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Aussie_kitty77

Awakening



Awakening to find you gone

The cold sheets

Saying it had been awhile.

When we went to bed

Everything seemed fine.

Wondering what I had done

To make you want to leave,

Especially in the dead of night.

Sure, I had heard the rumours.

The gossip

That you were seeing others.

I wish, if that was true

You would have came to me

And told me you wanted to leave.

Sure I would have been hurt

But at least I could move on

Knowing we were through.

All I have now are questions

Insecurities

And a deep pain

In my broken heart.

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Comments(15)

Puppy
Posted 15 Feb 2014 22:00
Oh wow. Very sad. Hey nothing like adopting a new puppy to make you smile.
Chanel
Posted 15 Feb 2014 21:48
Painful ... Beautifully written.

Banes1
Posted 21 Sep 2013 17:58
AWESOME!

asleep
Posted 16 Sep 2013 16:27
I wish you all the best in love and life! Thank you for sharing this. I know it was not easy. A sad but beautiful writing. 5+++

Rick
HK4167
Posted 08 Sep 2013 16:53
So beautiful yet so sad. The heart breaking emotions are veyr well delivered in this nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Katje
Posted 07 Sep 2013 01:16
Oh, my. I don't know what I could say that hasn't already been said. So sad, and poignant. Amazing. It sounds too emotional for this to be something randomly inspired. 5+
ineedfun1
Posted 06 Sep 2013 23:23
I shed a tear

ace_of_hearts
Posted 06 Sep 2013 16:04
OH!! This is a heart breaker!!!
Americanheart
Posted 06 Sep 2013 15:40
Beautiful

buttercup2u
Posted 06 Sep 2013 08:48
bittersweet but beautiful

adagio_sabadicus
Posted 06 Sep 2013 07:49
I get the feeling that you are writing from experiences. Now I think I have a better understanding of you. It goes without saying, I can read into it both warmth and chill in the air. That said..its a large 5.
TheSensualLady
Posted 06 Sep 2013 06:34
Heartbreaking and poignant. Your emotional pain is expressed well. 5

Mysteria27
Posted 06 Sep 2013 05:20
I can feel your pain through this poem. So emotional and intense. Beautifully written. Excellent...5

Willyc2licu
Posted 06 Sep 2013 04:48
Such tristesse - lovely poem about loss.
nazhinaz
Posted 06 Sep 2013 04:33
Beautiful. Heart breaking. 5
 

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