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Aftermath
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naughtynurse

Aftermath

My frilly things lie scattered

A bit of lace here,

A scrap of cotton there.

The bedclothes are tangled,

A mound of insulation piled,

Sheet twisted and tugged.

Hair tumbles across your chest,

Chestnut and soft,

Knotted and wild.

The pillows are tossed,

One lies on the floor,

Another is shared.

There is a wet spot,

A towel covers,

Rough terry on bare skin.

Our breathing slows,

Hearts hammer together,

Sweat glistens.

We touch.

Laughs shared,

A moment lived.

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Comments(23)


GardenerGuy
Posted 15 Jan 2014 12:59
nice images, and I particularly like your spacing - a little all over the place, kinda like said objects

BlondeBookworm
Posted 10 Oct 2013 12:48
Beautiful
Delphi
Posted 21 Jun 2013 13:16
So glad you let this breathe.

Ruthie
Posted 20 Jun 2013 22:48
Really nice poem.

Frank_Lee
Posted 20 Jun 2013 21:55
Beautifully done! Please write more :-)

stephanie
Posted 20 Jun 2013 16:37
Quite beautiful.

(I like the way you PLACED the words,)

xx SF
fifthrow
Posted 20 Jun 2013 15:26
loved it

Saga
Posted 20 Jun 2013 14:54
Filled with emotion...
ramrod32784
Posted 20 Jun 2013 14:13
Excellent short yet sensual I enjoyed it very much

Naughtygrl73
Posted 20 Jun 2013 13:54
You've created a very vivid image with a such few words. Excellent
WayneGibbous
Posted 20 Jun 2013 13:25
Excellent!

Buz
Posted 05 Jun 2013 18:56
Beautifully written!
ArtMan
Posted 05 Jun 2013 17:43
Excellent!!!
Ardentmale
Posted 05 Jun 2013 07:55
Love that "High"... excellent work!

Jayne33
Posted 05 Jun 2013 03:35
Brilliant. Great Writing

Liz
Posted 05 Jun 2013 01:30
Beautifully done
VirginalViet
Posted 05 Jun 2013 00:18
Oh I LOVE frilly things. Hehe I'm a girl after all. I'm just following Rachel again to find the good stuff on here.
nazhinaz
Posted 04 Jun 2013 23:19
"A moment lived". WOW. Great. 5
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 04 Jun 2013 22:52
a lovely moment...
Issaquah
Posted 04 Jun 2013 22:15
Very nicely written. Loved it.
sprite
Posted 04 Jun 2013 21:28
this is quite beautiful in it's simplicity.

Milik_Redman
Posted 04 Jun 2013 21:23
Vivid in it's subtly. Very beautiful in it's verse. Well done.

Californiaman
Posted 04 Jun 2013 20:58
Wonderful!
 

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