughtlessness,

By you.

Drowning waves deconstruct my sandcastle self

Built with care

And hope

And the rain soaked shadow of a lie believed.

Revealing the falseness of hope

That I might be enough,

Be desirable,

Be one who belongs.

But I am who I have always been.

Just me.

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Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 25 Jan 2013 16:53
can feel the pain, but as normal beautifully conveyed

spearone
Posted 21 Dec 2012 11:06
Very strong, beautiful and painful! Lovely lovely work!

Saga
Posted 22 Oct 2012 04:37
I felt every word!

beowulf69
Posted 12 Oct 2012 21:09
You are such an awesome poet!

MissyLuvsYa
Posted 11 Oct 2012 19:43
You write beautifully!!!!

PhilAnders
Posted 11 Oct 2012 01:07
Powerful and touching.

bill11
Posted 10 Oct 2012 14:12
Another wonderful poem, wish I had your skill

DLizze
Posted 10 Oct 2012 10:27
"...and the rainsoaked shadow of a lie believed.." Wow.

playsit
Posted 10 Oct 2012 09:43
"My sandcastle self built with care and hope" Love that phrase Sugah - it describes most everyone at some point in their life. Another gem from your wonderful mind.

Sisyphus
Posted 10 Oct 2012 06:04
so sad, so brave, so open and honest. I feel the ache caused by "the rain soaked shadow of a lie... destroying the sand castle of your self," the hope, but you are strong and accepting of who you are. Your painful poem is so well expressed--be who you are and don't compromise. You are lovely.

Sisyphus
Posted 10 Oct 2012 06:04
so sad, so brave, so open and honest. I feel the ache caused by "the rain soaked shadow of a lie... destroying the sand castle of your self," the hope, but you are strong and accepting of who you are. Your painful poem is so well expressed--be who you are and don't compromise. You are lovely.

Mazza
Posted 10 Oct 2012 05:33
It's beautiful, Sugah...

I feel your pain, hon, you made such a fine job of expressing it


Milik_The_Red
Posted 10 Oct 2012 04:56
Words have tremendous power to build and to destroy...Yours are words of healing and defiance. Embrace them and know that you have won through the pain

bat
Posted 09 Oct 2012 23:53
I do agree this is very powerful... well done

Weretiger
Posted 09 Oct 2012 21:45
5+

nazhinaz
Posted 09 Oct 2012 21:45
Sugah; why you construct sandcastles and destroy themself? But your words, wow. Great. 5

alexmarch
Posted 09 Oct 2012 20:42
From all the beautiful words you have written and shared, "just me" happens to be just perfect and just beautiful. Never a disappointment - always an inspiration. Always moving. Always unique. Always wanting just one more word.

Shylass
Posted 09 Oct 2012 18:45

SydneySider
Posted 09 Oct 2012 17:23
Heart felt, stunning..enough said...

Buz
Posted 09 Oct 2012 17:15
Beautifully written LauraLee, powerful words.

ShyVixen
Posted 09 Oct 2012 16:44
Struck a cord within. "That I might be enough, but I am who I have always been, just me" very powerful and painfully beautiful.

oneway
Posted 09 Oct 2012 15:57
Beautifully done. But I hope it was not personal, your voice says you are to lovely to believe that about yourself. You seem to be a poet of the old style rather than the new. I don't care for modern poetry, it seems to be prose made to look like poetry. And not good prose at that. Oneway

stephanie
Posted 09 Oct 2012 15:45
Audio this one, Beautiful.... It's very pretty....

xx SF
 

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