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All Right

All Right

You should know that my heart is all right.
It would be nothing less than a lie
to deny that I am missing you.
But my heart is all right.

You are so far from me.
Yet your very essence is ever present.
Still, my heart is all right.

Flashes of you consume
the empty spaces between my thoughts.
Nevertheless, my heart is all right.

I remember…

Your spirit painted me daily with
showers of warm illumination.
Our yokes were equivalent.

Your soul serenaded my mind daily with
octaves of fresh melodic notes.
Our yokes were identical.

Your body ignited mine daily with
physical expressions of love wrapped in love.
Our yokes were the same.

A perfect complement lost…

Well, I removed the coat of my anger,
and I’m past the storm of my denial.
I worked to get my heart to the place of “all right”.

Understand that I am beyond my songs of pain,
and I am over the chasm of my depression.
I want you to know that my heart is indeed all right.

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Posted 04 Apr 2014 04:37
Very beautifully written. Express with deep emotions and feeling. Thank you.....
Posted 29 Mar 2014 20:07
What a beautifully written piece of literature. I really mean that. Keep writing, it's therapeutic.... very loving & sensual.
Posted 20 Mar 2014 07:04
Thank you for sharing to the invisible stage of the net - Most who read this will contemplate and then know just how well you placed these words together if they have any feeling at all.
A truly OMG experience when one reviews in their mind.
Posted 03 Mar 2014 10:31
Painful situation so eloquently described Hope all is better now Great poem...
Posted 26 Feb 2014 13:13
Alot to be said about being "equally yoked",and another great poem. Enjoyed it, a "5"

Posted 17 Feb 2014 10:35
This shows a growing maturity and recognition of "self" ... excellent piece that is well done! Thank you again..."5"+++


Posted 09 Feb 2014 23:18
beautiful writing!! The heart is stronger than we think!!

Posted 09 Feb 2014 17:47
Gorgeous writing, great poem!

Posted 07 Feb 2014 02:37
You have a beautiful heart, Lovely writing...
Posted 06 Feb 2014 16:36
The aftershock of a breakup beautifully expressed.. Taking off my coat of anger! DEEP!!

Posted 06 Feb 2014 15:51
Yes, this is very heartfelt and beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 06 Feb 2014 15:22
WOW! I love your work Possibly! So beautifully written. xoxo

Posted 05 Feb 2014 18:07
heartfelt and wonderful. Thank-you
Posted 03 Feb 2014 11:23
So Excellent .....yes yes yes ... when it all comes down to's about the heart ...for sure !!!! Thank you :-)
Posted 03 Feb 2014 09:04
This is truly beautiful. I like that it is both weak and strong, it is sad with loss bit beautiful with acceptance. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 03 Feb 2014 08:28
A very refreshing writing and well received by me . Loved it
Posted 03 Feb 2014 07:02
What pain and how positively concluded. 5

Posted 03 Feb 2014 06:44
Wow, what a beautiful prose, Tamar. This was just lovely. Loss, acceptance, and moving on. Great stuff.

Posted 03 Feb 2014 06:42
This is a beautiful and lovely poem. 5
Posted 03 Feb 2014 05:10
Writing is always cathartic. Well written - very communicative. Life does continue - it is never the same and we are never the same - but it does continue. Be ye equallly yoked.
Posted 03 Feb 2014 00:27
Possibly; this is so deep that it must come from life and not simply conjured from thoughts of fiction. This is a great place for your literature; in real life you would be so guarded; you can wear your heart on your sleeve here.

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