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Armed again

I will not be denied. I will not be crushed.
My helmet my armour my sword my shield
All of these you took from me
I opened my heart up to you
The love I showed was always true

I confided in you and told you things
Thoughts that only a loving heart brings
I gave it my all because I loved you so
Maybe that was too much for you

It was not the breakup that made me mad
It was not the heartache that made me sad
What tore me up so deep inside
Were the words that made me hide

What I told you was used against me
Destroying the person I was longing to be
I tried to rise up from the fall
But it seemed you enjoyed watching me crawl

But now I tower above all men
Back to you the words I send
My helmet my armour my sword my shield
All of these now brought back to me

A massive thanks to Racking for helping me with the editing. MWAH!

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Posted 14 Aug 2012 17:25
A poem of survival....coming out of it...stronger
Posted 03 Aug 2012 07:42
Nicely done Elit..
Posted 01 Aug 2012 01:46
It's very good powerful words. Powerful meaning. It's a strong poem, the strongest I've seen in a while. Thank you for sharing X

Posted 29 Jul 2012 08:26
Well, I am a fan .... of both you and your writing! Wonderfully open, strong and resilient words that flow so very well. Thank you, Elit, again!!

Posted 29 Jul 2012 01:46
Nice done Elit!!
Posted 29 Jul 2012 00:05
Sweet honest strong words... You loved, You lost... but You rose above! x

Posted 28 Jul 2012 23:55
Och du som trodde att du inte kunde skriva dikter. Jag är väldigt imponerad och stolt över dig. Bra gjort!

Posted 28 Jul 2012 19:22
Can I say I told you so now.... I TOLD YOU SO!!!
Love the true emtional of sorrow but also moving on with your life
p.s. Thanks for the little line but I'm just glad you finally published.

Posted 28 Jul 2012 19:15
That's how you Know a real man - he acknowledges his hurt, and then he stand tall and walks forward.

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